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Zejky
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Topic Starter
Zejky
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, April 09, 2013 at 1:04:57 PM

Artist: Ina
Title: I wanted you
Tags: Kazumikos Wroldsen
BPM: 59.5
Filesize: 6449kb
Play Time: 03:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.49 stars, 183 notes)
  2. Hard (4.63 stars, 361 notes)
  3. Kazumi's Insane (4.87 stars, 405 notes)
  4. Normal (4.11 stars, 255 notes)
Download: Ina - I wanted you
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This Is My Fist Map
I come back here, re-edit.
Easy - Done
Normal - Done
Hard - Done
Insane - Done by Kazumikos
2ND For Ranked
Thank Friend Valentine89 Translation for me
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Special Thank~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
  1. Kazumikos
  2. -Bakari-
  3. Yuki-kun
  4. Frostmourne
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Thank a lot everyone :D
  1. ertyukjh010
  2. YunBora
  3. jogfi2002
  4. Sonnyc
  5. Breeze <BAT>
  6. Flower
  7. kajiyatta
  8. Kiiwa
  9. -Bakari-
  10. B2IN
  11. Taris
  12. Kawayi Rika <MAT>
  13. HellDawn
  14. yurunneram
  15. Saten
  16. Lally
  17. - t e n n y a -
  18. Shulin <MAT>
  19. Jayel
  20. Ayu
  21. Nichiyouki
  22. Sushi <BAT>
  23. those <BAT>
  24. CDFA
  25. Scorpiour <BAT>
  26. Colin Hou <BAT>
Update Complete !!!

  • Wed Apr 04, 2012 4:29 pm - Upload Map
    Sun Sep 09, 2012 5:47 pm - Re-Update map
    Tue Nov 06, 2012 6:27 pm - Update hit Sound Done
    Thu Nov 08, 2012 8:43 pm - I noticed one thing, many of my previous fix is not updated,perhaps it is internet of me not good, i sorry everyone about that
    Sat Nov 10, 2012 9:28 am - Update hit sound By Saten
    Wed Jan 30, 2013 - fix BPM Bythose
    Tue Mar 19, 2013 - fix offset By Scorpiour
    Sun Apr 07, 2013 - update new file mp3 By Colin Hou
Last edited by Zejky , edited 69 times in total.
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010


Hello, :)

[General]

PreviewTime Inconsistent
bg.jpg size is 800*500, change it too 800*600 or 1024*768

[Easy]

00:25:735 (5) - Please use the same distance from the change will make the new players can not read, so you must follow the same distance
00:38:340 (1) - Do not stack with different colors, new players can not adapt, it will lead to a new player confusion.
00:49:937 (1) - ^
00:52:962 (1) - ^
01:14:139 (2) - This is the wrong method to add hit sound. You add hit sound for throughout the slider. This will had a hit sound when sliders ball to move. Do not do this before you do not grasp. Find all sliders which had this problem and fixed it. You can also refer to: http://puu.sh/q20r
02:03:298 (3) - Do not use the reverse 2 times or more, because the new players do not adapt, so only suggest to use reverse 1 time of sliders
Hit sound is very mess and not the law, try to add Clap to use this method:http://puu.sh/q20x

That all
Zejky
694 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Zejky
tks modding
YunBora
YunBora
M4M
Change combocolors yeah

HARD
00:40:609 (2,4) - overlap
01:07:332 (5) - overlap
01:12:626 (1) - reNC
01:17:920 (1) - unrankable spinner
02:22:458 (1) - ^
02:30:021 (6) - ds
hard have very much overlaps

Normal
01:36:323 (4) - NC
02:33:802 (1) - reNC
02:36:828 (5) - NC
03:23:214 (3,4) - overlap *^*
03:28:256 (4) - NC
03:31:281 (1) - renc

Easy
00:26:239 (2,1) - overlap
00:30:273 (2,4) - ^
00:40:357 (4) - http://puu.sh/tcM3
01:00:021 (5) - arkward
01:43:886 (2,3) - overlap
02:02:542 (2,3,4,5) - hmm http://puu.sh/tcNd

Insane
01:47:416 (3) - overlap with hp bar
AR +1???
Zejky
694 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Zejky
thaqnk for mod
update!!!
re-edit !!
jogfi2002
189 posts
Joined July 2009
jogfi2002
MOD from kagami's queue.

[General]

If you have no SB, take .osb away~
And I found one picture in the design panel, but that file is not in the folder.

For every diff: 02:10:609 - Here's a green line taged Kiai time, but flashed away in one second.

[Easy]

Circle Size - 3 is better for an EASY
Set Distance Space to 1.0 may make your map looks more pretty.
Maybe some notes are not snapped to the line, use Timing - Resnap All Note to check it.

01:17:164 (3,4) - It is not appropriate to overlap a circle and slider in an EASY. You got many similar stuff like this.
02:26:239 (3,2) - Here comes a fatal error~Delete it and add one again.
02:22:206 (4,5,6) - You could consider to arrange notes into patterns more often, not just put it on the screen. For example => image001
02:31:786 (1) - Flip this slider 180 degrees anticlockwise and reverse its start.
02:32:794 (2) - ^

03:05:063 (1,2,3,4,5) - Take the slider higher, like this => image002


[Normal]

00:42:374 (1) - Change to 3 circles.
00:47:416 (2,3,4) - Change to 1 slider.
00:48:424 (5,6) - Delete the circle, make the slider longer, starts at where the circle was.
00:58:004 (3,4,5) - Rearrange it like this => image003
00:59:769 (6,7,8) - Change it into slider.
01:04:559 (1) - Remove.
02:00:273 (6,7) - Remove, and put a new 1/1 slider at 02:00:525
02:39:853 (7,1) - A jump is not so good for a NORMAL..
02:56:996 (2) - This sound is a little weird.


[Hard]
00:21:449 (7,8,1) - Let them be in the same combo.
00:28:004 (4,6,7,1) - The distance of tribble 1/4 combo are not the same, maybe it's better to keep it at 0.5 if you r using 1.0 for normal distance.
00:32:542 (5,6) - This jump is not at a going-up point, not so comfortable.
00:53:970 (6) - NC
00:56:491 (10) - Replace it with two circles, in order to follow the lyrics.
01:14:895 (6,7) - I think it's better to make curve sliders here, like this => image004
01:30:021 (6,7,1) - Let them be in the same combo.
01:37:836 (6,7,8) - DS.
02:26:744 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:31:029 (1,2,3) - ^
02:34:811 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:38:844 (7) - Maybe a "trembling" slider is good here.
02:56:996 (1,2,3,4) - Not on the music, hard to catch.


[kazumi's Insane]

No problem in rythm and notes.
And notes could be arranged more beautifully.


That's all, feel free to talk to me.
Hope my mod can help you someway.
Zejky
694 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Zejky
thank you for mod !!
update !!!
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
hi.

Title is: I Wanted You
source: why lineage II? Are you sure?
missed SB element: lineage_2.jpg
i think it's okay to have two breaks in every diffs. Try to add break (from 01:22:206 - till 01:38:340) at least for Easy and Normal


no need to kd me.
Zejky
694 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Zejky

-Bakari- wrote:

hi.

Title is: I Wanted You
source: why lineage II? Are you sure?
missed SB element: lineage_2.jpg
i think it's okay to have two breaks in every diffs. Try to add break (from 01:22:206 - till 01:38:340) at least for Easy and Normal


no need to kd me.

I'm not sure, because the song a friend sent me
thank you ~
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Hi~ I'm from CLANNAD modding queue

General:

-- Time line at 146844 is unsnapped, and check if this is functioning correctly. Prefer to delete that, and make 146744 a 40% sound.

Easy:

-- Since it is Easy, consider Circle size 3

00:28:760 (2) - A sound increase here doesn't sound well to me.
00:48:928 (4) - NC this, due to the new melody
01:53:466 (4) - ^
01:36:324 (3,5) - Delete Whistles here
02:59:012 (1) - Add a Finish at the start

Normal:

01:32:290 (3) - Delete Clap at the middle
02:39:853 (7,1) - o.o a Jump??
02:57:500 (3) - Delete this, no beat I hear..
02:57:752 (4) - NC

Hard:

01:09:601 (2) - (nazi) this slider isn't a perfect line
01:15:399 (7) - ctrl+R I don't think a jump with (8) fits
01:37:836 (6,7) - Delete whistle
02:06:071 (4) - Delete Clap at the Head
02:59:012 (5,1) - (1,2)
03:05:819 (8,1) - ^
03:26:491 (2) - ctrl+R will look better
03:30:777 (10) - NC? a speed change..

kazumi's Insane:

-- Use Claps only where you can hear in the song.. If there isn't a clap but you are wanting to place a hit sound, use a whistle (maybe)

00:30:525 (2) - Delete Clap
00:32:542 (2,3,5) - ^
00:37:332 (3) - Add a Clap at the head
00:40:861 (3) - Delete Clap at the end
00:44:643 (2) - Delete Clap at the head
00:46:660 (2) - ^
00:47:416 (3) - Delete Clap
00:54:475 (5,7) - 1 Grid Right
00:56:365 (4) - Spacing
01:44:139 (4) - 2 Grid Right, to make a consistent spacing as (1,2)
02:06:449 ( ) - Add a note?
02:40:609 (2,2,4) - Delete Whistle
02:42:878 (5) - Instead of Stacking, Consider placing at (360,322)
03:01:534 (1) - Make a line with (5,6)

That's it. Good luck ;)
kazumikos
393 posts
Joined February 2010
kazumikos

Sonnyc wrote:

kazumi's Insane:

-- Use Claps only where you can hear in the song.. mhmm i disagree >_>
If there isn't a clap but you are wanting to place a hit sound, use a whistle (maybe)

00:30:525 (2) - Delete Clap
00:32:542 (2,3,5) - ^
00:37:332 (3) - Add a Clap at the head
00:40:861 (3) - Delete Clap at the end
00:44:643 (2) - Delete Clap at the head
00:46:660 (2) - ^
00:47:416 (3) - Delete Clap
00:54:475 (5,7) - 1 Grid Right fixed
00:56:365 (4) - Spacing fixed
01:44:139 (4) - 2 Grid Right, to make a consistent spacing as (1,2) k
02:06:449 ( ) - Add a note? there's nothing here to add note o_o
02:40:609 (2,2,4) - Delete Whistle whistle is following the bass sound =o
02:42:878 (5) - Instead of Stacking, Consider placing at (360,322) stacking looks neater to me
03:01:534 (1) - Make a line with (5,6) k
That's it. Good luck ;)
thx for modding ^^
http://puu.sh/1cffF
Zejky
694 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Zejky

Sonnyc wrote:

Hi~ I'm from CLANNAD modding queue

General:

-- Time line at 146844 is unsnapped, and check if this is functioning correctly. Prefer to delete that, and make 146744 a 40% sound.

Easy:

-- Since it is Easy, consider Circle size 3

00:28:760 (2) - A sound increase here doesn't sound well to me.
00:48:928 (4) - NC this, due to the new melody
01:53:466 (4) - ^
01:36:324 (3,5) - Delete Whistles here
02:59:012 (1) - Add a Finish at the start

Normal:

01:32:290 (3) - Delete Clap at the middle
02:39:853 (7,1) - o.o a Jump??
02:57:500 (3) - Delete this, no beat I hear..
02:57:752 (4) - NC

Hard:

01:09:601 (2) - (nazi) this slider isn't a perfect line
01:15:399 (7) - ctrl+R I don't think a jump with (8) fits
01:37:836 (6,7) - Delete whistle
02:06:071 (4) - Delete Clap at the Head
02:59:012 (5,1) - (1,2)
03:05:819 (8,1) - ^
03:26:491 (2) - ctrl+R will look better
03:30:777 (10) - NC? a speed change..

That's it. Good luck ;)
thank you for mod
fix some
update !!!
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
[General]

  1. About the title, sadly I can't find the artist name in the wiki, I could only know she is namde "Ina Wroldsen", British, and this song is from here ablum <Suddenly> form internet, no sure about this song's title is "I wanted you" or "I Wanted You", so just leave is as it is now.
    About source, if you can't sure, remove " lineage II" for safe
  2. It is suggested that use 4:3 image as background image, so maybe you can find some 4:3 images like 800x600 or 1024x768?
  3. I see there is a SB code about "lineage_2.jpg" in your osb file, but the file is missing in your folder, did you forget to submit it?
[Easy]

  1. 00:49:937 (1) - Slider end, consider adding a finish sound?
  2. 01:06:071 (4) - ^, but slider start
  3. 01:33:298 (2) - No clap here?
  4. 01:54:475 (1) - Slider end, finish?
  5. 02:10:609 (4) - ^, slider head
  6. 02:26:844 - Unused timing section
  7. 02:38:340 (3) - clap instead of whistle sounds better
  8. 02:43:382 - Unused timing section
  9. 02:44:895 - ^
  10. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
  11. 03:01:029 (1) - This NC seems useless
  12. 03:30:777 - Unused timing section
  13. 03:31:281 - ^
[Normal]

  1. 00:26:744 (1) - Reverse point, clap
  2. 00:32:794 (5) - Slider end, clap
  3. 00:44:391 (3) - Reverse point, clap?
  4. 00:49:937 (1) - Finish
  5. 01:06:071 (4) - ^
  6. 01:21:197 (2,3) - clap
  7. 01:54:475 (1) - Finish
  8. 02:10:609 (5) - ^
  9. 02:26:844 - Unused timing section
  10. 02:43:004 - ^
  11. 02:43:382 - ^
  12. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
  13. 03:30:777 - Unused timing section
  14. 03:31:281 - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:256 (5) - Clap
  2. 00:49:937 (1) - Finish?
  3. 01:06:071 (6) - ^
  4. 01:29:769 (5) - Slider end, clap?
  5. 01:37:836 (6,7,8) - spacing looked kinda weird, use usual spacing would be better imo
  6. 01:54:475 (1) - Finish
  7. 02:10:609 (6) - ^
  8. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
  9. 03:30:777 - Unused timing section
  10. 03:31:281 - ^
[kazumi's Insane]

  1. 00:30:525 (2) - Clap here sounds odd, remove it would be better
  2. 00:44:643 (2) - ^, slider start
  3. 00:46:660 (2) - ^
  4. 00:50:693 (2) - ^, hmm, there are many double clap you used, oh well, if you like that, that's fine though...I won't point them out any more
  5. 02:38:340 (3) - no clap here?
  6. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
  7. 03:31:281 - 55% volume sounds loud here, try 40%-45%?
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Hi! mod from the queue~

[General]
Set all N:C2 for clap ticks 5% lower in volume to avoid confusion, referring to guideline.

[Easy]
Is CS3 better? it does not hurt to use a larger circle, or it is too hard for beginners to try HR.
If you change the CS to 3, then maybe you can set a larger distance spacing.
00:17:668 (1) 00:21:702 (5) etc - all long-white-line downbeats could add whistle to make it sound better
01:33:298 (2) - missed clap?
01:35:315 - better use clap+whistle
01:37:332 - ^
02:38:340 (3) - ^
02:43:382 - black section? better remove
02:44:895 - ^
02:56:996 (1) - volume 35%?

[Normal]
00:17:668 (1) 00:21:702 etc - same as Easy
00:28:256 - whistle?
00:30:273 - ^
00:32:290 - ^
00:56:491 - maybe add a note here
01:56:744 (5) - delete?
02:30:273 - add clap?
02:37:836 (5) - better use clap+whistle
02:43:382 02:44:895 - delete section
02:56:996 (2) - volume 35%?

[Hard]
HP->6 or it is quite tricky. AR -> 8? cause it is somewhat even harder than Insane.
00:17:668 (1) 00:21:702 (5) etc - same as Easy
00:32:542 (5) - move to right x:232 y:152
01:18:928 (1,2,3,4) - this is tricky... how about this?
SPOILER
01:35:315 - better use clap+whistle
01:37:332 (4) - ^
01:37:836 (6,7,8) - the sudden slow-down is a bit tricky.
02:56:996 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - quite meaningless in Hard level. Even Insane does not fit the jump, better change to like
SPOILER
(it's only suggestion. you can do it as whatever you like. make it a spinner like Insane is also a good idea.)
03:12:374 (3,4,5,6,7) - same. maybe you can move a bit closer.
03:26:996 (3,4,5,6) - ^
03:29:517 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Okay could you tell me how can I tap it? it suits AR 8 here but in AR 7 it is just nonsense.

[Insane]
00:28:634 (4) - add a note?
01:22:206 (1) - Only Insane has the break here. I suggest complete the section or delete the section in other difficultys. but its up to you whether you do them or not.
02:28:760 - add whistle?
03:21:954 (1,2,3,4) - do some rotation to make it more beautiful and harder, like
SPOILER
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
late sorrry. from Modding queue and limited 8minutes modding this time.
General
almost suggestions
Easy
Placement
01:03:046(5) 1 grid left
03:21:197(1,2,3,4,5) like this?
SPOILER
Rythem
02:26:744 this green line doesn't need. so delete it
02:26:844^
03:30:147^
03:30:777^
Hit Sonud
01:33:298(2) add clap at end?

Normal
Placement
00:52:710(1,2,3) maybe this?
SPOILER
01:01:534(2) a bit curved?
SPOILER
01:07:332(2) I don't recommend this because of a little overlapping at (4).
01:08:844(1,2,3,4) suggetions
SPOILER
01:46:912(1,2,3) maybe this would be more better.
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
02:25:231(4) add clap or whistle? this back instrumental should have sound.

Hard
Placement
00:32:542(5,6) this flow doesn't seem good I suppose. maybe using DS better.
SPOILER
01:13:382(2,3,4,5) same as above. I feel a bit weird.
03:14:139(1) Ctrl+G?
Rythem
01:36:702(2) I don't feel this good. maybe 01:36:828 seems better.
02:59:265(2) remove this note?

good luck. from my point, it's good map for your 1st map. keep your best.
Zejky
694 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Zejky
Breeze

Breeze wrote:

[General]

  1. About the title, sadly I can't find the artist name in the wiki, I could only know she is namde "Ina Wroldsen", British, and this song is from here ablum <Suddenly> form internet, no sure about this song's title is "I wanted you" or "I Wanted You", so just leave is as it is now.
    About source, if you can't sure, remove " lineage II" for safe
  2. It is suggested that use 4:3 image as background image, so maybe you can find some 4:3 images like 800x600 or 1024x768?
  3. I see there is a SB code about "lineage_2.jpg" in your osb file, but the file is missing in your folder, did you forget to submit it?
[Easy]

  1. 00:49:937 (1) - Slider end, consider adding a finish sound?
  2. 01:06:071 (4) - ^, but slider start
  3. 01:33:298 (2) - No clap here?
  4. 01:54:475 (1) - Slider end, finish?
  5. 02:10:609 (4) - ^, slider head
  6. 02:26:844 - Unused timing section
  7. 02:38:340 (3) - clap instead of whistle sounds better
  8. 02:43:382 - Unused timing section
  9. 02:44:895 - ^
  10. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
  11. 03:01:029 (1) - This NC seems useless
  12. 03:30:777 - Unused timing section
  13. 03:31:281 - ^
[Normal]

  1. 00:26:744 (1) - Reverse point, clap
  2. 00:32:794 (5) - Slider end, clap
  3. 00:44:391 (3) - Reverse point, clap?
  4. 00:49:937 (1) - Finish
  5. 01:06:071 (4) - ^
  6. 01:21:197 (2,3) - clap
  7. 01:54:475 (1) - Finish
  8. 02:10:609 (5) - ^
  9. 02:26:844 - Unused timing section
  10. 02:43:004 - ^
  11. 02:43:382 - ^
  12. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
  13. 03:30:777 - Unused timing section
  14. 03:31:281 - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:256 (5) - Clap
  2. 00:49:937 (1) - Finish?
  3. 01:06:071 (6) - ^
  4. 01:29:769 (5) - Slider end, clap?
  5. 01:37:836 (6,7,8) - spacing looked kinda weird, use usual spacing would be better imo
  6. 01:54:475 (1) - Finish
  7. 02:10:609 (6) - ^
  8. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
  9. 03:30:777 - Unused timing section
  10. 03:31:281 - ^
[kazumi's Insane]

  1. 00:30:525 (2) - Clap here sounds odd, remove it would be better
  2. 00:44:643 (2) - ^, slider start
  3. 00:46:660 (2) - ^
  4. 00:50:693 (2) - ^, hmm, there are many double clap you used, oh well, if you like that, that's fine though...I won't point them out any more
  5. 02:38:340 (3) - no clap here?
  6. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?
  7. 03:31:281 - 55% volume sounds loud here, try 40%-45%?
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Flower

Flower wrote:

Hi! mod from the queue~

[General]
Set all N:C2 for clap ticks 5% lower in volume to avoid confusion, referring to guideline.

[Easy]
Is CS3 better? it does not hurt to use a larger circle, or it is too hard for beginners to try HR.
If you change the CS to 3, then maybe you can set a larger distance spacing.
00:17:668 (1) 00:21:702 (5) etc - all long-white-line downbeats could add whistle to make it sound better
01:33:298 (2) - missed clap?
01:35:315 - better use clap+whistle
01:37:332 - ^
02:38:340 (3) - ^
02:43:382 - black section? better remove
02:44:895 - ^
02:56:996 (1) - volume 35%?

[Normal]
00:17:668 (1) 00:21:702 etc - same as Easy
00:28:256 - whistle?
00:30:273 - ^
00:32:290 - ^
00:56:491 - maybe add a note here
01:56:744 (5) - delete?
02:30:273 - add clap?
02:37:836 (5) - better use clap+whistle
02:43:382 02:44:895 - delete section
02:56:996 (2) - volume 35%?

[Hard]
HP->6 or it is quite tricky. AR -> 8? cause it is somewhat even harder than Insane.
00:17:668 (1) 00:21:702 (5) etc - same as Easy
00:32:542 (5) - move to right x:232 y:152
01:18:928 (1,2,3,4) - this is tricky... how about this?
SPOILER
01:35:315 - better use clap+whistle
01:37:332 (4) - ^
01:37:836 (6,7,8) - the sudden slow-down is a bit tricky.
02:56:996 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - quite meaningless in Hard level. Even Insane does not fit the jump, better change to like
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(it's only suggestion. you can do it as whatever you like. make it a spinner like Insane is also a good idea.)
03:12:374 (3,4,5,6,7) - same. maybe you can move a bit closer.
03:26:996 (3,4,5,6) - ^
03:29:517 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Okay could you tell me how can I tap it? it suits AR 8 here but in AR 7 it is just nonsense.

[Insane]
00:28:634 (4) - add a note?
01:22:206 (1) - Only Insane has the break here. I suggest complete the section or delete the section in other difficultys. but its up to you whether you do them or not.
02:28:760 - add whistle?
03:21:954 (1,2,3,4) - do some rotation to make it more beautiful and harder, like
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kajiyatta

kajiyatta wrote:

late sorrry. from Modding queue and limited 8minutes modding this time.
General
almost suggestions
Easy
Placement
01:03:046(5) 1 grid left
03:21:197(1,2,3,4,5) like this?
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Rythem
02:26:744 this green line doesn't need. so delete it
02:26:844^
03:30:147^
03:30:777^
Hit Sonud
01:33:298(2) add clap at end?

Normal
Placement
00:52:710(1,2,3) maybe this?
SPOILER
01:01:534(2) a bit curved?
SPOILER
01:07:332(2) I don't recommend this because of a little overlapping at (4).
01:08:844(1,2,3,4) suggetions
SPOILER
01:46:912(1,2,3) maybe this would be more better.
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
02:25:231(4) add clap or whistle? this back instrumental should have sound.

Hard
Placement
00:32:542(5,6) this flow doesn't seem good I suppose. maybe using DS better.
SPOILER
01:13:382(2,3,4,5) same as above. I feel a bit weird.
03:14:139(1) Ctrl+G?
Rythem
01:36:702(2) I don't feel this good. maybe 01:36:828 seems better.
02:59:265(2) remove this note?

good luck. from my point, it's good map for your 1st map. keep your best.

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Thank everyone a lot :)
update !!!
kazumikos
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Joined February 2010
kazumikos

Breeze wrote:

[kazumi's Insane]

  1. 00:30:525 (2) - Clap here sounds odd, remove it would be better k
  2. 00:44:643 (2) - ^, slider start k
  3. 00:46:660 (2) - ^ done
  4. 00:50:693 (2) - ^, hmm, there are many double clap you used, oh well, if you like that, that's fine though...I won't point them out any more o3o
  5. 02:38:340 (3) - no clap here?fixed
  6. 02:44:895 - Drag break to here?done
  7. 03:31:281 - 55% volume sounds loud here, try 40%-45%? k

Flower wrote:

Insane
00:28:634 (4) - add a note? there was a note here o3o
01:22:206 (1) - Only Insane has the break here. I suggest complete the section or delete the section in other difficultys. but its up to you whether you do them or not. hmm
02:28:760 - add whistle? k
03:21:954 (1,2,3,4) - do some rotation to make it more beautiful and harder mmm actually this doesnt look nice to me, i'll consider this
thx for modding :3
Zejky
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Topic Starter
Zejky
Update !!!
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
Hi~

General
Please confirm if the title is Ina - I wanted you or Ina - I Wanted You
The hardest difficulty in this mapset has the most breaks. Insane also has less score then the Hard because you added in that extra break. Consider mapping from 01:22:206 - 01:38:340 - on Insane to fix the score spread.
03:15:147 - You can have another Kiai burst here going by how frequent you place them prior to this.

kazumi's Insane
00:58:004 - Replace clap with finish here sounds really nice.
01:06:071 (4) - Add new combo, 01:07:080 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:14:139 - Replace clap with finish here sounds really nice.
01:20:441 (1) - Replace whistle with finish.
02:02:542 - Replace clap with finish here sounds really nice.
02:18:676 - Replace clap with finish here sounds really nice.
02:22:458 (5) - Delete note.
03:08:340 (3) - Move this slider 1/4 later.
03:30:777 (3) - Move to x:188 y:280.

Hard
AR-1. There is no reason for there to be such a big gap between Normal and Insane's AR, you can at least shorten the gap with Hard difficulty.
00:17:668 (1) - Add whistle like Insane and Normal.
00:32:794 - Add clap.
00:33:298 - Add clap.
00:58:004 (5) - New combo for consistency with 00:53:718 (5,1) - please.
01:06:071 (6) - New combo for Kiai time.
01:14:139 (5) - New combo.
01:21:197 (8) - New combo, 01:21:702 (9) - Don't stack underneath 01:21:197 (8) - Maybe make 01:21:197 (8,9,10) - Into a triangle?
01:37:836 (6,7) - Add claps.
01:52:710 (5) - Wrong rhythm. 01:52:710 (5) - Remove return, 01:53:214 - Add note with new combo here.
02:10:609 (6) - New combo for Kiai time.
02:18:676 (6) - New combo.
02:31:786 (4) - New combo for consistency with 02:27:752 (1) -
02:42:626 (8) - This slider should end at 02:42:878 -
02:59:012 - Add finish for consistency with other Kiai times.
03:06:071 (1) - Remove new combo, 03:05:819 (8) - Add new combo to follow vocals.
03:15:147 - Add finish.
03:30:021 (7) - New combo.

Normal
01:06:071 - Add finish.
02:11:618 (6) - New combo.
02:19:685 (6) - New combo.
02:42:626 (5) - Again, end slider at 02:42:878 -
02:55:987 (1) - Delete note?
03:15:147 - Add finish.


Easy
CS+1
00:17:668 (1) - Add whistle.
03:15:147 - Add finish.

Good luck!
Zejky
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Zejky
thank you for modding
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