Offset: 24,363 (it's better, probably not exact though)
Normal
00:42:59 (4,5) - Make these straight on the end. Looks like they curve back and it looks weird.
00:45:40 (1) - Should be placed farther from 5. Distance snap accordingly.
00:48:90 (2) - Probably should be farther from 1. DSA.
00:51:71 (6) - New combo here.
01:07:84 (1) - Needs to be closer to the 1 before it. DSA.
After this, I recommend you remove all of your double/half bpm timing sections on normal. You're welcome to keep them on hard though. Afterwards, I'll go over the rest of normal.
Hard
01:02:16 (1) and 01:07:77 (1) - lol?
01:18:98 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - </3 Complex patterns like this.
02:01:74 (7) - </3 Sliders under sliders.
02:30:49 (1,1,1,1) - Spinners can't overlap each other. Change it.
Otherwise, it's a good start.