This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 07 de octubre de 2012 at 14:56:56

Artist: Dia Frampton
Title: Good Boy
Tags: red meg & dia
BPM: 111
Filesize: 5193kb
Play Time: 02:52
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,43 stars, 138 notes)
2. Hard (4,65 stars, 302 notes)
3. Normal (2,82 stars, 187 notes)

Download: Dia Frampton - Good Boy
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For the project of SapphireGhost Dia Frampton - Red

Easy - 100%
Normal - 100%
Hard - 100%

Primero

Segundo

you don't need to have "dia" in the tags and title.

Thanks for Mod Katsuri

@Jacob: Hmm i only follow the ranked "Dia Frampton" map tags

Time to mod this! Nice song choice~

General

1. The mp3 bitrate is 216 kb/s. It needs to be 128-192. Find someone to re-encode it for you!
2. I strongly recommend tick rate two, especially on low BPM songs.

Easy

1. +1 OD. IMHO, 1 is too small for any difficulty.
   00:36:874 (1,2) - Make these sort of "blanket" eachother like this. It looks pretty neat.
2. 01:07:144 (4) - NC for consistency with the previous verse.
3. 01:39:036 (2) - You should add a whistle at the end of this slider to follow your whistle pattern.
4. 01:57:415 (2) - Curve this slider upwards. It looks awesome!

Normal

1. You might want to -1 the OD and HP drain. The settings are really high.
2. 00:49:847 (1) - Whistle on the end of this slider to follow the pattern.
3. 01:39:577 (1) - Remove the whistle at the end.
4. 02:16:334 (1,2) - This is a lot better looking and flowing.

Hard

1. 00:45:523 (4,5) - This is so much better visually. :>
2. 00:47:685 (1) - The reverse of this slider should be on the blue tick in order to follow the vocals.
3. 00:50:388 (2) - Ctrl + H this and arrange it to distance snap.

Good luck!

Thanks guys

Fixed

Hey.

• [Easy]

1. 00:30:388 (3) - I dislike this slider because it has 2 repeats when at the start of the song, there's a slider with only 1 repeat. Beginners might think that this one has only 1 repeat like the first one. I suggest you to try something else here to avoid this.
2. 00:34:712 (3) - This is kinda.. nazi. This would look better if you copy 00:32:550 (1) - and replace this slider with the copy of (1) to make a better symmetry.
3. 00:50:928 (3) - ^ just the same thing. Perhaps replace this slider with a copy of the previous one 00:49:847 (2) - for better symmetry?
4. 02:14:171 (3) - Just, the same as I told you about 2 repeat sliders.
5. 02:41:198 (3) - Again, for better symmetry, replace this slider with a copy of the slider 02:39:036 (1).
6. 02:52:009 (1) - I personally dislike this long spinner. It sounds weird and it looks like you didn't wanted to map this part.
   
   Uhmm some sliders have some shapes that can be improved a lot. You should try to make some pretty patterns to give the map some "variety".

• [Normal]

1. 00:20:117 (2,3,4,5) - This sounds really weird. I suggest you to try this instead. I added that (2) of the start at the red tick so it fits with the rest of the map (you placed some notes at red ticks):
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:35:252 (3,4,5,6) - Sounds weird too because you placed 4, 5 and 6 at red ticks. Try something more simple instead. Remember that this is a normal difficulty. I know that you have a easier one, but at least I, don't agree about rhythm with red ticks in normal diffs.

• [Hard]

1. 00:21:739 (4,5,6) - To follow better the vocals, I suggest you to replace this 3 notes with a slider, with 1 repeat.
2. 00:24:982 (4,5) - ^ Replace with a slider?
3. 00:26:063 (7,8,9) - ^ Perhaps replace with a slider with 1 repeat?
4. 00:43:090 - The space between 3 and 4 feels empty. How about adding a note here?
5. 01:38:496 (3,4) - Replace this notes with a slider, so it sounds and fits better with the vocals?
6. 01:50:117 - Feels unnecesarily empty. Add a note here to keep following the music?
7. 01:54:442 - ^
8. 02:18:766 (1) - This spinner feels really off. It feels like you skipped this part with a spinner. In other words, looks.. lazy lol. Please try this instead. If you don't like that empty space because the HP bar keeps decreasing since there isn't a break, a break works pretty good too:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:30:117 - Add a note to avoid emptyness?
10. 02:52:009 (1) - I still dislike this spinner ;-;

That's all. Good luck!

Kei wrote:

Hey.

• [Easy]

1. 00:30:388 (3) - I dislike this slider because it has 2 repeats when at the start of the song, there's a slider with only 1 repeat. Beginners might think that this one has only 1 repeat like the first one. I suggest you to try something else here to avoid this.
2. 00:34:712 (3) - This is kinda.. nazi. This would look better if you copy 00:32:550 (1) - and replace this slider with the copy of (1) to make a better symmetry.
3. 00:50:928 (3) - ^ just the same thing. Perhaps replace this slider with a copy of the previous one 00:49:847 (2) - for better symmetry?
4. 02:14:171 (3) - Just, the same as I told you about 2 repeat sliders.
5. 02:41:198 (3) - Again, for better symmetry, replace this slider with a copy of the slider 02:39:036 (1).
6. 02:52:009 (1) - I personally dislike this long spinner. It sounds weird and it looks like you didn't wanted to map this part.
   
   Uhmm some sliders have some shapes that can be improved a lot. You should try to make some pretty patterns to give the map some "variety".

• [Normal]

1. 00:20:117 (2,3,4,5) - This sounds really weird. I suggest you to try this instead. I added that (2) of the start at the red tick so it fits with the rest of the map (you placed some notes at red ticks):
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:35:252 (3,4,5,6) - Sounds weird too because you placed 4, 5 and 6 at red ticks. Try something more simple instead. Remember that this is a normal difficulty. I know that you have a easier one, but at least I, don't agree about rhythm with red ticks in normal diffs.

• [Hard]

1. 00:21:739 (4,5,6) - To follow better the vocals, I suggest you to replace this 3 notes with a slider, with 1 repeat.
2. 00:24:982 (4,5) - ^ Replace with a slider?
3. 00:26:063 (7,8,9) - ^ Perhaps replace with a slider with 1 repeat?
4. 00:43:090 - The space between 3 and 4 feels empty. How about adding a note here?
5. 01:38:496 (3,4) - Replace this notes with a slider, so it sounds and fits better with the vocals?
6. 01:50:117 - Feels unnecesarily empty. Add a note here to keep following the music?
7. 01:54:442 - ^
8. 02:18:766 (1) - This spinner feels really off. It feels like you skipped this part with a spinner. In other words, looks.. lazy lol. Please try this instead. If you don't like that empty space because the HP bar keeps decreasing since there isn't a break, a break works pretty good too:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:30:117 - Add a note to avoid emptyness?
10. 02:52:009 (1) - I still dislike this spinner ;-;

That's all. Good luck!

Thanks for mod

Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun.

[General]
The bitrate is at 216. it shouldn't be that high because of the filesize. reduce to between 128-192 kbps to make it rankable.
remove "Dia" in the tags since Dia is on the artist.

[Easy]
I think a slider tick rate of 1 fits with the song. a slider tick rate of 2 gets in the way as you hear so many ticks in this song, and i find it unfitting.
00:19:577 (1) - maybe Ctrl+J to make this path easier for beginners?
00:23:901 (1,2) - maybe do something like this for a smoother flow to the next slider?
00:39:036 (2,3) - same as above but like this. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to this.
00:47:685 (5) - make this a NC because of new lyrics.
00:48:225 (1) - if you follow the suggestion above, remove the NC because the lyrics are still going. these two notes follow "earnin' for"
01:01:198 (3) - make this a NC. the lyrics repeat itself to "good boy".
01:02:820 (1) - maybe add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals?
01:09:847 (3) - same as 01:01:198.
01:53:090 (3) - ^
02:00:658 (2,3) - keep the spacing consistent. as it stands it's at 0.99 and the default DS is at 1.10...well for me that is.
02:14:171 (3) - i suggest not doing 2 repeats because i think beginners would let go of the 2nd repeat which leads to breaking their combo. try to remove the repeat and add a circle to replace for the second to make it easier?
02:28:766 (3) - same as 01:01:198.
02:37:415 (3) - ^
02:44:442 (2) - *nazi* make this slider look like the previous slider for a better flow from the previous note.
02:46:063 (3) - same as 01:01:198.
this map can be better with claps and several finishes. listen carefully to the song, and find where you think it's good to add claps and finishes, because i saw some opportunities on where you can add claps and finishes. other than that this is a good diff. not the greatest but pretty good for beginners to play.

[Normal]
same as easy about the slider tick rate.
00:21:198 - add a circle to follow vocals, and it'll flow a lot smoother IMO.
00:26:063 (4) - make this a NC because of new lyrics, and personally i don't like this slider because yes it follows vocals, but i find the repeat unfitting to the song. try a 1/2 repeat and a circle. i think it flows the the song a lot better IMO.
00:54:171 (1) - put this between the 2 sliders. i think it'd make a nice blanket IMO.
01:01:198 (5) - same as easy.
01:08:766 (4,5) - same as 02:00:658 on easy and same as above.
01:13:631 (4) - same as 00:26:063.
01:17:955 (3) - ^
01:23:901 (6) - align this to (4) so that it'd look like a diamond.
01:41:739 (3) - a NC here because of new lyrics?
01:53:090 (5) - same as 01:01:198.
02:01:739 (5) - ^
02:28:766 (5) - ^
02:37:415 (5) - ^
02:46:063 (5) - ^
same comment about the claps and finishes.

[Hard]
00:30:928 (2,5) - space these out a bit. the overlap looks bad IMO.
01:01:198 (6) - same as easy.
01:09:847 (6) - ^
01:57:415 (4) - a NC here because of new lyrics.
01:59:036 (1) - space this out a bit. the repeat arrow is being slightly covered by the hitburst and i think that can be unrankable.
02:24:982 (8) - i think that this slider can look a lot smoother. you'd make a blanket around the previous slider.
02:37:144 (5) - same as 01:57:415. the end follows the new lyrics.
same comment about the claps and finishes, and the NCs need work. there's parts where you add a combo mainly because of new lyrics, and there's others where you just keep going. try to keep your combos consistent so that it'd be a fun diff IMO.

I guess that's it. GL

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun.

[General]
The bitrate is at 216. it shouldn't be that high because of the filesize. reduce to between 128-192 kbps to make it rankable.
remove "Dia" in the tags since Dia is on the artist.

[Easy]
I think a slider tick rate of 1 fits with the song. a slider tick rate of 2 gets in the way as you hear so many ticks in this song, and i find it unfitting.
00:19:577 (1) - maybe Ctrl+J to make this path easier for beginners?
00:23:901 (1,2) - maybe do something like this for a smoother flow to the next slider?
00:39:036 (2,3) - same as above but like this. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to this.
00:47:685 (5) - make this a NC because of new lyrics.
00:48:225 (1) - if you follow the suggestion above, remove the NC because the lyrics are still going. these two notes follow "earnin' for"
01:01:198 (3) - make this a NC. the lyrics repeat itself to "good boy".
01:02:820 (1) - maybe add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals?
01:09:847 (3) - same as 01:01:198.
01:53:090 (3) - ^
02:00:658 (2,3) - keep the spacing consistent. as it stands it's at 0.99 and the default DS is at 1.10...well for me that is.
02:14:171 (3) - i suggest not doing 2 repeats because i think beginners would let go of the 2nd repeat which leads to breaking their combo. try to remove the repeat and add a circle to replace for the second to make it easier?
02:28:766 (3) - same as 01:01:198.
02:37:415 (3) - ^
02:44:442 (2) - *nazi* make this slider look like the previous slider for a better flow from the previous note.
02:46:063 (3) - same as 01:01:198.
this map can be better with claps and several finishes. listen carefully to the song, and find where you think it's good to add claps and finishes, because i saw some opportunities on where you can add claps and finishes. other than that this is a good diff. not the greatest but pretty good for beginners to play.

[Normal]
same as easy about the slider tick rate.
00:21:198 - add a circle to follow vocals, and it'll flow a lot smoother IMO.
00:26:063 (4) - make this a NC because of new lyrics, and personally i don't like this slider because yes it follows vocals, but i find the repeat unfitting to the song. try a 1/2 repeat and a circle. i think it flows the the song a lot better IMO.
00:54:171 (1) - put this between the 2 sliders. i think it'd make a nice blanket IMO.
01:01:198 (5) - same as easy.
01:08:766 (4,5) - same as 02:00:658 on easy and same as above.
01:13:631 (4) - same as 00:26:063.
01:17:955 (3) - ^
01:23:901 (6) - align this to (4) so that it'd look like a diamond.
01:41:739 (3) - a NC here because of new lyrics?
01:53:090 (5) - same as 01:01:198.
02:01:739 (5) - ^
02:28:766 (5) - ^
02:37:415 (5) - ^
02:46:063 (5) - ^
same comment about the claps and finishes.

[Hard]
00:30:928 (2,5) - space these out a bit. the overlap looks bad IMO.
01:01:198 (6) - same as easy.
01:09:847 (6) - ^
01:57:415 (4) - a NC here because of new lyrics.
01:59:036 (1) - space this out a bit. the repeat arrow is being slightly covered by the hitburst and i think that can be unrankable.
02:24:982 (8) - i think that this slider can look a lot smoother. you'd make a blanket around the previous slider.
02:37:144 (5) - same as 01:57:415. the end follows the new lyrics.
same comment about the claps and finishes, and the NCs need work. there's parts where you add a combo mainly because of new lyrics, and there's others where you just keep going. try to keep your combos consistent so that it'd be a fun diff IMO.

I guess that's it. GL

Thanks for mod Byakugan

Some fixed's

Kawaii!~

Overall:
ClAPS ON 2 and 4

Hard:
00:40:928 (10) - Move this to where the next (2) would end up so it plays better :>~
01:06:874 (5) - Add NC
01:07:144 (1) - Remove NC
01:20:658 (5) - THIS JUMP HHHRRRNNGGGGHH If you're going to keep it, add an NC
02:23:901 (6) - ^
02:28:496 (3) - ^
02:30:388 (1) - Add finish on beginning of slider
02:47:685 (3) - ^

Normal:
02:28:766 (5) - NC
02:50:388 (6) - ^

Easy:
00:26:063 (3) - Unsymmetrical! ;~; It's something with the 2nd sliderpoint being too far away from the 1st.
00:43:361 (3) - Not moe ;~;. Probably make the last sliderpoint go lower

Kawaii >3<`

[General]
The bitrate of your .mp3 file is 216kbps and it's unrankable.

The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps.

About hitsounds, I suggest you to use claps where you used whistles in the refrain. It sounds much better.
If you want a custom clap you can download it from here:
[from Natteke's UserPage]

Clap Packs:

Snare Packs:


Cymbal Pack:

Percussion Pack:

[Easy]
00:49:847 (3) - New combo
01:17:955 (3) - Nazi, but use this code to improve this slider:
01:20:117 (1) - ^ Just move the 3rd waypoint to x:460 y:-4 here
02:02:820 Add circle?

[Normal]
01:10:928 (1) - Remove NC
01:11:469 (2) - Add NC
01:28:766 (4) - Add NC
01:29:307 (1) - Remove NC
01:33:090 (1) - Improve this slider moving the 2nd waypoint to x:223 y:130 and 3rd x:291 y:130
02:02:820 Same of easy, add a circle?

[Hard]
00:39:036 (6) - Add NC
01:05:523 (1) - Clap?
01:06:604 Add a circle with clap?
01:09:847 (6) - Add NC

That's all, good luck with it :3

Thanks guys

Fixed

Perdon por este Super Delay y por hacerte esperar tanto . Igual nunca olvide el mapa, asi que aqui voy

[General:]

- Mp3: Veo que no lo has cambiado aun, deberias hacerlo lo antes posible, porque como ya sabes no es rankebale.
- Kiai Time: Bueno, no me parece del todo coherente este paro de Kiai que hiciste en 02:34:712 hasta 02:39:036. Todo esto pertenece al estribillo asi que todo deberia pertenecer al Kiai Time. Deberias arreglarlo.

[Easy:]

• 00:34:712 (3,4): Esta Nota y este Slider estan puestos de forma cambiada (si queres seguir la vocal y el intrumental correctamente). Si escuchas bien la cancion la parte enlazada de la voz esta a partir de 00:35:252 (Terminando en 00:36:334), mientras que aqui (00:34:712) si hay un enlace con algo es con la frase anterior pero no con lo siguiente por esto debes poner la nota aca (No te olvides de acomodar las notas para no tener problema en el Spacing). Aca te dejo un Screenshoot para que quede todo mas claro
• 01:01:198 (3): Podrias remarcar este 'Good Boy' que aparece aca agregando un New Combo en esta Nota, a su vez se veria mejor por la distancia (en el Timeline) que hay entre (3,4) con el Slider Previo y el Slider Siguiente
• 01:08:766 (2): Por consistencia con tus Whistles dentro de los Kiai (donde siempre pusiste Whistle en donde ella dice 'boy'), debes agregar el Whistle aca, porque es cuando lo dice y eliminarlo del final del Slider previo (1) porque alli dice 'Good'.
• 01:09:847 (3,4): Un New Combo aca tambien, misma sugerencia que en 01:01:198
• 01:26:063 (2): Te sugiero algo sencillo para una Easy, pero que sigue mejor el Ritmo que este Slider en 2/1. Si escuchas bien a la mitad de este Slider (01:26:604) hay un paro en la Voz y un cambio de Instrumental, asi que seria mejor remarcar estas 2 cosas. Para esto, reduci este Slider y hacelo en 1/1 (terminalo en donde mencione el cambio, 01:26:604) y luego de esto agrega una Nota en 01:27:144. Te quedaria algo mas o menos asi:
• 01:53:090 (3): Al Igual que el Kiai anterior, un New Combo juega bien aca
• 01:53:631 (4): Y para seguir con consistencia dentro de los Kiai, el Whistle debe ir en esta Nota y no en (3).
• 02:01:739 (3): New Combo nuevamente
• 02:02:280 (4): Al Igual que en 01:53:631, debes agregar el Whistle
• 02:18:496 (Spin): Deberias mover este Spinner 1/2 hacia atras (hasta 02:18:225), ya que como referencia, ella empieza ese 'Right' largo en este punto, sigue mejor la musica desde este punto de vista. Luego agrandalo en 1/2 para que termine en el comienzo del Kiai
• 02:27:685 (2): Otra vez por consistencia, el Whistle va aca y no al final del Slider (1)
Creo que ya sabes que debes hacer de aqui en mas con respecto a los New Combo y los Whistle. Solo sigue la sugerencia para los otros Kiai tambien.
• 02:52:009 (Spin): Me parece que la frase principal empieza 1/2 atras (02:51:739), por eso pienso que este Spinner deberia empezar en este Tick Rojo, obviamente luego hacelo 1/2 mas grande para terminarlo en donde estaba previamente.

- Buena dificultad en General. Solo que deberias ser mas consistente con respecto a los Whistle como mencione en el mod (Creo que con lo que te di, va a ser mucho mejor y mas consistente ), y luego vi algunos Sliders que no se veian del todo bien, pero no me quize detener en esos puntos.

[Normal:]

Settings:

--> Para la dificultad del map, se me hace que el HP Drain Rate esta algo alto, me parece que jugaria mejor si lo reducis en 1 Tick (HP-1)
--> El Approach Rate no juega del todo bien, esta como algo alto viendo la Velocidad de los Sliders y el BPM bajo, seria mejor que lo redujeras en 1 Tick tambien (AR-1)

• 00:27:685: Los drums se sienten mas fuertes en este punto, que en donde pusiste la Nota (3), por esta razon estoy seguro de que (3) debe ir en este lugar, entonces lo que debes hacer es mover (3) 1/2 hacia atras
• 00:44:712 (4,5): (NAZI)- Con la forma de que tiene el Slider podrias hacer algo un poco mejor para la vista, jugaria mejor si mueves estas 2 notas a x:260 y:208 para que queden en el medio del Slider. Despues vas a tener que mover un poco las notas siguientes, pero no te afectara mucho (creo que con 2 cambios de notas por el Spacing es suficiente ) por esto te lo recomiendo
• 01:19:577: Al igual que en 00:27:685, los drums suenan mas fuerte aca que donde se encuentra (5), asi que deberias mover a (5) hasta esta posicion
• 01:50:928 (x): Para ser sincero, yo agregaria una Nota aca, la verdad entra muy bien con la Voz, el BPM es bajo y es una Normal, asi que se puede arriesgar un poco mas con el Ritmo
• 01:58:766 (1): El Whistle (en el Sliderbody principalmente) es inconsistente con el resto del map ya que en ningun lugar agregaste este estilo de cosas y a su vez no parece jugar con nada en la cancion. Prefiero que lo elimines de ahi
• 02:18:496 (Spin): Mismo que en la Easy acerca de este Spinner
• 02:52:009 (Spin): (^)

No esta mal, quizas algunos stops no me gustaron demasiado porque le sacaban un poco de fluidez al map (especialmente en los Kiai), pero buee... preferi no mencionarlos porque me parece que juega bien de todos modos esta dificultad.

[Hard:]

• 00:21:874 (3,4): Viendo que (4) esta ubicada en 1/4, este Stack no juega bien con respecto a esta nota, pierde algo de fluidez en General. Por esto, prefiero que (4) este desapilado de (3)
• 00:26:198 (6,7): Aca me pasa algo parecido a lo que mencione arriba
• 00:38:766 (5): Esta nota toca bastante la Barra de vida, lo cual no esta tan bueno a la hora de jugar. Asi que deberias mover esta nota algun que otro Grid
• 00:42:280 (3): (NAZI)- Este pattern tendria algo mas de fluidez, si este Slider estuviera Stackeado correctamente con la nota Previa (4). Ademas de esto, si los comparas visualmente te daras cuenta que es mejor como te lo digo yo.
• 00:43:090 (x): Entra bien con la Vocal, si agregas una Nota aca
• 01:02:009 (x): Por que no juegas con los Drums aca? Dentro de todo es una Hard y podes usar alguna que otra variante, no solo jugar con la Vocal. Asi que aca podrias agregar una Nota
• 01:13:901 (6): Como siempre usaste Notas en un 1/4 en esta parte de la cancion (en secciones anteriores), cuando jugue el map aca tambien me lo esperaba, principalmente por la consistencia obvia que tendria que tener el map. Aca donde esta (6), la Verdad no suena nada en la Voz ni en el Instrumental para poder remarcarlo, por esto te sugiero que muevas esta nota 1/4 hacia adelante (Tick Azul, 01:14:036), ese 2-plet que logrgaras con la nota siguiente (7) realmente es muy bueno y sigue muy bien la Voz
• 01:25:252 (7): Esta Nota toca la Barra de Vida, a la hora de jugar el map se ve feo. Asi que, seria mejor si mueves esta nota algun grid hacia abajo para que se vea mejor el map (esta parte principalmente)
• 01:26:063 (2): Este Slider no sigue la musica correctamente, en el downbeat (01:26:604) deberia haber un Stop, porque hay un paro bastante brusco en la cancion tambien. Por esto, te sugiero que este Slider termine en el downbeat, y luego empieces la cancion otra vez
• 01:31:063 (7): No entiendo que quisiste seguir poniendo esta Nota aca, porque la verdad en este punto no hay ningun sonido de Instrumental y mucho menos de la Voz. Por tanto esto hace que esta parte este Overmapped (escuchala en 25% y te vas a dar cuenta). Para seguir mucho mejor el ritmo te sugiero que elimines esta Nota
• 01:44:036 (4,5): Este Jump se siente algo feo de jugar, no sigue del todo la tematica del mapa. Para hacerlo un poco menor y que siga mas con los jumps que tienes en el map, te sugiero un Reverse Selection en (5) (Ctrl + R), luego agregale una Repeticion a este Slider y por ultimo elimina (6), ademas del jump creo que le da un toque especial y una ganancia con respecto a la secuencia del Ritmo con tus patterns
• 01:49:036 (5,6,7): Este 3-plet no entra bien con la musica, viendo que en el Kiai anterior seguiste unicamente la Vocal para esta seccion de la cancion creo que aca deberias hacer lo mismo y no usar un overmap para que el map sea mas dificil porque la verdad es innecesario. Asi que, seria mejor si eliminas (6) de aca.
• 02:14:171 (1,2): (NAZI)- Se ve bien el patron, pero se veria un poco mejor si haces algo como le que te muestro en el Screenshoot de abajo. A la hora de jugar (juzgando el hitburst, etc, etc. xD) a mi entender esta mejor si pones (2) en el medio mismo del Slider (1), Move (1) a x:444 y:288, basta de habla y al Screenshoot:
• 02:18:496: Solo una pequeña complicacion que tengo con este Spinner largo. Tienes ritmo como para mapear desde 02:20:658 por lo menos. Te lo puedo entender con la Easy y la Normal, pero con la Hard creo que seria mejor si te esfuerzas un poco mas para hacer algo un poco mas divertido
• 02:24:982 (3): (NAZI)- Se que suena algo de pesado nada mas xD, pero estoy seguro que se veria mejor si haces este Slider con el mismo anchor que (1) y (2), principalmente por la estetica, ademas creo que no es dificil de arreglarlo por eso lo menciono tambien
• 02:52:009 (Spin): Mismo que las otras dificultades acerca de este Spinner.

Al fin modee tu map!!! Ahora estoy mas tranquilo .
Dentro de todo no esta mal, pero algun mod mas podria pulir mas algunos aspectos que mencione en mi mod. Algunos Sliders no se ven del todo bien pero como dije en la Easy preferi no detenerme en eso y buscar cosas mas importantes.
Te dejo Estrella porque apoyo el mapa y Buena Suerte

Hey

Easy

01:02:820- It would be better if you add whistle (beginning)

Good boy Diff !

Normal

00:25:523- whistle

Hard

01:53:901- whistle

Nice mapset

Thanks guys

Updated :3

Just some suggestions:

Hard:

01:00:388 - At a hit circle here and stack it on 5. See how it feels; to me it flows better and feels less awkward, 'cuz right now this part is kinda empty.
01:02:009 - ^ Similar idea here. Either that or don't stack and just have it be a jumpy group of 3 instead. I would do similar things for any repeating instances of this situation.
01:21:198 (7,8) - Imperfect blanket due to (8) not being symmetrical. You don't need to be perfect, but do try to bring (8)'s slider end down a bit more.
01:44:171 (5) - Try a reverse selection here and see if that flows better for you.
01:51:469 (4) - Make either this jump bigger or the next jump bigger, please, for readability purposes. Either one would do.
01:57:415 (1,2,3) - Due to the emphasis in the music here, I would turn this into 4 hit circles, all a good distance away from each other.
02:27:144 (3) - Try doing a Reverse Selection on this, and then move the following (1) to the right a bit to create some nice circular flow.
02:28:766 (4) - BEGIN NAZI MODE - messy spacing - END NAZI MODE

Nice map.

Normal:

02:34:442 (1) - This could curve more /nazi mode

Easy:

02:15:252 (4) - This could curve more /troll mode

Nice mapset overall. Have a star

Ekaru wrote:

Just some suggestions:

Hard:

01:00:388 - At a hit circle here and stack it on 5. See how it feels; to me it flows better and feels less awkward, 'cuz right now this part is kinda empty.
01:02:009 - ^ Similar idea here. Either that or don't stack and just have it be a jumpy group of 3 instead. I would do similar things for any repeating instances of this situation.
01:21:198 (7,8) - Imperfect blanket due to (8) not being symmetrical. You don't need to be perfect, but do try to bring (8)'s slider end down a bit more.
01:44:171 (5) - Try a reverse selection here and see if that flows better for you.
01:51:469 (4) - Make either this jump bigger or the next jump bigger, please, for readability purposes. Either one would do.
01:57:415 (1,2,3) - Due to the emphasis in the music here, I would turn this into 4 hit circles, all a good distance away from each other.
02:27:144 (3) - Try doing a Reverse Selection on this, and then move the following (1) to the right a bit to create some nice circular flow.
02:28:766 (4) - BEGIN NAZI MODE - messy spacing - END NAZI MODE

Nice map.

Normal:

02:34:442 (1) - This could curve more /nazi mode

Easy:

02:15:252 (4) - This could curve more /troll mode

Nice mapset overall. Have a star

Thanks Ekaru :3

Updated