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Mousse T - Horny 98

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Topic Starter
Metroid
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, December 28, 2008 at 6:35:50 PM

Artist: Mousse T
Title: Horny 98
BPM: 122.85
Filesize: 12091kb
Play Time: 03:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.34 stars, 358 notes)
  2. Insane (4.53 stars, 405 notes)
  3. Normal (2.16 stars, 189 notes)
Download: Mousse T - Horny 98
Download: Mousse T - Horny 98 (no video)
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A song I mapped "I'm horny... horny horny horny!"

1st upload- Just the normal stuff with easy and normal
2nd upload- Fixed stuff in easy and normal and added Hard.
3rd upload- Fixed Easy, Normal, and Hard
4th upload- Renamed and fixed all difficulties. Thnx Larto.
5th upload- Did what m980 said Except BG (I can't find one) (I could ask for the Music Video)
6th upload- Added Music Video (I fixed the offset to -600 for video and I'll add a background in soon.)
7th upload- Added a BG of the song's album cover art "Peppermint Jam".
8th upload- Fixed what u said Garlic and Chnaged to light grey in combos.
9th upload- Used awp's set and changed grey to pink and fixed the stuff told to me on IRC
10th upload- Did what foulcoon said and respaced all difficulties.
11th upload- Did what Mog said for Hard and Insane except some stuff (mainly blue ticks).
12th upload- Fixed some stuff I saw in Easy and Hard.
13th upload- Did what Sinistro said and made the sliders in Insane Sin talked about not as confusing.


-Metroid
Gens
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Larto
Hi.

Easy:
00:27:84 (1,2,3) - These sliders sure sound ugly. Make them 1/4 longer and kill the repeat or 1/4 shorter and let the repeat stay.
00:31:75 (1,2,3) - ^

Normal:
Okay I guess

Hard:
01:06:18 (9) - just place this a bit higher and a bit to the right, so it looks better.
01:52:82 (8,9) - I suggest placing them that way that they build straight lines with the other hitcircles in this combo? Looks a looot better.


And I suggest you call "Easy" "Normal", "Normal" "Hard" and "Hard" "Insane".

I guess that's it. I don't like the beatmap itself, but nothing should be TECHNICALLY wrong after that.
m980
Normal
Some of your beats slightly overlap and some don't, but the're still 1/2 from eachother.
00:32:24 (3,4) - Is slightly overlapping.
00:31:75 (1,2) - Isn't overlapping at all.
This was an example. There are plently more of this going on.
Keep spacing consistent

Hard
Keep spacing consistent
Example
00:24:42 (3,4) - Is closer together then 1-2, Still 1/2 beat apart.

Insane
01:21:56 (12) - Intentional right?

Also get a BG.
Topic Starter
Metroid
Did what you said except having a BG So I'll go and ask if some1 can Get me the Music Video
Cyclone
1,-600,"horny98MV.avi"

Video offset is....

GO!
Topic Starter
Metroid
Fixed vid offset and added a BG.
Wizard Of Orz
Normal:
02:48:257 blue (1) seems to be too close to red
03:27:329 same thing
Hard:
01:38:905 (2) is too close to 1
03:25:375 (black and red combos) these are all too close together
Insane:
Seems fine

-change black combo color to grey due the circle that shrinks to tell you when to hit the beat is camoflauged with the huge black J
Topic Starter
Metroid
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
awp
awpset is 4190, and use inherited timing plz

Not done looking at maps but they look pretty fine.

UPDATE: I got no beef with the three difficulties (Normal, Hard, Insane) but you gotta change that grey custom combo colour to something not black or grey. It hides against the background too well.

Footnote: I am glad that this song was mapped. I loved it as a child.
foulcoon
Offset seemed around 4,189 when i first checked, so just go with that or awps.

You make alot of small spacing changes within combos that are somewhat tricky. Could be because of grid snap, but you should still make sure your map is spaced intuitively.

[Insane]
Very first combo - Spacing between 1,2 is different than 2,3
00:23:96 (1,2,3,4) - spacing changes between 3 and 4

I could point out every single tiny spacing change, but you could just go over it yourself and update.

00:39:59 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Annoying overlaps, should fix these.

01:39:91 (3,4,5,6) - Okay so i said i wouldn't point out the spacing errors so much, but this was just too obvious... come on.

You should go through and remove and replace your breaks, since they are starting a bit early.

I'll check the other difficulties later~ (heard the word horny too much in one difficulty)
Mogsy
Modding so you can shut up in IRC.

Insane:
Wow, this is messy. Essentially, clean up the way it looks all around.

-00:24:94 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:27:39 (14) - Make this straight above 12.
-00:28:85 (5) - Okay, this feels wrong. This should be a clicked beat, then the next slider should start 1/2 a beat later and repeat one time less. To pull this off, place the beat where the slider normally starts, then reverse the slider, move it over 1/2 a beat on the timeline, and remove a repeat.
-00:30:32 (6,7,8,9) - Line this up with 5.
-00:51:07 (3) - Nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace.
-00:54:98 (9) - Nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace.
-00:56:69 - There should be a beat here.
-01:02:80 (9) - nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace.
-01:04:50 - There should be a beat here.
-01:04:75 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is messy. Please, for the love of everything right in this world, fix it.
-01:22:33 (1) - Stack on 13.
-01:26:24 (9) - New combo mark.
-01:27:22 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-01:30:15 (7) - New combo mark.
-01:37:96 (4) - nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace
-01:41:87 (9) - ^
-01:43:57 - There should be a beat here.
-01:45:77 (9) - nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace
-01:49:68 (9) - ^
-01:50:17 (1,2) - Respace after the previously mentioned point.
-01:51:39 - There should be a beat here.
-01:57:50 (9) - nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace
-01:59:20 - There should be a beat here.
-02:01:40 (9) - nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace
-02:03:84 (5) - Make this run in a straight, diagonal line with 3 and 4. This just looks idiotic.
-02:05:31 (9) - nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace
-02:05:80 (1,2) - Respace after the previously mentioned point
-02:07:02 - There should be a beat here.
-02:09:22 (1) - Have this start 1 beat later and end 1 beat earlier than it says it should.
-02:16:66 - Beat goes here, stacked on 4.
-02:17:03 (5) - nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace
-02:37:06 (9) - New Combo mark
-02:38:03 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark
-02:40:96 (7) - New Combo mark
-02:48:29 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark, nudge it to the left 1/4 a beat, respace
-02:52:19 (9) - Nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace
-02:53:90 - Beat goes here
-02:56:10 (9) - Nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace
-03:00:01 (9) - ^
-03:01:72 - Beat goes here
-03:07:82 (9) - Nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace
-03:09:53 - Beat goes here
-03:11:73 (9) - Nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace
-03:15:64 (9) - ^
-03:17:35 - Beat goes here
-03:18:32 (6) - Make this not stacked.
-03:27:36 (1) - Remove the new combo mark, nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace

Hard:
Again, messy as hell, fix it.
-00:30:32 (6,7,8,9) - Eww, no. Just...respace this, I can't bear to look at it.
-00:40:08 (3) - Remove the Whistle
-00:46:43 (10) - Alter this, it looks messing.
-00:51:07 (4) - Nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace
-00:53:03 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - So this looks neater, move it directly underneath the fading 1.
-00:56:69 - Beat goes here.
-01:04:54 - ^
-01:07:68 (4,5,6) - Line up with the other rows
-01:09:88 (13) - Stack with the fading out beat.
-01:26:24 (9) - New Combo mark
-01:27:22 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark
-01:30:15 (7) - New Combo mark
-01:37:96 (4) - Nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace
-01:43:57 - Beat goes here
-01:51:39 - ^
-01:58:47 (2) - Make this beat not be on a note that's fading out.
-01:59:20 - Beat goes here
-02:07:02 - ^
-02:09:22 (1) - Alter this so it's like Insane.
-02:17:03 (5) - Nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace, center it.
-02:37:05 (9) - New combo mark
-02:38:03 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark
-02:40:96 (7) - New combo mark
-02:48:29 (1) - Remove New Combo mark, nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace
-02:49:26 (2) - Placement of this is messy.
-02:50:24 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Respace this, it's wrong and messy.
-02:53:90 - Beat goes here.
-02:54:15 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Messy and wrong spacing, respace it.
-3:01:72 - Beat goes here.
-03:09:53 - ^
-03:17:35 - ^
-03:27:36 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark, nudge to the left 1/4 a beat, respace.

Haven't looked at the other difficulty. Fix this stuff for now.
Topic Starter
Metroid
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sinistro
Normal
01:04:75 (4) and 03:17:59 (4): the preceding hit circle hides the repeat symbol of these sliders. On higher difficulties I might have let this slide, but not on Normal, I'm afraid. Move things around so you can see the repeat symbol at all times.

Insane
00:29:09 (6,7,8,9,10) - It's near impossible to tell which is a slider's beginning here and which a hit circle without memorisation. I suppose the main reason is the 00:29:09 (6) and 00:31:05 (10) slider paths overlapping each other, so make them seem at least a little distinct.
Topic Starter
Metroid
Did what you said Sin.
kingcobra52
Me likes, so me bubbles. :)
Sinistro
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