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Shihoko Hirata feat. Yumi Kawamura - Key Plus Words (TV Size

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HakuNoKaemi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunedì 31 dicembre 2012 at 13:37:47

Artist: Shihoko Hirata feat. Yumi Kawamura
Title: Key Plus Words (TV Size)
Source: Persona 4 The Animation
Tags: OnosakiHito Maya-kira Lilac Kanpakyin Niva Atlus Opening 2 Yu Narukami Yosuke Hanamura Yukiko Amagi Chie Satonaka Kanji Tatsumi Rise Kujikawa Teddie Naoto Shirogane Shadow Velvet Room Arcana Tarot Thoth
BPM: 174
Filesize: 24638kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3,37 stars, 118 notes)
  2. Haku No Okami (5 stars, 290 notes)
  3. Kanpakyin's Taiko Muzukashii (4,83 stars, 370 notes)
  4. Lily Petals (5 stars, 303 notes)
  5. Maya's Beginner (1,33 stars, 70 notes)
  6. Niva's Hard (4,88 stars, 235 notes)
  7. Normal (4,42 stars, 178 notes)
  8. Ono's Taiko Oni (4,94 stars, 426 notes)
Download: Shihoko Hirata feat. Yumi Kawamura - Key Plus Words (TV Size)
Download: Shihoko Hirata feat. Yumi Kawamura - Key Plus Words (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Beginner - Full By Maya-kira
Easy - Full ( At Global Game Jam in about 3 hours )
Normal - Full ( about 3 hours and half of late night mapping :D )
Hard - Full By Niva
Lily Petals - Full By Lilac
Haku No Okami - Full (argh! hidden power!)

Taiko Muzukashii By kampakyin - Full
Taiko Oni By OnosakiHito - Full

Skin taken from Sallad4Ever Pursuing My True Self map. The parts of it were made by Astom, Sallad4Ever and DawnII, so thank them! Added and tweaked some parts by me too!

Spread Info:
(Standard)
Score
-Maya's Beginner 336,112
-Easy 573,946
-Normal 1,383,222
-Niva's Hard 2,863,142
-Lily Petals 3,484,434
-Haku No Okami 4,641,730
Combo
-Maya's Beginner 353
-Easy 362
-Normal 408
-Niva's Hard 496
-Lily Petals 462
-Haku No Okami 519
Star Rating
-Maya's Beginner 1.33
-Easy 3.37
-Normal 4.42
-Niva's Hard 4.88
-Lily Petals 5.00
-Haku No Okami 5.00 (5.03 in Info page)
HP-CS-AR-OD
-Maya's Beginner 1-3-2-1
-Easy 2-3-3-2
-Normal 3-4-5-4
-Niva's Hard 5-4-6-5
-Lily Petals 6-4-8-6
-Haku No Okami 8-5-8-8

(Taiko)
Score
-Kampakyin's Taiko Muzukashii 413,900
-Ono's Taiko Oni 527,400
Combo
-Kampakyin's Taiko Muzukashii 369
-Ono's Taiko Oni 423
Settings(HP-OD-SV)
-Kampakyin's Taiko Muzukashii 5-5-1,4
-Ono's Taiko Oni 6-6-1,4
Niva
Done ~

btw, I always failed when redownloading this map with video...
So this map is based on your old ver ~ :3

Download: Shihoko Hirata & Yumi Kawamura - Key Plus Words(TV Size) (HakuNoKaemi) [Niva's Hard].osu
Maya-kira
beginner => can be accepted here too? o3o
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
Yes You can
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HakuNoKaemi
Nice work Niva-kun :D
OnosakiHito
Requested Taiko guest diff. finished. Hope you and other people like it.



Download: Shihoko Hirata feat. Yumi Kawamura - Key Plus Words (TV Size) (HakuNoKaemi) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
Maya-kira
idk whats wrong but I can't download this D:
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HakuNoKaemi
It give some message ?
Maya-kira
something like "unable to load mp3" maybe niichan should reupload?
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HakuNoKaemi
Corrected the problem, wallpaper name was really long
Maya-kira
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HakuNoKaemi
Inserted !
kanpakyin
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HakuNoKaemi
thank :3
Crok425
Last time I checked, I think that it was only allowed to between three to six diffs... you're breaking the number.

EDIT: Wait... I checked again, and it was eight, sorry about that ^^U
Doodley
Hey hey, here we go, my friend. I've got a mod for you and it's right here, so let's do this. Red means I highly recommend changing it, blue means it's a small suggestion, pink means it's cosmetic such as hitsounds.. Of course, I will not be modding Taiko difficulties. All suggestions are up to you whether or not you want to change them.

General Notes
You might want to skin the slider ball. It seems that you've got everything skinned except that, and it clashes with the skin I'm using. Seriously, my slider ball is a big blue head. It looks kinda weird. You can, of course, just use the default, but I don't think that will look good either. I would skin it for you but I don't know much about Persona.
Make your slider return arrow a bit more noticeable, it's difficult to see at the time.
I won't be modding Haku No Okami much at all because I can't play it properly, but I'm going to try anyway.
Any reason it goes Easy, Normal, Hard, Lily Petals, Haku No Okami? Either follow a theme, or just make the last two Insane and Insane+ or whatever.


Haku No Okami
As I cannot play this difficulty, take everything I say with a grain of salt.
I'm sure you're aware, but unpredictable speed changes with sliders is typically an unrankable attribute with maps. Although, I could be wrong, given this is an Insane+ or whatever you crazy kids call it, it could probably be allowed knowing it's the absolute hardest difficulty. Ask an MAT/BAT about it.
00:56:516 - Pretty much impossible to see with the overlap. Avoid this.
01:02:895 - ^
01:06:344 - ^ Difficult to see.
01:09:275 (6, 7, 8) - Total death jump. Impossible to predict. Hard to see the (1), might catch folks by surprise.
01:14:102 (7, 8, 9) - Why is this combo here?
01:28:413 - Also tough to see.
Can't see any other problems without playing it. You'll need someone who can play difficulties such as these to mod it. Just try and fix some of the overlapping sliders.

Lily Petals
This is also somewhat difficult for me to play, but I do my best, dammit!
I know this is a pretty tough difficulty, but try to avoid so many damn jumps. None of them seem to match the song, which is the whole point to jumps. Ask yourself if they match the song or move them closer. These are all over the place so I don't feel any need to point them out.
Combo colors are inconsistent with the other difficulties. Seems to be only this one that has different colors. I can tell you're rolling a theme here with the colors, as they match the video, but do that in the other difficulties too.
Brighten the brown color a bit, it's kinda ugly.
00:17:550 (2, 3, 1, 2, 3) - Weird jump. See, (3) and (1) are separated by one beat like all the others, yet the spacing between them does not show this, as they look very close. I can see why it would be fine, given that the separation begins with a new combo, and I did pick up on this when I first played, but it's still very confusing. Move them closer?
00:21:344 - Curve this slider like the others.
01:08:930 (2, 3, 4) - Move these around so they're a bit easier to predict? Also a pretty boring pattern.
01:09:447 - Don't repeat and do the next two following suggestions if you do so...
^ 01:10:137 - New note.
^ 01:10:482 - New note. Much more interesting than a twice repeating slider, yeah?
01:15:309 (4end, 5) - Pretty intense jump for not having any significant match in the song.
01:18:240 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Weird spacing. Move them farther apart. Looks like they're closer according to earlier spacing.
01:23:240 (1) - Total nazi here, but perhaps center this?

Niva's Hard
Try to avoid so many jumps on Hard. Jumps are fine, just not so many when they don't match the song. There's no reason for them to be there.
00:11:171 (4) - Stupid drumroll slider. Pretty tough to see with it's placement and how short it is. Replace it with three notes, perhaps?
00:16:171 (1) - No new combo. Then...
^ 00:17:033 (2) - New combo.
00:22:206 (3) - Another dumb drumroll slider.

Normal
00:00:654 (2) - Any reason this beat isn't stacked?
00:12:723 (4, 5) - Don't stack this given it's a whole beat apart. Throws me off.
00:25:482 - Seems to be pretty hidden.
01:03:585 (2) - Weird slider. There are sliders that are similar to this, but much more jagged. Move the points around a little.
00:39:102 (2, 3) - Don't stack these.
01:04:964 (5) - Move this somewhere else, as it overlaps the next slider.
01:04:792 (5) - Remove this note.

Easy
Don't stack notes underneath sliders on Easy difficulties.
00:12:033 (1) - This slider is probably too close to the spinner on the timeline
Not too many problems besides some stacking.

Maya's Beginner
I'm glad you made this difficulty, as the current Easy is too hard to be the Easiest difficulty. No problems. Nice job.

That's all.
Kurokami
Here some mod, cause i like this song. :3
These are just suggestions.

General

  1. Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
    SPOILER
    [Easy] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 00:00:482, ends on 00:00:740
    Kiai #2: Starts on 00:05:999, ends on 00:06:344
    Kiai #3: Starts on 00:50:138, ends on 01:17:895

    [Haku No Okami] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 00:00:482, ends on 00:00:826
    Kiai #2: Starts on 00:05:999, ends on 00:06:344
    Kiai #3: Starts on 00:50:482, ends on 01:18:068

    [Kanpakyin's Taiko Muzukashii] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:138, ends on 01:20:482

    [Lily Petals] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:138, ends on 01:17:895

    [Maya's Beginner] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:138, ends on 01:17:378

    [Niva's Hard] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:138, ends on 01:17:895

    [Normal] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 00:00:482, ends on 00:00:826
    Kiai #2: Starts on 00:05:999, ends on 00:06:344
    Kiai #3: Starts on 00:50:482, ends on 01:17:895

    [Ono's Taiko Oni] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:138, ends on 01:20:482
  2. Skin
    SPOILER
    comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 222x768).
    comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 222x768).
    comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 222x768).
    comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 222x768).
    comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 222x768).
    comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 222x768).
    comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 222x768).
    comboburst.png's dimensions must not be larger than 500x767 (currently 222x768).
    hit0.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 148x101).
    hit50.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 98x70).
    hit100.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 125x70).
    hit100k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 170x72).

Maya's Beginner

  1. 00:13:240 (2) - x:136, y:272 looks better
  2. 00:54:275 (3) - x:152, y:216 or the next slider

Easy

  1. 00:14:275 (3) - you can't put notes below the sliders on easy (if I know right)
  2. Some similar ^, but its a good diff. :3
Since you have an easiest diff I think these are stay as they are now.

Normal

  1. hp4, ar5, od4
  2. 00:00:482 (1) - x:144, y:128 looks better
  3. 00:05:999 (1) - x:264, y:196 ^

Lily Petals

  1. difficulty settings are unbalanced, try hp6, od6

Haku No Okami

  1. 00:05:999 (1) - not stacked completely
    00:14:964 (1) - x:156, y:164
    00:15:998 (2) - not stacked
    00:30:137 (7) - stack with the previous slider
    00:30:654 (9) - not stacked
Even if they are on purpose, they are looks bad.

That's all. Good mapset, good luck. Star~
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
  1. Skin Upgraded
  2. Lily Petals is a guest by Lilac, differently, Haku No Okami it's a mixed reference, game and an old guest of mine
  3. Haku No Okami mod don't followed. why? Totally ranted
  4. Only 2 suggestions followed.
  5. Listem to music more: you pretty much don't hear many instruments many times
Niva gaved the authorisation to accept/refuse mod to his map
  1. drumroll sliders are PERFECTLY fine, hear the drumroll into the music, and still ... you did mod harder diffs first, so you should've hear the streams
  2. Ok for the NC
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  1. Everything you say look worser while playing(normal stacking make the patterns ugly while playing in those parts)
  2. Stack in easy unrankability is a bullshit I won't permit to be taken as rule. But as now is rankable.
Ryu_old
From Ryu's quueeueee~! :3

NICE Skin !!

Easy:

  • 00:13:585 - 00:13:930 - slider
    00:14:275 - 00:14:447 - ^
    00:14:792 - note
    00:14:964 - ^
    00:20:482 - ^
    00:21:171 - 00:21:344 - slider
    00:21:688 - note
    00:22:033 - 00:22:378 - slider.


Normal:

  • Size circle - 1
Lily Petals:

  • 01:03:930 - 01:04:275 - Slider
    01:04:619 - note
    01:04:792 - 01:05:137 - slider 1 repeat.
The rest diffs are good enough for me~~

Good luck ! :3/
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