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Jolin Tsai - Dancing Diva

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Topic Starter
Breeze
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年2月19日 at 1:04:08

Artist: Jolin Tsai
Title: Dancing Diva
Tags: Cai Yilin Wu Niang C-Pop Pink Agate
BPM: 124
Filesize: 6437kb
Play Time: 02:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Agate's Normal (2.1 stars, 158 notes)
  2. Hard (4.71 stars, 361 notes)
Download: Jolin Tsai - Dancing Diva
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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21st map, 蔡依林 - 舞娘
[Agate] By Pink_Agate
你有看见那些滑条在旋转着跳舞吗?
Have you seen those sliders rotating and dancing?
Pink Agate
重新编辑了一下占个前排 :)
witwist
我去。还真有在做。占个前排^__^
hard的有些滑条形状太奇葩了*__*
shia的2:19:845貌似没break
Pink Agate


有C-POP这种概念吗?只听过K-POP和J-POP,C-POP这种说法好像太牵强了,不是华人流行音乐都这么叫法吧?
dete_lynn
hard的,我新手,讲错别打

00:03:273 - 是不是可以加个may need a note here
00:06:418 -
00:07:265 - 喔喔喔开始了异形滑条mutant sliders
00:12:345 - 对这种我最不拿手了(shrug)
00:26:257 - 短滑条和圈在一起我经常看不清difficult to see short sliders next to notes
00:31:095 - 好老的梗的赶脚maybe too old
00:35:692 - 还是看不清can't see clearly
01:08:353 - 这两个没有那么异形了稍微舒服点not so mutant like the former ones
01:14:644 - 可能需要换色may need new combo here
01:15:369 - 同上same as above
01:29:402 - 同看不清can't see clearly ag
01:31:700 - 总觉得放错节拍了要不干脆改了或者去掉feel like a wrong place
01:36:176 - 需要换色may need nc
01:37:386 - 同上same as above
01:45:128 - 同上
01:54:321 - 这梗不错学到了I'll steal your idea
02:41:740 - 换色比较好may need nc
Topic Starter
Breeze

dete_lynn wrote:

hard的,我新手,讲错别打

00:03:273 - 是不是可以加个may need a note here :arrow: 本来这里是两个3拍的1/4, 因为感觉slider结尾加两个1/4拍的不是那么好打, 所以这里就留空了 EDIT: 还是加了个note
00:06:418 -
00:07:265 - 喔喔喔开始了异形滑条mutant sliders :arrow: :roll: 还好吧...
00:12:345 - 对这种我最不拿手了(shrug)
00:26:257 - 短滑条和圈在一起我经常看不清difficult to see short sliders next to notes :arrow: :/ 多打图就看清了
00:31:095 - 好老的梗的赶脚maybe too old :arrow: 我就是个老mapper\:D/
00:35:692 - 还是看不清can't see clearly
01:08:353 - 这两个没有那么异形了稍微舒服点not so mutant like the former ones
01:14:644 - 可能需要换色may need new combo here :arrow: 为什么?
01:15:369 - 同上same as above
01:29:402 - 同看不清can't see clearly ag
01:31:700 - 总觉得放错节拍了要不干脆改了或者去掉feel like a wrong place :arrow: 背景乐确实这里是有个3/4拍的
01:36:176 - 需要换色may need nc :arrow: why
01:37:386 - 同上same as above
01:45:128 - 同上
01:54:321 - 这梗不错学到了I'll steal your idea :arrow: lol
02:41:740 - 换色比较好may need nc :arrow: why
Thanks for you mod, but no change, so no kds sorry
hoLysoup
蔡依林

you should probably rename the song back to Wu Niang, and not translate it to english.
remember with your perfume map?

oh and remove Cpop? the genre will be set to chinese pop when it's ranked anyway
nimi
Yay, C-pop! ♥

[Skin]
the "center" of the spinner isn't in the center of the image, so while it's rotating it keeps on moving.. this is hard to explain, it's better if you just take a look at it. if you want help on fixing that feel free to ask me :>
if I were you I'd use custom files that match the rest of the skin better for spinner-clear, spinner-osu and spinner-clear, but it's fine if you keep those

[General]
the combo colours should be the same in both diffs (I'd use the ones in Agate in both diffs, but that's up to you)
set the AudioLeadIn in [Agate] to 1985
use the same kiai in both diffs? :>

[Agate]
01:11:982 (5) - super nazi but fix the slider shape to make it fit the previous slider's end. just but the red anchor a bit higher to make it like this http://puu.sh/1xr0l. I also think this slider sounds better finishing at 01:12:950
00:54:684 - make this break like the one in [Hard]
02:48:757 (1) - use distance snap?


[Hard]
00:03:273 (2) - add a note here?

good luck :>
Topic Starter
Breeze

hoLysoup wrote:

蔡依林

you should probably rename the song back to Wu Niang, and not translate it to english.
remember with your perfume map? :arrow: lol, this time should be okay, the ablum cover is write "Dacing diva"


oh and remove Cpop? the genre will be set to chinese pop when it's ranked anyway :arrow: You can use this to search it in-game but not only in the forum. in-game it wouldn't be with a "Chinese" tag
Topic Starter
Breeze

Wiinter wrote:

Yay, C-pop! ♥

[Skin]
the "center" of the spinner isn't in the center of the image, so while it's rotating it keeps on moving.. this is hard to explain, it's better if you just take a look at it. if you want help on fixing that feel free to ask me :> :arrow: fixed
if I were you I'd use custom files that match the rest of the skin better for spinner-clear, spinner-osu and spinner-clear, but it's fine if you keep those :arrow: /o/

[General]
the combo colours should be the same in both diffs (I'd use the ones in Agate in both diffs, but that's up to you)
set the AudioLeadIn in [Agate] to 1985 :arrow: It starts late, no need to add a audio lead-in
use the same kiai in both diffs? :> :arrow: keep it for now

[Hard]
00:03:273 (2) - add a note here? :arrow: k

good luck :>
Thanks
YuZuKi Kenny
舞孃 支持。
Pink Agate

Wiinter wrote:

Yay, C-pop! ♥
[Agate]
01:11:982 (5) - super nazi but fix the slider shape to make it fit the previous slider's end. just but the red anchor a bit higher to make it like this http://puu.sh/1xr0l. I also think this slider sounds better finishing at 01:12:950 :arrow: fixed
00:54:684 - make this break like the one in [Hard] :arrow: fixed
02:48:757 (1) - use distance snap? :arrow: snap no big
HelloSCV
From your queue :D
M4M request~~

SPOILER
AIBat
Missing Skin Files
spinner-background.png

Inconsistency in combo colours
Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn

General
Good~

Agate
01:15:853 (4) - maybe add note here?
02:16:337 (3) - make symetically? -nazi
02:53:595 (1) - how about this? http://puu.sh/1FrnS ( flows better imo )
02:59:402 (4) - touch HP bar :p

Hard
00:26:740 (3,4) - ctrl + G? ( only timing pattern ) 00:26:257 (1,2) - like this
00:46:821 (1) - use 0.22x DS like previous notes?
01:32:789 (4) - add whistle?
01:48:273 (5) - NC here
02:26:499 (3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/1Fri2 - nazi( looks better with 02:28:192 (1) - this too )
02:59:402 (3) - 1 grid up
02:59:886 (4) - 1 grid right

If my mod can't help you ( except AIBat ) please ignore this~
Nice song and interesting slider shape haha
will ranked soon my guess, good luck!
Sonnyc
Hello~

I don't think Audio-lead in inconsistency fix is necessary in this case, right?

Agate:

00:25:531 (5) - This should be NC, due to the patterns afterwards
00:35:208 (3) - A Sudden volume reduction wants and NC imo..
00:55:047 - I don't think you need to push the brak time a little back
02:04:724 (1) - Imo, starting the spinner at 02:04:240 will be better, following the "ahh" instead of lyrics.
02:35:208 (1) - Unlike 02:33:273 (1), this rhythm doesn't fits the song. Make this slider end at 02:35:692
02:59:402 (4) - I usually don't point out offscreens, but I think this can be fixed by making the curve down

Hard:

00:07:023 (3) - I suggest you to delete this note. The rhythm was quite hard to catch, and I don't think there is actually a beat here in the song
00:34:966 (1,2) - a nazi suggestion to make the distance 0.07x
00:47:547 (3,4) - Strong suggestion for a ctrl+G, the current one is too confusing to be readable
00:53:111 (2) - Delete clap at the start
01:29:160 (1,2) - Uhh, similar nazi
01:33:999 (3,4) - Similar Ctrl+G suggestion
01:41:741 (3,4) - ^
02:43:434 (4) - Delete Whistle at the end

Good~~ also lol'ed at the Slider dots~
Kaburagi Kotetsu
Hi~ m4m

[Agate]

00:13:918 (4) - x:160 y:196

00:14:886 (6) - x:420 y:300
 
00:19:240 (1) - Circle, Clap

02:56:499 (1) - x:384 y:328

02:59:402 (4) - touch Hp bar...

[Hard]

00:05:692 (4) - Ctrl + G

01:32:789 (4) - Whistle

01:48:757 (6) - Clap

Star!
RikiH_
Hi, I'm trying to get a m4m from your queue, I hope my mod is useful

Agate

00:19:482 (1) - Too hard to read for a newbie player imo, you can also blanket it better with the following slider
00:21:660 - It feels a bit empty... I'd add a note here
00:25:531 (5,6) - Actually this pattern is a bit ugly, make something like this
00:31:337 (1,2,3,4) - There are too many stacks! Unstack these notes because this pattern is very difficult to read for a newbie player!
00:35:208 (3) - There is a changing in the song, so why don't you add a NC?
00:40:531 (2,3,4,1) - Why this pattern is not symmetric with the center?
00:46:821 (1,2,3,4,5) - The same
00:50:208 (1) - This is partially covered by the previous slider, I don't know if this is rankable
00:53:111 (5) - Move to x:256 y:284
00:54:079 (1,2) - Please, unstack! It's too difficult!
01:10:047 (1,2,1,2) - Always the same thing: too difficult
01:20:692 (1,2) - x:248 y:224 for a better blanket
01:28:918 (1,2) - Swap NCs because there is a change in the song
01:33:273 (1) - This is not perfectly symmetric
01:34:724 (2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Why all of these ae not perfectly symmetric with the center?
02:04:240 - I'd add a note here or start the spinner here
02:19:724 - I'd add a note here or finish the spinner here
02:41:740 (4,5) - Unstack these!
02:48:273 (2,1) - Too difficult
02:59:402 (4) - This hits HP bar, please change it!

Hard

00:02:305 (1,2,3) - No. This rhythm is much better imo
00:05:692 (4) - Ctrl + g? It looks better but the flow is broken... I let you choose
00:11:015 (4,5) - Swap these notes... Put 4 where 5 is and 5 where 4 is
00:16:579 (1,2) - These sliders start on a red line... So weird
00:26:740 (3,4) - Maybe ctrl+g
00:27:224 (1) - This starts on a red line...
00:34:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this strange stacking is intentional, if it isn't stack them
00:39:563 - Add a note
01:03:515 (4,5) - Same as before, swap these notes
01:09:079 (2,1) - I don't know... Maybe you can improve this blanket
01:11:257 (5,6) - They start on a red line... It sounds a bit weird
01:31:821 - Add a note
02:17:547 (3,4,5) - 4 can be blanketted a bit better
02:37:628 - Add a note with clap
02:53:111 - ^

Star, lol.
I hope my modding is useful and you mod my map, I posted it in the queue, bye!
Pink Agate

Sonnyc wrote:

Hello~

I don't think Audio-lead in inconsistency fix is necessary in this case, right?

Agate:

00:25:531 (5) - This should be NC, due to the patterns afterwards :arrow: fix
00:35:208 (3) - A Sudden volume reduction wants and NC imo.. :arrow: fix
00:55:047 - I don't think you need to push the brak time a little back
02:04:724 (1) - Imo, starting the spinner at 02:04:240 will be better, following the "ahh" instead of lyrics. :arrow: fix
02:35:208 (1) - Unlike 02:33:273 (1), this rhythm doesn't fits the song. Make this slider end at 02:35:692
02:59:402 (4) - I usually don't point out offscreens, but I think this can be fixed by making the curve down

~

HelloSCV wrote:

From your queue :D
M4M request~~

Agate
01:15:853 (4) - maybe add note here?
02:16:337 (3) - make symetically? -nazi
02:53:595 (1) - how about this? http://puu.sh/1FrnS ( flows better imo )
02:59:402 (4) - touch HP bar :p :arrow: fix

Kaburagi Kotetsu wrote:

Hi~ m4m

[Agate]

00:13:918 (4) - x:160 y:196

00:14:886 (6) - x:420 y:300
 
00:19:240 (1) - Circle, Clap

02:56:499 (1) - x:384 y:328

02:59:402 (4) - touch Hp bar... :arrow: fix

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi, I'm trying to get a m4m from your queue, I hope my mod is useful

[b]Agate


00:19:482 (1) - Too hard to read for a newbie player imo, you can also blanket it better with the following slider :arrow: I don't konw,but I think is no hard
00:21:660 - It feels a bit empty... I'd add a note here
00:25:531 (5,6) - Actually this pattern is a bit ugly, make something like this
00:31:337 (1,2,3,4) - There are too many stacks! Unstack these notes because this pattern is very difficult to read for a newbie player! :arrow: fix
00:35:208 (3) - There is a changing in the song, so why don't you add a NC?
00:40:531 (2,3,4,1) - Why this pattern is not symmetric with the center?
00:46:821 (1,2,3,4,5) - The same
00:50:208 (1) - This is partially covered by the previous slider, I don't know if this is rankable
00:53:111 (5) - Move to x:256 y:284
00:54:079 (1,2) - Please, unstack! It's too difficult!
01:10:047 (1,2,1,2) - Always the same thing: too difficult
01:20:692 (1,2) - x:248 y:224 for a better blanket
01:28:918 (1,2) - Swap NCs because there is a change in the song
01:33:273 (1) - This is not perfectly symmetric
01:34:724 (2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Why all of these ae not perfectly symmetric with the center? :arrow: fix
02:04:240 - I'd add a note here or start the spinner here
02:19:724 - I'd add a note here or finish the spinner here
02:41:740 (4,5) - Unstack these! :arrow: no hard
02:48:273 (2,1) - Too difficult
02:59:402 (4) - This hits HP bar, please change it! :arrow: fixthanks all ![/b]
Topic Starter
Breeze

HelloSCV wrote:

SPOILER
AIBat
Missing Skin Files
spinner-background.png :arrow: I used jpg

Inconsistency in combo colours :arrow: GD could have a different combo colour
Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn :arrow: 2 diff start from different point

Hard
00:26:740 (3,4) - ctrl + G? ( only timing pattern ) 00:26:257 (1,2) - like this :arrow: here is for symmetry
00:46:821 (1) - use 0.22x DS like previous notes? :arrow: 1 grid up
01:32:789 (4) - add whistle? :arrow: seems no much difference
01:48:273 (5) - NC here :arrow: no jump here
02:26:499 (3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/1Fri2 - nazi( looks better with 02:28:192 (1) - this too ) :arrow: k
02:59:402 (3) - 1 grid up
02:59:886 (4) - 1 grid right

If my mod can't help you ( except AIBat ) please ignore this~
Nice song and interesting slider shape haha
will ranked soon my guess, good luck!

Sonnyc wrote:

Hello~

I don't think Audio-lead in inconsistency fix is necessary in this case, right? :arrow: yea

Hard:

00:07:023 (3) - I suggest you to delete this note. The rhythm was quite hard to catch, and I don't think there is actually a beat here in the song :arrow: reasonable, but I think end at blue tick and start at blue tick 2 beat later seems a little hard to hit, 1 beat space suppose to be a rhythm which easier to catch
00:34:966 (1,2) - a nazi suggestion to make the distance 0.07x :arrow: k
00:47:547 (3,4) - Strong suggestion for a ctrl+G, the current one is too confusing to be readable :arrow: it's symmetry, I think it should not be that hard to read
00:53:111 (2) - Delete clap at the start :arrow: k
01:29:160 (1,2) - Uhh, similar nazi :arrow: k
01:33:999 (3,4) - Similar Ctrl+G suggestion
01:41:741 (3,4) - ^
02:43:434 (4) - Delete Whistle at the end :arrow: k

Good~~ also lol'ed at the Slider dots~

Kaburagi Kotetsu wrote:

Hi~ m4m

[Hard]

00:05:692 (4) - Ctrl + G :arrow: no

01:32:789 (4) - Whistle :arrow: seems no need

01:48:757 (6) - Clap :arrow: why here?

Star!

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi, I'm trying to get a m4m from your queue, I hope my mod is useful

Hard

00:02:305 (1,2,3) - No. This rhythm is much better imo :arrow: no, thanks
00:05:692 (4) - Ctrl + g? It looks better but the flow is broken... I let you choose :arrow: it would make here hard to hit
00:11:015 (4,5) - Swap these notes... Put 4 where 5 is and 5 where 4 is :arrow: k
00:16:579 (1,2) - These sliders start on a red line... So weird :arrow: I don't think so
00:26:740 (3,4) - Maybe ctrl+g :arrow: no, it's for symmetry
00:27:224 (1) - This starts on a red line...
00:34:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this strange stacking is intentional, if it isn't stack them :arrow: stack would make them not in a line
00:39:563 - Add a note :arrow: why here
01:03:515 (4,5) - Same as before, swap these notes :arrow: k
01:09:079 (2,1) - I don't know... Maybe you can improve this blanket :arrow: they should be fine
01:11:257 (5,6) - They start on a red line... It sounds a bit weird
01:31:821 - Add a note :arrow: why here
02:17:547 (3,4,5) - 4 can be blanketted a bit better :arrow: k
02:37:628 - Add a note with clap :arrow: but no vocal here, I'm following vocal
02:53:111 - ^

Star, lol.
I hope my modding is useful and you mod my map, I posted it in the queue, bye!
Thanks all, red part is what I fixed
BeatofIke
Ni Hao Breeze! Mod 4 Mod Request maybe? :I

[General]
  1. Why are your combo colors different? o.o
[Agate]
  1. 00:48:757 (5,1) - OMG dat slider! o.o I love it and all, but I'm a bit bothered with the next overlapping circle afterwards. Not really a necessary fix to be honest, but I suggest readjusting this slider in a way so that this slider and the next hit circle is not overlapping with other.
  2. 01:07:144 (1,2) - Hmm.. Blanklet this maybe? :/
  3. 01:34:724 (2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5) - Is this intentional? This pattern is not perfectly symmetical.
  4. 02:48:273 (2,1) - Very creative and all but dat spacing is large.
[Hard]
  1. 00:37:386 (5,1) - Oh Oh! o.o Not perfectly stacked here.
  2. 02:44:886: You forgot to insert a Kiai Section here. (Just like in Pink Agate's Difficulty)
Otherwise good map overall. I like the music very much!
Good Luck woth your map!
TMAstraf
Insane:
00:44:886 - 00:46:337 Maybe more distance of the Circles
01:33:515 Must near to Circle 1

Thats all =)
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