1. Black Snow (4,98 stars, 552 notes)
2. Red Snow (4,86 stars, 468 notes)
3. White Snow (2,91 stars, 272 notes)

kazumikos wrote:

oh... this is great =o
can i make a guest diff plz?

giuyl-nyah wrote:

the violin dubstep! i LOVE so much it. i can try to make a easy?

Katty Pie wrote:

giuyl-nyah wrote:

the violin dubstep! i LOVE so much it. i can try to make a easy?

i think yes... but later >w<

kazumikos wrote:

My internet's fixed~~ ;_;
oh im so happy

anyway here's my diff
After a while considering i decided to use ar 8, since my map got quite lots of overlap, ar 7 will be hard to read
thx ^^

-Bakari- wrote:

yo~

Storyboard
копия (3) snow.png - nice name, da

General
обрежь ты мп3

White Snow
00:34:093 (3) - неаккуратный Нормальный :3
00:37:950 (1,2,3) - слегка неровная обводка не ври :3
00:40:093 (1) - оно тут надо? тот тже вопрос к следующему слайдеру. Я про НК если чоС первого убрала :3
00:47:807 (4) - x393 y228 Неа :3
00:55:093 (1,2,3) - закругли. угловатые не ок Всё ок :3
01:03:664 (1) - джамп? Уже нет :3
01:14:164 (2,3,1) - пересекаются. не ок Уже не пересекаются :3
01:28:093 (2) - кривоват >< Ровноват:3
01:33:664 (3) - а он не будет перекрывать таблицу рекордов Уже не перекрывает:3
01:43:093 (1,1) - угловатые, унылые Сам ты унылый:3
01:52:307 (4) - нет. он унылый. серкл в конце. на возврат короче Неа :3
02:41:378 (1,2) - ужасно играть такие слайдеры. два возврата - зло Бывает и злее :3
02:44:807 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - клик-передоз. Слишком много. Разбавь слайдерами Неа:3
03:12:236 (1,2) - такими слайдерами бы обвести последующие за ними ноты :3
03:26:164 (2,3,2) - пересекаются, не очень Очень очень :3
03:37:950 (1) - нк спамНе спам, там всё по музыке идёт :3
03:43:093 (1) - унылНет ты :3
03:48:236 (3) - скучный, но мне нравится :3

Red Snow
00:34:093 (1,2) - looks bad >< don't cross sliders
00:44:378 (3,4) - ^
00:45:664 (6,2,3,4) - ^
01:09:235 (1,2) - ^

Black Snow
Еще раз глянул, еще раз понял, что я не могу найти ничего. thx ;3

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Nice map~ now go and rank it

General

Timing

Black snow

Red Snow

White snow

-Bakari- wrote:

SPOILER

yo~

Red Snow
00:34:093 (1,2) - looks bad >< don't cross sliders
00:44:378 (3,4) - ^
00:45:664 (6,2,3,4) - ^
01:09:235 (1,2) - ^

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Nice map~ now go and rank it
sorry but no change for overlap >_<

L i d a N wrote:

SPOILER

OD & CS +1?
01:49:341 (1) - Remove new combo
01:49:984 (4) - Add new combo.
03:25:341 (4) - Add circle?
03:37:984 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:39:698 (5) - Add new combo.
03:49:555 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:49:984 (3) - Add new combo.
03:51:698 (1) - Remove new combo.
ok katty helped me fix these, thx

TheVileOne wrote:

SPOILER

Drain -1. The beat is slow, and it takes forever to get the bar back up fine

00:37:984 (3,4) - Misleading spacing... Don't deviate here. ok i'll place notes further then
00:39:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too many spacing changes within this combo. Either use less or change combo somewhere. i dont get the point here O_o fixing combo or not doesnt change anything (still readable in any way imo) jumps were according to the bass sorry but no change
00:53:412 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this pattern is slightly too far away from previous one. Perhaps 1.5/6 instead of 1.75. It's really awkward going from a stack into a jump. i'll place them a bit closer then
00:56:412 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing..... No reason for it to change here.but ppl still cant miss it cuz they r following the flow, right?
00:57:269 (5) - new combo done
The combo after's increased spacing is also hard to read..
01:18:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Stop changing the distance snap every combo.... People shouldn't have to read on a combo to combo basis. At least not for a hard mode. i just want (1) stack with (3) = = i'll change if 1 more mod tell me so
01:23:412 (4) - Looks weird overlapping note 2.
01:39:698 (1) - New combo done
01:40:769 (3) - Remove new combo.
01:41:412 (1) - New combo.
02:22:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is confusing. Seems overmapped... Most likely why it's unreadable. ok.. fixed
02:29:412 (1,2,3) - Use 1.5 snap here. 1.7 is too much for a beat change like this. oh come on.. it's only nearer by 1-2 level 4 grid o_o i didnt intentionally use 1.7 or 1.5 there, i just wanted to stack with previous notes
02:49:984 (5,6,1,2,3) - There are conflicting beats here- I have trouble finding the beat. right.. katty helped me fixed it and look good
03:12:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I can't play this with the 2.0 SB load i'm getting... ok fixed.. (i think)
03:19:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing- fix... no it's the main part here
03:54:698 (4,1) - 1.5? nah

ok thx mor modding ^^

Download: Lindsey Stirling - Crystallize (Katty Pie) [Red Snow].osu

1. The osz is 11mb. There's a guideline that says that the maximum is 10mb for maps without a video (if the wiki is up to date).
2. The repeat arrows are a hard to see when the combo color is white. Maybe you could add a shadow to those arrows ?
3. You need to add a cursortrail.png since you customized cursor.
4. Delete null.png.
5. The "копия snow star.png" and "копия (x) snow star.png" images seems to be the same as "snow star.png". You don't need to have the same image multiple times to show it more than once at the same time. Delete the copies and use this storyboard :
   
   storyboard

   [Events]
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   //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
   //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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    S,0,86363,,0.2012799
    M,0,86363,90220,363,-14,359,492
    R,0,86363,90220,0,20.19328
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    S,0,86791,,0.2115199
    M,0,86791,90649,553,-16,581,496
    R,0,86791,90649,0,12.20608
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    S,0,87220,,0.2012801
    M,0,87220,91077,204,-13,163,496
    R,0,87220,91077,0,11.61216
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    S,0,87649,,0.2012801
    M,0,87649,89363,60,-11,35,226
    R,0,87649,91506,0,17.46944
    M,0,89363,91506,35,226,32,496
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\snow star.png",320,240
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    M,0,88077,89791,388,-14,395,227
    R,0,88077,91934,0,11.10016
    M,0,89791,91934,395,227,373,492
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    S,0,88506,,0.2115198
    M,0,88506,90220,548,-14,528,249
    R,0,88506,92363,0,10.99776
    M,0,90220,92363,528,249,538,492
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\snow star.png",320,240
    S,0,88934,,0.17056
    M,0,88934,90649,236,-10,248,231
    R,0,88934,92791,0,11.5712
    M,0,90649,92791,248,231,219,494
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\snow star.png",320,240
    S,0,89363,,0.1910403
    M,0,89363,93220,97,-16,97,501
    R,0,89363,93220,0,14.336
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\snow star.png",320,240
    S,0,89791,,0.2217601
    M,0,89791,93649,347,-16,347,494
    R,0,89791,93649,0,10.17856
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\snow star.png",320,240
    S,0,90220,,0.2012801
    M,0,90220,94077,595,-13,589,497
    R,0,90220,94077,0,10.07616
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\snow star.png",320,240
    S,0,90649,,0.2217601
    M,0,90649,92791,167,-14,179,284
    R,0,90649,94506,0,10.28096
    M,0,92791,94506,179,284,162,495
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\snow star.png",320,240
    S,0,91077,,0.2217599
    M,0,91077,94934,467,-17,430,494
    R,0,91077,94934,0,12.94336
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\snow star.png",320,240
    S,0,91506,,0.2217599
    M,0,91506,95363,33,-14,20,493
    R,0,91506,95363,0,10.81344
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\snow star.png",320,240
    S,0,91934,,0.2115202
    M,0,91934,95791,286,-16,289,493
    R,0,91934,95791,0,7.00416
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\snow star.png",320,240
    S,0,92363,,0.2012798
    M,0,92363,94506,552,-15,551,272
    R,0,92363,96220,0,12.14464
    M,0,94506,96220,551,272,544,494
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\snow star.png",320,240
    S,0,185390,,0.1705598
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    R,0,185390,189247,0,12.41088
    M,0,187104,187961,53,222,40,337
    M,0,187961,189247,40,337,36,492
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\snow star.png",320,240
    S,0,185818,,0.1807999
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    M,0,188390,189676,570,337,577,493
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    S,0,186247,,0.1807999
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    S,0,186676,,0.1296002
    M,0,186676,190533,117,-9,130,491
    R,0,186676,190533,0,9.850881
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    S,0,187104,,0.1603203
    M,0,187104,190961,429,-12,444,496
    R,0,187104,190961,0,13.49632
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\snow star.png",320,240
    S,0,187533,,0.17056
    M,0,187533,191390,207,-12,182,497
    R,0,187533,191390,10.42432,20.84864
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\snow star.png",320,240
    S,0,187961,,0.16032
    M,0,187961,191818,555,-12,568,492
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    S,0,188390,,0.1808002
    M,0,188390,189676,55,-10,42,159
    R,0,188390,192247,0,10.6496
    M,0,189676,190961,42,159,56,325
    M,0,190961,192247,56,325,39,493
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\snow star.png",320,240
    S,0,188818,,0.1910399
    M,0,188818,190961,339,-12,323,281
    R,0,188818,192676,0,11.42784
    M,0,190961,192676,323,281,330,496
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    S,0,189247,,0.1808
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    M,0,190961,193104,131,217,142,493
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    S,0,189676,,0.2012802
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    S,0,190104,,0.1910399
    M,0,190104,193961,22,-12,7,491
    R,0,190104,193961,0,10.6496
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    S,0,190533,,0.2115198
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    M,0,192247,194390,597,216,607,496
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    S,0,190961,,0.1808
    M,0,190961,194818,351,-12,356,504
    R,0,190961,194818,0.04095978,11.12064
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    S,0,191390,,0.1705603
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    S,0,191827,,0.1807999
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    S,0,192256,,0.1705598
    M,0,192256,196113,284,-13,261,493
    R,0,192256,196113,0,11.07968
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    S,0,192684,,0.1807999
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    S,0,193113,,0.1603203
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    S,0,193521,,0.1603198
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    S,0,193950,,0.1603203
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    S,0,194378,,0.19104
    M,0,194378,198236,32,-13,18,491
    R,0,194378,198236,0,12.3904
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    S,0,194807,,0.2012802
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    R,0,194807,198664,0,13.90592
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    S,0,195236,,0.1807999
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    R,0,195236,199093,0,11.0592
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    S,0,195664,,0.1807999
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    R,0,195664,199521,0,11.28448
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    S,0,196093,,0.1808002
    M,0,196093,199521,597,-11,562,492
    R,0,196093,199521,0,8.232961
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    S,0,196521,,0.1705598
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    R,0,196521,199950,0,6.16448
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    S,0,196950,,0.1910399
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    R,0,196950,200378,0,14.15168
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    S,0,197378,,0.1808002
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    R,0,197378,200807,0,11.81696
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    S,0,197807,,0.1500804
    M,0,197807,201236,498,-12,465,491
    R,0,197807,201236,0,10.752
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    S,0,198236,,0.1808
    M,0,198236,201664,304,-15,305,490
    R,0,198236,201664,0,11.8784
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    S,0,198557,,0.1808
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    S,0,199093,,0.1808003
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    R,0,199093,202521,0,12.16512
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    S,0,199521,,0.1910399
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    R,0,199521,202950,0,13.68064
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    S,0,199950,,0.2012798
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    S,0,200378,,0.1808002
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    R,0,200378,203807,0,13.43488
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    S,0,200807,,0.1500803
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    S,0,201236,,0.17056
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    S,0,201664,,0.17056
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    S,0,202093,,0.1910402
    M,0,202093,205521,593,-17,620,491
    R,0,202093,205521,0,11.83744
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    S,0,202521,,0.1807997
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    R,0,202521,205950,0,11.83744
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    S,0,202950,,0.16032
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    R,0,202950,206378,0,14.0288
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    S,0,203378,,0.1705602
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    M,0,204664,205950,44,187,56,385
    M,0,205950,206807,56,385,47,494
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    S,0,203807,,0.17056
    M,0,203807,207236,530,-11,523,490
    R,0,203807,207236,0,11.40736
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    S,0,204236,,0.1500803
    M,0,204236,205950,323,-11,337,250
    R,0,204236,207664,0,9.13408
    M,0,205950,207664,337,250,320,492
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    S,0,204664,,0.1603201
    M,0,204664,208093,116,-13,123,491
    R,0,204664,208093,0,11.93984
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    S,0,205093,,0.2115199
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    R,0,205093,208521,0,12.00128
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    S,0,205521,,0.2012802
    M,0,205521,208950,208,-14,207,503
    R,0,205521,208950,0,13.04576
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    S,0,205950,,0.17056
    M,0,205950,209378,435,-13,417,502
    R,0,205950,209378,0
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    S,0,206378,,0.19104
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    S,0,206807,,0.19104
    M,0,206807,210236,307,-13,315,491
    R,0,206807,210236,0,10.50624
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    S,0,207236,,0.2012799
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    R,0,207236,210664,0,10.21952
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    S,0,207664,,0.1500803
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    R,0,207664,211093,0,11.9808
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    S,0,208093,,0.1807997
    M,0,208093,211521,415,-13,412,491
    R,0,208093,211521,0,12.04224
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    S,0,208521,,0.1910399
    M,0,208521,211950,219,-10,203,492
    R,0,208521,211950,0,12.6976
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    S,0,208950,,0.2115198
    M,0,208950,212378,39,-9,32,487
    R,0,208950,212378,0,10.79296
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    S,0,209378,,0.1910399
    M,0,209378,211093,540,-12,536,244
    R,0,209378,212807,0,9.54368
    M,0,211093,212807,536,244,557,490
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\22.jpg",320,240
    M,0,228270,,320,240
    S,0,228270,,0.8054401
    F,0,228270,228698,0,1
    F,0,228698,239787,1
    F,0,239787,,1
    F,0,239841,240270,1
    F,0,240270,240698,1,0
   //Storyboard Sound Samples

1. 01:29:412 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe a little too hard ?
2. 01:51:698 (1,2,3,4) - I think this is a too confusing for the easiest difficulty. Its hard to see how many times you have to click, and it ends on a slider that repeat multiple times.
3. 02:18:698 (1,2,3,4) - ^
4. 02:24:269 (1) - It doesn't look really good. Use an approach circle to make more ... mmmh Here's what I mean :
   
   
   Don't forget to move 02:26:412 (2) to keep the spacing.

1. 00:32:198 (1) - Somehow hard to read for me since I'm looking at 2's approach circle, but once I know about it and since it's close to the beginning I guess it's ok.
2. 00:42:055 (3) - This one is hard to notice because of the slider's follow circle and the hitburst of the slider. Move it somewhere else.
3. 00:53:412 (1,2,3,4,5) - Approach circles everywhere Too hard to read imo.
   
   
4. 00:55:555 (2) - Another hard to notice circle. I read this kind of "circles appearing everywhere" with the order in which they appear instead of looking for approach circles; I didn't saw the 2 and expected the pattern to be a star or something and missed the whole thing...
5. 01:23:841 (5) - The hard to see repeat arrow + the kiai flash makes it really hard to see that this slider has a repeat. Fixing the image should do it but you should check this point after to make sure that it is visible.
   
   Try to find the repeat arrow here :p

   
6. 02:35:198 (2,3,4,5) - Uh, please make this a normal square without a jump.
7. 03:19:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it would be more intuitive if you move 5 where 2 is, 6 where 1 is and 7 where 2 is, and add a circle where 1 is before the sliders.

1. 02:34:662 (2) - Align this circle between 1 and 3
2. 01:49:984 (1) - This slider should look like this one : 01:50:412 (2)

The 2 slider look like it is pinched by the the other.


Looks pinched at the right of the repeat arrow and the left of the 1. Also, the place where it is pinched is closer to the arrow than the 1.


Looks perfect


Pinched


Pinched, also it isn't symmetrical


Good


Ok


1 isn't symetrical (2 is)


You abuse this kind of sliders a little too much I think :p I think you should only use them when there is something "buzzing" in the song; or something really unusual.


This slider feels perfect here, but it could look just a little bit better.


This slider (3) should really blanket 2


Good

Damnae wrote:

Hello~ here's the mod you asked for ^^

General

1. The osz is 11mb. There's a guideline that says that the maximum is 10mb for maps without a video (if the wiki is up to date).
2. The repeat arrows are a hard to see when the combo color is white. Maybe you could add a shadow to those arrows ?
3. You need to add a cursortrail.png since you customized cursor.
4. Delete null.png.
5. The "копия snow star.png" and "копия (x) snow star.png" images seems to be the same as "snow star.png". You don't need to have the same image multiple times to show it more than once at the same time. Delete the copies and use this storyboard :
   
   storyboard

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
   //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
   //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
   //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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    F,0,27220,27649,0,1
    M,0,27649,,320,240
    S,0,27649,,0.8054399
    F,0,27649,37506,1
    F,0,37506,37934,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\2.jpg",320,240
    M,0,37506,,320,240
    S,0,37506,,0.8054399
    F,0,37506,37934,0,1
    F,0,37934,47363,1
    F,0,47363,47791,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\3.jpg",320,240
    S,0,47363,,0.8054401
    F,0,47363,47791,0,1
    F,0,47791,57649,1
    F,0,57649,58077,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\4.jpg",320,240
    S,0,57649,,0.8054399
    F,0,57649,58077,0,1
    F,0,58077,67934,1
    F,0,67934,68363,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\5.jpg",320,240
    S,0,67934,,0.8054402
    F,0,67934,68363,0,1
    F,0,68363,78220,1
    R,0,70506,,0
    F,0,78220,78649,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\6.jpg",320,240
    S,0,78220,,0.8054399
    F,0,78220,78649,0,1
    F,0,78649,88077,1
    F,0,88077,88506,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\7.jpg",320,240
    S,0,88077,,0.8054402
    F,0,88077,88506,0,1
    F,0,88506,98363,1
    F,0,98363,98791,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\8.jpg",320,240
    S,0,98363,,0.8054401
    F,0,98363,98791,0,1
    F,0,98791,108220,1
    F,0,108220,108649,1,0
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   //Storyboard Sound Samples

White Snow

1. 01:29:412 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe a little too hard ?
2. 01:51:698 (1,2,3,4) - I think this is a too confusing for the easiest difficulty. Its hard to see how many times you have to click, and it ends on a slider that repeat multiple times.
3. 02:18:698 (1,2,3,4) - ^
4. 02:24:269 (1) - It doesn't look really good. Use an approach circle to make more ... mmmh Here's what I mean :
   
   
   Don't forget to move 02:26:412 (2) to keep the spacing.

Black Snow

1. 02:34:662 (2) - Align this circle between 1 and 3
2. 01:49:984 (1) - This slider should look like this one : 01:50:412 (2)

I think you should work on making your sliders look better. Here's what I mean :

The 2 slider look like it is pinched by the the other.


Looks pinched at the right of the repeat arrow and the left of the 1. Also, the place where it is pinched is closer to the arrow than the 1.


Looks perfect


Pinched


Pinched, also it isn't symmetrical


Good


Ok


1 isn't symetrical (2 is)


You abuse this kind of sliders a little too much I think :p I think you should only use them when there is something "buzzing" in the song; or something really unusual.


This slider feels perfect here, but it could look just a little bit better.


This slider (3) should really blanket 2


Good

Good luck with the map :3
Just ask me if something isn't clear (PM or in game).