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Yoon Do Hyun - The National Korean Anthem(Rock)

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minyeob
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m980
I'm no Offset Wiz. But try 8750 offset. Maybe even 8740.

Normal
00:21:98 (1) - Extend 1/4? Sounds weird how it is right now.
00:24:63 (2) - Move this abit to the left.
00:52:86 (2) - ^
02:00:36 (1) - Extend 1/4?
02:26:83 (1) - ^

Hard
00:21:98 (1) - extend 1/4?
00:24:19 (2) - Move abit to the left.
00:25:95 (5) - Move abit to the right.
01:39:63 (1) - Extend 1/4.
02:26:83 (1) - ^
Pasonia
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Topic Starter
minyeob
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iPro_old
Koreans FTW .......... i Just Had To
vytalibus
[Normal]
00:19:33 (6,2) - Stack them nicely.
01:31:25 (4) - Slider partially covers next slider's return arrow. :(

STARRED GO GO GO
fufe
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minyeob

fufe wrote:

Korea! -Im not sure if these are intentional or not but they are underspaced rather than overspaced to indicate a jump. This is something i do not see much.

00:55:07 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing Me rejectes about the spacing issue
01:34:55 (2) - Lackign a hit?
01:44:48 (1) - spacing
01:54:63 (1) - ^
01:55:73 (3) - ^
01:56:83 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
02:03:45 (6,1,1) - three combos? (1) sounds strange so I removed it.
02:06:10 (8,9,10,11) - spacing
02:10:51 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:23:30 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:39:19 (1) - overspaced
02:49:77 (1) - spacing

I couldnt figure out your new combo system. sometimes they go up to 15 and sometimes they cut out very early even though the song seems pretty consistent in verse itself.

The other difficulties are also irregularly spaced. Maybe I'm just not used to reduced distance snap on slower segments of the map. If it is intentional it seems unnatural and sometimes a bit random to me. Ill revisit this once I know what you are going for.
I know. They're spaced irregularly

But
BAT accepted my irregular spacing
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/2618

Not seemed very helpful but....
thanks for modding! Have a delicious 2 kd~

sonnyc: Thanks for giving a star

eee wrote:

hi mineyob

alright, let's go

(?) this means an opinion, doesn't need to be done (not the blue, just the (?))
[Normal]
00:40:95 (7) - new combo (?), [Normal] combo's shouldn't be so long, just try to keep it below 9,10Kay.
01:44:48 (7) - ^ Kay.
02:03:45 (4) - too close to (5) imo (?) Where is (5)?
02:09:19 (2,3,4) - cool, looks like this ^_^ :)


[Hard]
00:42:27 (11,12,13) - these are overlapped by nine, maybe move them to the right and space accordinglySorry, I won't fix it.
02:48:89 (7) - kinda hidden by (5)'s explosion Fixed.

[Korea!]
00:43:60 (12) - new combo (?)Nah.
01:18:89 (6,7,8) - stack under (4)Kay.
01:29:04 (7) - too close to (6) imo Fixed.
01:34:558 (x) - note goes here, or just stretch 01:33:89 (1) - forward to red tick, (1/2 I think?)I added a note.
01:41:39 (2) - too close to (1) I can kinda see that you didn't use grid snap, but, if this you can easily move this one left and one down level 3 grid. (?) Fixed.
01:43:82 (11) - ^ same here, but close to (10) and can move one grid up instead of down (?)Fixed.
02:22:867 (x) - wanna note here, it sounds cool without one thought (?) Added.
02:48:67 (8) - this was a bit hidden for me, you can move it if you want (?) Nah.

alright, cool
eee thanks for volunteering~

Sushi971 wrote:

Wah~ This is already a polished map....

What I'm going to say is only suggestive.

[Korea]
00:47:13 (2) and 00:48:01 (1) - - stack (2) under (1), it may look prettier Fixed
02:25:07 (5) - new combo? Fixed
02:32:13 (7) - ^ No. I didn't fix this sorry
02:48:01 (5) - ^ ^

That's all I have to say

Starred~
Thanks for modding~
Sonnyc
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mrtn
[normal]
02:02:13 (1,2,3) - this pattern is a bit confusing for a normal. In a hard it's fine but i wouldn't recommend it in normal

[hard]
use grid level 3, nothing seems te be snapped to grid atm.
00:48:01 (1) - align with 4 of previos combo
01:42:28 (4,5) - these aren't aligned properly (not horizontal)

[korea!]
make sure everything is snapped to grid level 3
01:17:79 (4,5) - this looks weird. Move the 5 around so it looks better
02:38:97 (8,1) - this jump feels out of place considering there are no jumps in the rest of the map.


try using some more finishes in all diffis.
fun map star for you ;)
eee
hi mineyob

alright, let's go

(?) this means an opinion, doesn't need to be done (not the blue, just the (?))
[Normal]
00:40:95 (7) - new combo (?), [Normal] combo's shouldn't be so long, just try to keep it below 9,10
01:44:48 (7) - ^
02:03:45 (4) - too close to (5) imo (?)
02:09:19 (2,3,4) - cool, looks like this ^_^


[Hard]
00:42:27 (11,12,13) - these are overlapped by nine, maybe move them to the right and space accordingly
02:48:89 (7) - kinda hidden by (5)'s explosion

[Korea!]
00:43:60 (12) - new combo (?)
01:18:89 (6,7,8) - stack under (4)
01:29:04 (7) - too close to (6) imo
01:34:558 (x) - note goes here, or just stretch 01:33:89 (1) - forward to red tick, (1/2 I think?)
01:41:39 (2) - too close to (1) I can kinda see that you didn't use grid snap, but, if this you can easily move this one left and one down level 3 grid. (?)
01:43:82 (11) - ^ same here, but close to (10) and can move one grid up instead of down (?)
02:22:867 (x) - wanna note here, it sounds cool without one thought (?)
02:48:67 (8) - this was a bit hidden for me, you can move it if you want (?)

alright, cool
Sushi
Wah~ This is already a polished map....

What I'm going to say is only suggestive.

[Korea]
00:47:13 (2) and 00:48:01 (1) - - stack (2) under (1), it may look prettier
02:25:07 (5) - new combo?
02:32:13 (7) - ^
02:48:01 (5) - ^

That's all I have to say

Starred~

Topic Starter
minyeob
Added.

EDIT: Kudosu stars~

Pasonia:
Wow, thanks a lot!
Btw
Where is a mod post? orz

Pasonia
Not a modding post, minyeob.

I have a custom spinner for you; please put these pictures into your song's folder, then FULL-SUBMIT.

Dae Han Min Guk! spinner
Real1
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Topic Starter
minyeob
Accepted.

Blue->Red->Black->White

EDIT: I'm fixing m980's. Don't mod this.
m980
Hmm..

Pasonia was genius about the flag spinner..

Okay onto the actual map.

Difficulty settings seem to be VERY similar. Try to change these around. The only difference in these settings between Hard and Korea! is the HP drain.

Aside from a lot of spacing errors, we meet the same problem you had with your other map (if i recall correctly, it was the DBZ one?) This map doesn't look/feel fun to play.

A bit of repetition would be great. Maybe put in a few jumps. DON'T go too overboard though, as that will ruin your map. Think of fun and original patterns (something even I have trouble with). Try to make the map enjoyable.

If you want me to go more indepth, PM me.
Sonnyc
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Topic Starter
minyeob
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Real1
Well, I think this map was fun... So I disagree with m980. ;)
Sure, maybe some more movement of the mouse could be needed, but it's not at all a bad map!! It's good, and deserves more attention (I know the feeling...)...


I never knew the Korean Anthem could sound so good. It got stuck on me the other day, I was singing it accidentally in a store, Everyone looked. :D :?
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