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sakuzyo - Laplace

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Shiirn
2,896 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Shiirn
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, April 25, 2012 at 9:19:57 PM

Artist: sakuzyo
Title: Laplace
Source: BMS
Tags: BMS of Fighters 2011 deif saten-san nakagawa_kanon dksslqj onosakihito
BPM: 155
Filesize: 11694kb
Play Time: 01:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (5 stars, 417 notes)
  2. Deif's CTB (5 stars, 534 notes)
  3. dksslqj's Hyper (4.99 stars, 258 notes)
  4. Normal (4.14 stars, 129 notes)
  5. Ono's Taiko Oni (4.94 stars, 534 notes)
  6. Saten's Easy (1.55 stars, 95 notes)
Download: sakuzyo - Laplace
Download: sakuzyo - Laplace (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The numbers crawl out of my head
My mind always calculating
And then you step in
The numbers matter less, your touch
Cleaning my mind of clutter,
Granting me peace.
Last edited by Shiirn , edited 14 times in total.
Mercurial
Mercurial
Shiirn, you're doin' it right.
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Easy~~

Download: sakuzyo - Laplace (Shiirn) [Saten's Easy].osu
eXseeD
134 posts
Joined February 2009
eXseeD
God shiirn( ；∀；)
I love the map of your make. I love sakuzyo!!!

If you feel good map, please use them!!


I weak English.I am using the translation site. :(

Download: sakuzyo - Laplace (Shiirn) [eXseeD's Hyper].osu
Last edited by eXseeD , edited 5 times in total.
galvenize
919 posts
Joined June 2010
galvenize
Approved.
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
6,814 posts
Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
Requested Taiko guest diff. finished. o7
I hope you like it.



Download: sakuzyo - Laplace (Shiirn) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
Makar
osu! Alumni
2,258 posts
Joined February 2011
Makar
Request mod~

[General]

  1. Put the guests in the tags... You always seem to forget this silly =w=
  2. Your BG isn't the right ratio, so here:
SPOILER

[Another]

  1. 00:09:534 (1) - I thought sliders like these were unrankable since you can't predict when it will straighten out, but I have no problems with it since its easily playable.
  2. 00:51:340 (1) - Most of the second repeat is covered by the hitburst of the previous note http://puu.sh/mEM2
  3. 01:29:082 (3,4) - Keep consistent spacing here with the stream?
Not much to point out as always~

[Hyper]

  1. 01:04:889 (2) - Hard to tell this has 2 repeats instead of 1 because of the previous slider I think... You could change the previous slider to 3 circles maybe?
Stop being so perfect

[Ono's Taiko]

  1. I admit I usually don't care for your taiko diffs, but this one is really nice. Goodjob~

[Normal]

  1. 00:09:534 (1) - Same thing here that I mentioned in the another, except I think it really should be changed here; I don't think the less experienced players will expect this
  2. 01:08:373 (1) - Don't stack this under (3) please, it just looks confusing
In general I don't like this use of stacking at the end of sliders; It looks confusing imo but I guess its fine

[Saten's Easy]

  1. Maybe use a lower SV at the start?
No complaints here :3

Star~ :3
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Suggestions for days, which I'm pretty sure you're not going to take anyway.

Overall:
What diffs/sections did nakagawa_kanon and dksslqj make? :>. It'd probably be best to put that in the description of the map or something, if you don't want to put it in the diff names :D.

Another:
00:51:340 (1) - Probably change this to something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/276415 . Idunno, I just dislike sliders with lots of repeats, especially in insane maps.
01:19:986 (3) - Idunno, this seems too early in the build-up to revert to 1.0x sliders~. Probably keep it at what the previous slider is at, and then change it later, when the music gets more intense.
01:34:502 (8) - Silly jump :<.

Hyper:
00:21:147 (3) - Kind of unsure about this jump :<.
00:53:857 - 00:57:929: I know this section is supposed to be transitional and not intense and stuff, but it'd be cool if there were like, soft whistles here or stuff to make it sounds less blank :>
01:17:663 - Unneccesary Timing Point

Normal:
00:14:179 (3) - For a normal, this looks a bit weird o-o.
00:28:889 (2) - Add whistle on beginning of slider
00:53:663 - Uneccesary Timing Point
01:05:276 (1) - For a normal, this looks a bit weird o-o.
01:28:115 (4) - ^

Easy:
00:28:115 (1) - Not moe slider! D:.
01:07:599 (5) - Add clap at the end of the slider.
01:08:373 (1) - ^
01:09:921 (2) - ^

Pretty cool.
Copter-kun
399 posts
Joined February 2011
Copter-kun
Saten's Easy

00:28:115 (1) - Maybe reshape it like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/276430

Normal

00:09:534 (1) - Doesn't this slider look a little bit too confusing to Normal players?
00:13:792 (2,3) - I'd avoid this type of overlap. Place (2) somewhere else.
01:05:276 (1,2) - ^
01:28:115 (4,5) - ^
01:39:340 (1,1,1) - These slider placements are rather weird. I suggest you should remove the NC on the last 2 sliders I mentioned and reshape the pattern.

Hyper

00:08:953 (7) - This 1/6 slider doesn't look great. You should try extending it to a 1/2 slider.
00:40:502 (1) - Shape the slider like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/276423
01:12:244 (3) - Remove whistle
01:24:437 (4) - Add a clap
01:26:179 (5) - ^
01:26:953 (1) - ^
01:27:728 (3) - ^

Another

00:22:308 (6,7,8) - Make the pattern like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/276420
00:25:792 (1) - Remove NC. No reason to be there.
01:03:728 (3) - Remove the whistle hitsound.
01:12:244 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Don't like how the slider (1) is placed on the same location to (11). Place the slider on the end of the stream. Maybe compress the stream?
01:27:340 (5) - Remove the clap. The clap in the song isn't placed there.

That is all. Nice map!
Last edited by Copter-kun , edited 1 time in total.
Saten
Global Moderator
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Joined August 2010
Saten
00:28:115 (1) - reshaped

Download: sakuzyo - Laplace (Shiirn) [Saten's Easy].osu
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
here

Download: sakuzyo - Laplace (Shiirn) [Hyper].osu
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Deif
Can I make a CTB difficulty to complete this mapset?
DaxMasterix
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
1,562 posts
Joined February 2010
DaxMasterix

General:

  1. Nothing here..
Saten's Easy:
Unsnapped Green Timing Points
00:14:086 change to 00:14:082
01:42:537 change to 01:42:534
  1. I think you can put 10% more of Audio to all.. except to 100% Obviously ORZ--
  2. 00:05:663 (3) - Remove the Whistle of the Reverse
  3. 00:07:986 (4) - Remove the Whistle
  4. 00:08:760 (1) - Add a Finish to the end of the Slider
  5. 00:11:082 (3) - Remove the Whistle
  6. 00:21:921 (1) - ^
  7. 00:23:470 (3) - ^
  8. 00:24:244 (4) - Remove the Whistle of the Reverse
  9. 00:26:566 (5) - Add a TP with ''S 100%'' And put a Whistle in the note
  10. 00:30:437 (2) - Add a Clap
  11. 00:32:760 (5) - Add a Clap in the end of the Slider
  12. 01:25:405 (2) - Remove Whistle
  13. 01:40:115 (4) - Add a Clap
Normal:
Unsnapped Green Timing Points
00:14:086 change to 00:14:082
01:28:408 change to 01:28:405
01:42:537 change to 01:42:534
  1. I think you can put 10% more of Audio to all.. except to 100% Obviously ORZ--
  2. 00:36:244 (2) - Fix this slider.. Looks.. huh
  3. 00:40:502 (1,2,3) - Bad Pattern.. Touching is B.A.D... Please try make This
    00:41:276 (2) - 1SP = x:348|y:230 / 2SP = x:354|y:170 / 3SP = x:316|y:100 (Grid Snap OFF)
    *After of make the Slider put a copy-paste and Ctrl+h obviously..
  4. 00:59:082 (1,2,3,4) - Touching is B.A.D :( ... Try make This
dksslqj's Hyper:
Unsnapped Green Timing Points
00:14:086 change to 00:14:082
01:28:408 change to 01:28:405
01:42:537 change to 01:42:534
  1. I think you can put 10% more of Audio to all.. except to 100% Obviously ORZ--
  2. 00:03:341 (1,2) - B.A.D Sliderr... Try make retry..
  3. 00:37:792 (2) - Ctrl+r
  4. 00:38:566 (4) - ^
  5. 00:46:308 (2) - ^
  6. 00:55:405 (2) - This Slider Look better with only 3 SP's
  7. 00:58:308 (x) - Add a note
Another:
Unsnapped Green Timing Points
00:14:086 change to 00:14:082
01:28:408 change to 01:28:405
01:42:537 change to 01:42:534
  1. 00:35:371 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
  2. 00:35:468 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
  3. 00:04:115 (3) - Fix this Slider Please..
  4. 00:07:211 (3) - ^ If you make that.. make a Copy-pasta with this..
  5. 00:30:050 (2) - Add a Whistle
  6. 00:44:373 (3,4,5,6,7) - 'IMO' I dont like this tipe of Streams... 'IMO'
  7. 01:34:308 (7,8) - Reduce this Jump
Ono's Taiko Oni:
  1. Change the Audio to 90% or 100%
  2. 00:16:308 (3) to 00:26:566 (1) - This Pattern have a big Jump betwen the notes 00:18:824 (1,1) [In Difficulty & Gameplay] I don't know really but is rare the First time. Is passable but is like.. ''Oh i'm peaceful~.. OH WHAT NO, MISS?'' Only a Imo..
  3. 00:14:179 (x) Add a Note [d]
  4. 01:40:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1)maybe change to This
Ok.. That is all..
Gift
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Deif
Done! Don't forget to add "Catch the Beat" and my name to tags:

Download: sakuzyo - Laplace (Shiirn) [Deif's CTB].osu
Mercurial
Mercurial
Sorry for being Lazy... ;_;

General
Tags: You're missing "Deif" in all diffs.
You must considerate change or detele Combo Colour 1 and 2, They're too confusing with that BG.
Maybe a "Epilepsy Warning" here?


Normal
00:50:566 (3,4,5) Maybe this sliders could be annoying for normal players.
01:29:276 (1,2,1) ^

All for now :3


Keep goin' Shiirn. When I get kudos, I'll give you a star n.n As I've promised.
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3

[general]


  • Settings
  1. add Deif in your tag?
  2. Don't you unify letterbox in all diff?

[Ono's Taiko Oni]


  • Settings
  1. suggest remove video code for Taiko diff when you have Taiko BG.
mapping
  1. 00:50:179 (3) - k?
  2. 00:52:889 (2) - D?
  3. 00:54:437 (3) - ^
  4. 00:55:986 (3) - ^
  5. 00:57:534 (6) - ^
  6. 01:02:760 (1,2,3,4) - dd kd?
  7. 01:42:340 (1,2) - (x)D ?
It's mod rule for 3c. so don't give me KD is ok.
Serval
232 posts
Joined June 2010
Serval
CTB Mod: Requested here

[Deif's CTB]:

Mostly suggestions ~

00:17:082 (12,13,1) - - I don't really like this pattern. It's not really pleasant to play imo. I think something like that (Timeline position: 00:17:082 (12,13,1,2,3,4) - ) would be more pleasant to play. It's only a suggestion you can place triplets where you want but the high spaced note at the end doesn't fit well imo.

01:14:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I think this pattern is a bit crazy. I had a some trouble to FC it due to 01:15:437 (4,5,6) - Maybe you should make look a bit smoother, like stacking 01:15:631 (6) - with 01:15:534 (5) - . It'll make it more intuitive for the hyperdash in 01:15:728 (1) -

01:19:986 (4,5,6) - Not really an issue, but I think a slider return would be more pleasant to play here. Maybe with a x1.25 to add some dynamic to the slider? Just a suggestion !

01:31:211 (8,9,10,11,1) - Well... Like I said for the triplet earlier, I don't really like it. You can either increase or decrease the spacing but like this it's a bit frustrating to play. You don't have to move a lot (you don't even need dash) to get it, but still, you have to move. Increase it if you think there must be a real movement here, or reduce it a bit so it can be catched with the edge of the plate, without moving. It's more a suggestion for this one, cause it fits better compared to triplet @ 00:17:082 (12,13,1) -

01:41:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Some people are going to hate you for that, when it'll be ranked :D. I don't really have issues with it, though I think it's worth mentionning it.
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Deif

Serval wrote:

CTB Mod: Requested here

[Deif's CTB]:

Mostly suggestions ~

00:17:082 (12,13,1) - - I don't really like this pattern. It's not really pleasant to play imo. I think something like that (Timeline position: 00:17:082 (12,13,1,2,3,4) - ) would be more pleasant to play. It's only a suggestion you can place triplets where you want but the high spaced note at the end doesn't fit well imo. (Agreed)

01:14:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I think this pattern is a bit crazy. I had a some trouble to FC it due to 01:15:437 (4,5,6) - Maybe you should make look a bit smoother, like stacking 01:15:631 (6) - with 01:15:534 (5) - . It'll make it more intuitive for the hyperdash in 01:15:728 (1) - (I knew ppl will complain cos of that pattern, inverted (1,2,3) to avoid that ~5x distance)

01:19:986 (4,5,6) - Not really an issue, but I think a slider return would be more pleasant to play here. Maybe with a x1.25 to add some dynamic to the slider? Just a suggestion ! (I've already used 3 different BPMs: 0,5 0,75 and 1x. If I introduce another one, it'll probably become unrankable)

01:31:211 (8,9,10,11,1) - Well... Like I said for the triplet earlier, I don't really like it. You can either increase or decrease the spacing but like this it's a bit frustrating to play. You don't have to move a lot (you don't even need dash) to get it, but still, you have to move. Increase it if you think there must be a real movement here, or reduce it a bit so it can be catched with the edge of the plate, without moving. It's more a suggestion for this one, cause it fits better compared to triplet @ 00:17:082 (12,13,1) - (Nah, I wanted to make an S-shaped pattern there, to change a bit the style)

01:41:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Some people are going to hate you for that, when it'll be ranked :D. I don't really have issues with it, though I think it's worth mentionning it. (Unless someone really hates it, or it's unrankable, I won't change it :3)
Merci beaucoup! I'm sure Shiirn hasn't added that tags yet until this is 100% rankable.

Download: sakuzyo - Laplace (Shiirn) [Deif's CTB].osu
Regou
1,916 posts
Joined July 2010
Regou
Ramdom mod lol
All of them are only suggestions :p
[Another]
00:17:470 (6) - Delete clap
00:18:050 (8) - 1 grid up
01:03:728 (3) - May use 0.5 speed slider,rrrrr
[dksslqj's Hyper]
00:53:663 - Add a note here?
01:31:211 (4) - Try Ctrl+r
[Normal]
00:12:631 (1) - rrr may down 3 grids.Looks better imo.
01:05:663 (2) - Delete the clap hitsound at the end of this slider
01:11:470 (3,1) - rrr
01:40:115 (1) - Delete NC?
[Saten's Easy]
00:41:276 (4) - NC?
Nice mapset :D have my star :)
Agnes
osu! Alumni
1,153 posts
Joined July 2009
Agnes
Hello! Quick touches before a bubble. Will be treating this as if CTB wasn't here and let the ranker truly worry about its rankability.

[General]

In general, all you have is some fixes for green sections. The map should be fine for a bubble other wise.

Saten's Easy

Unsnapped green sections at:
00:14:086
01:42:537

Normal, dksslqj's Hyper, and Another
Unsnapped green sections at:
00:14:086
01:28:408
01:42:537

Any other quizzical things I run into, I'll speak to you on IRC about them.
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