1. Hard (4,75 stars, 314 notes)
2. Normal (2,65 stars, 153 notes)
3. soyaH's Taiko (4,89 stars, 703 notes)
4. Tony's Easy (1,88 stars, 156 notes)

Tony wrote:

http://puu.sh/f8ev
diff, without hitsounds atm

1. general: delete the osb file and full submit~
   
   
   

   [Tony's Easy]

   nothing to poke~
   
   

   [Normal]

   1. 00:53:197 (6) - NC~
   2. 01:06:921 (3) - ^
   3. 01:16:785 (4) - 2 grip down
   4. 01:17:214 (5,6) - fix the spacing ~
   5. 01:39:086 (4) - 1 grip up and right to = the two~
   6. 01:59:458 (4,5) - useless notes, delete them and start the spinner here 01:59:886 - and ends here 02:02:674 -
   7. 02:06:963 (4) - NC~
   8. 02:20:687 (3) - 1 grip right~
   9. 02:22:402 (4) - fix the spacing after that~
   
   

   [Hard]

   Nice diff, i like it \:D/
   
   Nice map and good luck with getting it ranked :3

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,0
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 0,128,192
Combo4 : 250,154,84

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Well, that's all for now.
I'm a little tired
Good Luck with your map

Revengexsoyah wrote:

try my diffie


and star

Nymph wrote:

soyaH's Taiko:
Issue
01:17:643 (4) - why there are 2 notes at the same time?
01:18:071 (5) - ^
01:18:500 (8) - ^

1. 00:50:624 (5,1) - Perhaps curve (5) and make (1) encircle (5)'s end? Like this:
   
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   [img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/241568[/img]
2. 01:02:632 (2) - I wonder, why no clap here? Clap fits much here imo
3. 01:03:490 (3) - The slider-tick isn't in the center, and the slider's end is a bit too the left compared with the slider's start. It's not a big problem actually (:
4. 01:05:205 (1,2) - idk... Rather than just a straight slider, some linear curve twist looks better here imo:
   
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   [img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/241571[/img]
5. 01:15:498 (2) - One grid left, to make (1,2) and (2,3)'s spacing equal
6. 01:15:927 (3) - It's kinda weird for me, this finish isn't placed on the downbeat (2). Well, sounds fine as is though
7. 01:20:645 (3,4) - (optional) For me, you can reduce (3) by two repeats, and add another slider 1/1 after so you can arrange like this :
   
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8. 01:42:946 (1,2) - To keep the whistle consistent, the whistles should be placed on both slider's end, actually. If you don't follow this, at least remove the whistle on (1)'s start, because there's already one 1/1 before (a whistle so soon after before doesn't blend really well, imo)
9. 01:52:810 (5) - Move this few grids down and left so you can arrange like this? (if you look carefully, (1),(2),(5),(1) will form a pseudo-hexagon pattern this way)
   
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10. 02:12:110 (3) - Move the clap to (4). Feels awkward here
11. 02:18:543 (3,4,5) - Move (4) few grids down to form an arc? Plays better this way imo
12. 02:23:260 (5) - (optional) Make this encircle (1)'s start?
13. 02:27:120 (3) - No clap here? ><

1. 00:44:619 (1) - (optional) Make this slider wave neater?
   
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2. 00:45:906 (2) - I think it's better to place it on the bottom, so (1,2,3,4) will form a diamond pattern (there's still much space downward :3)
3. 00:54:912 (1,3) - Slider wave is okay to use here, but I prefer to make it encircle (2), with (2)'s approachcircle to guide encircling:
   
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4. 01:00:059 (3,4) - The spacing here, I wonder... It seems like you're forcing this slider. imo it's better to move 00:59:201 (2) more downward so you can keep the vertical symmetry going here (although it sacrifices the stack >_<)
5. 01:01:774 (1) - Considering you're symmetry-mapping here : Move the endpoint two grids lv4 left (x will be on 136, although if you want it to be perfect, x should be on 134 without grid snap)
6. 01:03:490 (3) - Same here, but just simply copy-paste from (1) when you're done with above
7. 01:04:776 (4) - Hmm, spacing error? Not that hard to catch though
8. 01:07:350 (4,5,6) - I personally dislike how (4) touches 01:05:849 (2). I prefer to create this pattern here:
   
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9. 01:16:785 (4) - Considering the previous 01:15:498 (1,2) forms a straight line, make (3,4) forms a straight line also?
10. 01:37:800 (3) - Slidertick isn't in the center, but not a major problem (:
11. 01:51:309 (2) - I really recommend to add whistle here, fits the synth much :3
12. 01:59:243 (4) - I wonder, why not keep consistent with the symmetry here (copy-paste 01:56:027 (6) and CTRL-H here) ?
13. 02:05:247 (3) - Well, move the clap to slider's end? Clap here isn't supposed to be on the red tick...
14. 02:16:398 (5) - (optional) Curve this a bit encircling (1)? (your previous sliders here are mostly curved, so why not curve this one also)
    
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15. 02:39:771 (3,4) - You might want to add whistle to these two, to build up more variation from the hitsound

1. 00:42:904 (1,2) - Curve these two on an opposite direction, to create more flow?
   
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2. 00:46:335 (1) - Is this moved to the right a bit unintentionally? Because this kind of spacing could give an illusion this is actually 3/4 apart
3. 01:00:059 (1) - Should be moved one grid down and left, so (1,2,3,4,1) will form a better diagonal line
4. 01:04:562 (8,9) - Rather than stacking (9,10), I prefer to make (8,9) as a single slider. Not something you have to fix though
5. 01:13:783 (1) - I wonder, why not just copy-paste the previous (1) and CTRL+J here?
6. 01:23:540 (4) - Sounds a lot better if placed 1/4 earlier. You might want to create a 1/4 slider on 01:23:540 though
7. 01:27:507 (1) - Considering 01:25:791 (1)'s and 01:29:222 (1)'s shape, single straight slider fits better here imo
8. 01:33:510 (3) - Finish on slider's start also, to accompany the cymbal from the song?
9. 01:42:946 (x) - I highly recommend to add a circle here. 5/4 delay between notes sounds awkward, plus, the loud bass sound here should be mapped imo :3
10. 01:47:664 (4) - (optional) Put this on (1)' start, and then CTRL+H to keep symmetry here?
11. 01:51:523 (1,2) - They aren't perfectly stacked. Barely noticeable, though
12. 01:57:849 (2,3) - You can arrange like this, to avoid (3) touching both (1) and (4):
    
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13. 02:07:821 (4,5,6) - Rather than simple 1/2s, why not follow the synth also as you previously did here?
14. 02:12:324 (4,5,6) - Due to the stack's nature, (4) is touching (3). Repeating slider here instead?
    
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15. 02:26:905 (6) - (optional) You can add clap here also, to build more power from the hitsound

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

I feel your timing is a bit off, try this

139.94, 41207

General:
No taiko background
Set easy's cooldown to 0 and no letterbox

Normal:
00:41:187 (1) - unsnapped