1. Easy (2,13 stars, 259 notes)
2. Hard (4,91 stars, 599 notes)
3. Normal (2,92 stars, 299 notes)

Bittersweet wrote:

Edit:
[EaZy]
01:11:558 (4) - Tá torta. Como é a única slider torta, fica ADSFADSFADS xD
Eu acho que você podia ter usado um cadim de 1/2, maaaas gosto é igual a cu, entao ~
arrumei o slider e meh.. ficaria a mesma coisa que o normal se eu tivesse usado 1/2. mas sepa eu mude isso mais tarde~

[NormalZ]
03:00:278 (1) - eu totalmente colocaria uma slider 1/1 aqui, e deixava o proximo como dois beats ook <o>
03:04:118 (2) - add beat aqui? addeada

[HardZ]
00:35:078 (1) - ignora que eu comi o nc e vê o que você acha de mudar pra isso: http://puu.sh/hINu amar-te pra sempre aeoihheaoi
00:37:718 (2,3,4) - acho que slider aqui ficaria melhor hm mmk
00:46:118 (4) - faz uma 1/2 com reverse? oki
00:57:158 (9) - slider 1/2 + beat no lugar dessa? acho que dá mais enfase pra silaba "final" da frase. meh.. eu gosto desse slider :c
01:05:318 (1) - eu total usaria esses começos do refrão pra jumpz, tipo http://puu.sh/hIVi (e como a bpm é baixa tu pode largar a mão na distancia [esse posicionamento é só exemplo, claro, você pode fazer como preferir~]) coloquei alguns x3
02:17:078 (2,3) - slider no lugar desses? mhm~

Se você disse que me ama eu edito de novo com mudanças na skin =D

giO- wrote:

Hello Naomi~
Here my M4M as requested


General

03:39:158 - make this kiai start from 03:39:398 - in all diffs
http://puu.sh/hIYS to http://puu.sh/hIZl kk..


Easy

AR +1? k

00:07:238 (1) - remove new combo? or add here 00:11:078 (4) - added at 00:11:078 (1)
00:38:918 (6) - i would delete it and move the slider 00:39:398 (1) - here 00:38:918 - adding a repeat http://puu.sh/hIIY, fix spacing then if you follow that sounds better thanks
00:56:198 (6) - move this point http://puu.sh/hIJx here x:240 y:228 naziii
00:56:198 (6) - remove repeat and add minislider between 00:57:638 - and 00:58:118 - ? sounds better to me http://puu.sh/hIKB ahn.. i like this slider ><
01:11:558 (4) - fix a bit the slider shape, or make something like this http://puu.sh/hILK , points x:364 y: 132 , red point on x:360 y:104, x:288 y:40 , x:196 y:124 uguu ;~; i like this slider >:
01:16:838 - add note? keeping this gap here D: sorry
01:26:438 (7) - like previous suggestion, consider to delete this note and add minislider adding clap at slider start http://puu.sh/hIN9 mmk
01:56:198 (1) - remove new combo and add 01:57:158 (3) - here? nah Dx
02:08:198 (2) - make it shorter and add beat on 02:09:158 - ? http://puu.sh/hIOJ keeping this one ><
02:09:638 (4) - remove whistle and add on 02:09:158 (3) - if you followed previous suggestion
02:24:518 (4) - spacing :v x:352 y:164 and 02:25:958 (1) - spacing too x:476 y:192 , 02:28:358 (2) - also obviously if you moved the previous, so here other point x:472 y:112 , others are fine if i fix only the fist one, the others follow distance snap, so yeah
03:04:358 (1) - remove new combo and add here 03:05:318 (3) -

Normal

00:15:638 (2) - delete this and add one repeat on 00:15:158 (1) - and put note here 00:15:878 - http://puu.sh/hITh [/color]
01:07:718 (4) - improve this slider shape :v [color=#BF80FF]leave my poor slider alone >: haha[/color]
03:00:518 (1,2) - flip horizontally and vertically one time each did something different due to the other mod
03:33:158 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/hIWt ? replaced for a 1/2 slider with a repeat instead
03:35:558 (1,2,3,4) - delete all notes and make 2 sliders http://puu.sh/hIWB nah ><
03:43:238 (1) - make slider like this http://puu.sh/hIZV gonna keep this one for now

Hard

00:15:878 (3) - do it symmetrical, just delete, copy n paste 00:15:638 (2) - on 00:15:878 - and flip orizontally http://puu.sh/hJ2l i like it how it is :c
00:39:158 (1) - make this slider short like that and add clap at the end 00:39:398 - , then add beat here 00:39:158 (1) - http://puu.sh/hJ3U gonna keep this one for now
00:40:358 (4) - add clap instead of whistle yeah, my mistake ><
00:57:878 (10) - new combo and remove on 00:58:358 (1) - i prefer how it sounds like on (10). however, i dont like big combos, so moved it.
01:17:558 (3,4) - add minislider instead of those note http://puu.sh/hJ51 looks and sound better to me :v and add clap on end of minislider 01:17:678 - [done
01:28:118 (5) - fix this, only those points http://puu.sh/hJ6v x:256 y:116 x:304 y:132 mmk
02:32:678 (9) - add clap


Nice map
Good Luck~

hoLysoup wrote:

:>
/me eats you rawr

[General]
Offset of the red line should be 4358 because the first 4 beats is an anacrusis/pick up. This also fixes the kiai times starting on the downbeat. Make sure to check if everything is snapped in the correct places afterwards~ oh, this was really helpful! thanks, fixed~

[Hard]
00:31:238 (1,2) - make the slider end of (1) further away? I thought these 2 had a close rhythm. alskjd ><
01:05:798 (2) - add finish on slider head? oki
01:09:638 (6) - NC? added
01:24:758 (1) - remove NC, NC here: 01:25:478 (2)
02:22:358 (1) - add finish at slider end? added
03:22:118 (7) - NC, remove NC: 03:23:558 (1),
and then NC here again: 03:24:038 (3) ook
03:39:158 (1) - slider end not snapped properly, also add finish at slider end? oops and added

[Normal]
Hp5 mm.. k
00:25:958 (5) - NC? cause combo a bit long ooki
00:48:998 (1) - remove NC removed
01:05:318 (1) - add finish at slider end? added
01:10:598 (4) - NC? cause combo a bit long sigh ok
01:51:878 (1) - make this slider end circle right in the middle of the next slider body? i would, but i can't really, unless i don't use distance snap here, so keeping it like this
02:20:678 (1) - add finish? added
03:05:318 (5) - NC ^
03:39:398 (1) - add finish? ^

[Easy]
Increase OD by 1? ook
01:03:878 (1) - add finish? added
01:25:478 (5) - NC ^
02:10:118 (1) - remove NC but there isn't a new combo here D:
02:20:678 (1) - add finish? replaced it for the clap
03:23:558 (1) - remove NC, NC here: 03:24:038 (2) ook
03:38:438 (6) - add finish on slider end? mhm
03:45:638 (1) - remove NC mmk

That's it~!
very nice, nothing to pick on really

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue



General

[list][*]Use sliderslide2 to mute slide sounds on the first part (00:03:398 ~)?



Easy

00:38:918 (1) - missing a clap on reverse
03:00:278 - Double timing section
03:53:798 ~ Switch this part to spinner like what you did in other diffs


Normal

00:35:078 (1) - Delete sliderwhistle from sliderbody
03:00:278 - Double timing section


Hard


00:15:398 (1) - Whistle
00:19:958 (1) ~ 00:26:438 (10) - need a blanket beat between these note, eg: 00:23:558 -
00:39:158 (1) - suggestion
[attachment=0:09a01]0042.jpg[/attachment:09a01]

00:52:838 (2,4) - missing claps
00:52:838 (2,4) - remove finish
01:31:718 (2) - use same rhythm as 00:44:198 (5,6) -
01:57:278 (5,6) - Spacing error
02:17:078 (2) - missing whistle on the end
02:52:838 (7) - suggestion
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/257763

03:00:278 - Double timing section
03:35:078 (1), 03:36:038 (1) - whistle
03:39:038 (10,1) - spacing error
03:47:438 (2,3) - ^
03:54:158 (1) - This should be start at 03:54:278 -


That's all, good luck

Wiinter wrote:

tá foda de arrumar mods. e como assim não mudei? o_o será que deu problema na sub?

Pereira006 wrote:

Hello~~

IMO -> My opinion

[Easy]

00:11:078 (1) - elimina whistle só no inicio de slider
00:30:758 (5) - adicionar um whistle só inicio de slider
01:14:918 (4) - Eu axo tu esqueceste adicionar clap aqui
01:25:478 (5) - por novo combo color porque parece o voz ta mudar imo
01:27:398 (1) - aqui tambem precisa adicionar clap
02:28:838 (1) - elimina o novo combo depois 02:29:798 (1) - elimina tambem depois 02:30:278 (2) - por novo combo como este http://puu.sh/nEJT isso fika bem combo imo
02:31:718 (3) - pode 1 grid baixo para bem spacing
03:37:478 (5) - por novo combo?

Stuff coo

[Normal]

HP,AR e OD prefero isso http://puu.sh/nEPK isso é bom ao no normal e facil ler gameplay imo
00:03:398 ate 00:34:598 -> está vazio de hitsound é necessario adicionar whistle alguma coisa aqui

00:15:158 (1) - elimina novo combo
01:25:478 (5) - por novo combo tambem? aconteça igual no easy
02:11:078 (1) - posso ver está mau symentrico pode fazer bom symentrico ? imo
03:00:518 (1) - adicionar um whistle só no inicio de slider
03:25:478 (3) - ^ igual
03:27:398 (1) - adicionar um whistle
03:27:398 ate 03:38:918 -> está vazio de hitsound outra vez :/ adiciona whistle alguma coisa pleasse
03:38:438 (2) - adiciona um whistle só no fim de slider

stuff cool

[Hard]

00:47:078 (2) - agapa só whistle
00:48:038 (4) - apaga só whistle no inicio slider
01:32:198 (3) - adiciona um clap só inicio slider
01:35:078 (3) - adiciona um clap
02:23:558 (5) - adiciona um clap so fim de slider
03:24:998 (3) - adiciona um whistle só fim de slider

stuff armazing

[]
Só isso axo eu se tu não percebe alguma o meu mod por favor vem pergunta mim no in-game eu posso tentar explicar.
Desculpa muito hitsound mod mas gameplay e coisa estão muito bem comigo well
Good luck and bye bye

deadbeat wrote:

not a skin expert but
a) might need to make sliderb0-9 118x118, not 128x128 aa i don't think this is necessary D:
b) if your going to add a spinner, you might also need spinner-clear, spinner-osu and spinner-spin done~

other than map. map/skin is cute
good job \:D/

1. VERY nice diff spread/map overall.
2. Very pretty skin! ^____^;
3. Great use of custom hitsounds!

1. 00:20:438 (3,4) - A bit nazi, but... -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/284751
2. 00:51:398 (3,4,5,6) - I would say make this two short sliders?
3. 00:55:358 (4) - Fits on no beat, remove perhaps?
4. 01:00:998 (5) - Align with 3,4
5. 02:15:638 (3,4,5,6) - spacing??? @_____@
6. 03:35:798 (5) - align with 3,4; grid up
7. 03:39:158 (1) - align with 7,8,9,10; grid up
8. 03:50:438 (4) - stack on the end of the slider
9. ^__________^ great diff

1. You see, I couldn't find anything constructive to say. Great diff!

1. For an easy, it's not repetitive, AND it's fun. Amazing job.