1. Easy (0.78 stars, 150 notes)
2. Hard (4.21 stars, 402 notes)
3. Normal (2.39 stars, 265 notes)

ertyukjh010 wrote:

您好~ 中文沒問題對吧

[General]

第1個紅線Offset轉做42249 fixed，提到最前面了~


[Normal]

AR-1 HP-1 比較適合新手 真心不难，不过还是打算请一些新人试一下
00:43:692 (1) - 1/8太快了，新手不可能看得懂；用1個Circle來代替；其他也跟著做 如果还有人提出这个问题我会考虑
03:12:671 (2) - 太短的Slider在串連之間，新手不可能適應；刪掉用其他代替
03:22:671 (4) - ^
03:54:616 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 距離不一致，1/4也不適合新手；刪掉(2,3,5,6) 这个其实是1/6，resnap出错了，现在改成两个1/6的reverse-slider
03:57:116 (3) - 同03:12:671 (2)
03:59:616 (8) - 用1個Circle代替
04:06:004 (4) - 同03:12:671 (2)
04:14:893 (4) - ^
04:18:227 (2) - ^
04:34:893 (4) - ^
[*]关于1/4stream，我都没有改，考虑到只有两个难度，所以normal并不是给超级新人准备的


[Hard]

HP-2
03:46:560 (2,3) - 甚麼都看不到，別疊起來
04:22:116 (2,3) - ^
04:26:838 (1,1,1,1) - 說實話我不分出這4個的距離....原因是您的SV調得太低

這張圖的SV實在太低，很多地方都讀不出譜，短Slider也會異常的容易miss.........想辦法解決吧
[*]因为是慢歌，用快的slider实在是很奇怪，但是为了增加难度，用了3X的距离，大概是因为两者反差有点大吧
That all

Megurine Luka wrote:

Love ya

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Delete .osb file(s) and full submit if you aren't using a storyboard or the same storyboard across all difficulties.
I decice to make a storyboard, but not finish~

[Normal]
00:46:002 (1) - Kickback once more. Apply this to Hard.
fixed

[Hard]
Use CS4 to better differentiate the difficulties.
no, since if I use CS4, the sliderscorepoint is so ugly...

Not much else to say; simple yet effective mapping. Good luck :3

Megurine Luka wrote:

记得拉一个hitcircleoverlay出来

顺便前阵子做的一个玫瑰花的滚球，你看看=3=我看着觉得蛮合的

Midasmens wrote:

来看图~

General
好歌~
做SB麽~~如果不做的話就把.osb删了吧~~
20%的音量會不會有點低呢？
感覺第一個紅線的offset應該是700
瓦的Mod很烂~~如果什麽都沒幫上就直接忽视吧~~

音量增加到30%，增加了hitnormal
offset：689，bpm：103.94

Normal
01:25:276 (5) - NC? fixed
04:15:740 (6) - ^
04:20:462 (6) - ^
04:31:295 (4) - ^

嗯~~就這些

Hard
04:31:295 (1,2,3,4) - 感覺slider會好些
01:12:548 (3) - 應該在 01:12:692 - 開始會好點哦~~
01:14:857 (1) - 在 01:15:001 - 開始
01:59:887 (2) - ^ 02:00:032 開始
02:34:237 (2,3,4) - 節奏不對~~改成這樣


虽然音乐很诡异，但是感觉slider从蓝线起还是很奇怪……

03:04:906 (4,5,6) - Spacing有點大~~這麼和緩的曲子有點突兀
03:22:684 (2,3,4) - ^ fixed
03:24:351 (7,8,9) - 不好看~~疊在一起或者排成直線吧
03:46:573 (2) - 這個地方感覺urankable的說~~第一個arrow必須清晰可見~~現在有點被擋住了吶~~而且讀圖也很有挑戰 fixed

OK~ 就這些吧~~加油!!!

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

I've never modded something slow like this ._.

General

hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, reversearrow.png are missing
with only hitcircle.png available, it will look strange on user's skins...
the skin is just in working

Might be better if you make soft-slidertick.wav blank?
Also the sliderslide.wav blank?
It is also most silent

Nice hitsounds~ very calming~


Normal

00:46:003 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). end in the line is not fit the sound, so I have to do it
01:30:452 (2) - make it end at 01:31:029?considering
01:31:318 - and add circle here? considering
02:23:848 (5) - NC?
02:33:084 (5) - ^
03:26:851 (3) - ^
03:27:962 (7) - ^
03:29:073 (1) - remove NC
03:30:740 (3) - NC
03:35:740 (4) - ^
03:41:851 (7) - NC
03:42:406 (1) - remove NC
03:44:628 (4) - NC
03:46:295 (9) - NC
03:46:851 (1) - remove NC
04:02:406 (4) - NC?
04:11:573 (6) - ^
04:16:017 (7) - ^
04:20:462 (6) - ^


Hard

00:46:003 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:06:295 (9) - NC?
03:06:851 (1) - remove NC
03:46:573 (2,3) - this small slider could be very confusing, increase the distance just a bit fixed
03:52:684 (6) - NC?
04:11:295 (7) - ^
04:20:462 (7) - ^

Thats all~
Good luck with this map

Magicphoenix wrote:

Hey~

[General]

-All Good

[Hard]

*03:06:295 (9,10,11) - You should replace these with a Reverse slider, it's the only 1/3-rhythm pattern in this whole map and can give someone some really angering 100's + Very hard to figure out that the 1/3 follows vocal on first time
*03:31:017 - Not sure if these 1/8 streams are any good. The song's slow and relaxing, nothing in the music changed and suddenly BAM, fast streams ! And it doesn't follow the beat of the song. Consider replacing them with at least 1/8 sliders
*03:57:128 (3,4,5) - And when you could actually do 1/8 following the zither, you don't. Strange, maybe make this a 1/8 stream?
*04:11:295 (7) - New combo to follow the setting-in zither?

Although I'm bewailing the 1/8 streams I kinda get why you added them, the song's pretty hard to map and it's hard to not make the players sleep while playing the song
1/8 is not fit this song, it will break the clam...

Good job either way and the hitsound choice is perfect :3

[Normal]

*In General - There are many places where you can replace a circle + slider into 1 bigger slider. It sounds better IMO and confuses the player less. For example 04:04:628 (1,2) - , 04:09:073 (1,2) - ,
no, it is more fun to play~

*04:11:573 (6) - Add a new combo for the setting-in zither (The comboes are [way] too long for easier diffs anyway, try seperating all the 5/6+ combos into 2 different in this diff)
*04:16:017 (7) - ^
*04:20:462 (6) - ^
All fixed

I like the song and the way you mapped it, it looks really hard to do it, yet you managed to do it in an enjoyable way :3
Hats off'n good luck ranking!