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Arash feat. Helena - Broken Angel (Dj Aligator Remix)

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riffy
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 6 июля 2012 г. at 14:39:54

Artist: Arash feat. Helena
Title: Broken Angel (DJ Aligator Remix)
Tags: Black_Cherry_Ita bci
BPM: 128,58
Filesize: 3265kb
Play Time: 02:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. BCI's Normal (3,57 stars, 155 notes)
  2. Easy (2,09 stars, 141 notes)
  3. Hard (4,78 stars, 308 notes)
Download: Arash feat. Helena - Broken Angel (DJ Aligator Remix)
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Melan Blue
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Melan Blue
Boring mod from a boring person :3

[General]

Тайминг точный? о.о А то мне кажется как то быстровато… может просто кажется.
Поставь превью на 00:49:927.
Я бы от начала до 00:34:995 поменяла клэпы на вистлы.

[Easy]

00:20:763 (2,3,4) – выдели их и ctrl+r
00:37:328 (1) – убери тут нк и поставь лучше на 00:38:728 (3)
00:41:061 (1) – убери нк и поставь на 00:42:461 (3)
00:43:395 (1) – убери нк
01:07:660 (2,3,4) – здесь расположение нот совсем отличается от похожего момента на 00:20:763. Может поставить их так же как там?
01:12:326 (5) – сюда нк, а на следующей ноте убери
01:27:258 (6) – начни нк тут, а на следующем слайдере убери
01:41:257 (1) – убери нк и поставь на следующем слайдере
01:44:990 (1) – убери нк и поставь его лучше на 01:46:390 (4)
01:48:724 (1) – убери нк и поставь лучше на 01:50:123 (3)
01:52:457 (1) – убери нк и поставь на след. слайдере

[Hard]

Я уже говорила про идею создать в начале секцию 0.70~
00:11:782 (3) – убери ноту
00:42:230 – поставь тут ноту прямо под (2)
00:42:463 – тут начни нк а на следующем слайдере убери
01:05:562 – поставь тут ноту прямо на (1)
01:23:527 (7,8,1,2) – очень странно читается о.о
01:30:993 (5) – нк сюда?
02:04:124 (1) – убери нк
riffy
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Leyko wrote:

Boring mod from a boring person :3 useful mod*

[General]

Тайминг точный? о.о А то мне кажется как то быстровато… может просто кажется. ~_~ возможно. я сам не шарю :D
Поставь превью на 00:49:927. haaai~
Я бы от начала до 00:34:995 поменяла клэпы на вистлы. а я бы пока так оставил о.о

[Easy]

00:20:763 (2,3,4) – выдели их и ctrl+r да D:
00:37:328 (1) – убери тут нк и поставь лучше на 00:38:728 (3) ^
00:41:061 (1) – убери нк и поставь на 00:42:461 (3) ^
00:43:395 (1) – убери нк ^
01:07:660 (2,3,4) – здесь расположение нот совсем отличается от похожего момента на 00:20:763. Может поставить их так же как там? разнообразие :O
01:12:326 (5) – сюда нк, а на следующей ноте убери да
01:27:258 (6) – начни нк тут, а на следующем слайдере убери ^
01:41:257 (1) – убери нк и поставь на следующем слайдере ^
01:44:990 (1) – убери нк и поставь его лучше на 01:46:390 (4) ^
01:48:724 (1) – убери нк и поставь лучше на 01:50:123 (3) ^
01:52:457 (1) – убери нк и поставь на след. слайдере ^

[Hard]

Я уже говорила про идею создать в начале секцию 0.70~ посмотрел, подумал. как-то для меня все эти переходы чужды >3<
00:11:782 (3) – убери ноту угууу~
00:42:230 – поставь тут ноту прямо под (2) o.o конечно! как я ее пропустил >3<
00:42:463 – тут начни нк а на следующем слайдере убери по тикам же
01:05:562 – поставь тут ноту прямо на (1) ага :)
01:23:527 (7,8,1,2) – очень странно читается о.о всмысле? D:
01:30:993 (5) – нк сюда? ага~
02:04:124 (1) – убери нк o.o
спасибо, и за звездочку, и за цвета, и за мод :3
-Nothing-To-Do-Here-
-Nothing-To-Do-Here-
Привет.
Hard:
00:20:065 (6) - делитни , а клэп поставь на 00:19:831 (5) -
00:27:531 (5) - ^
00:54:129 (1) - имхо лучше будет звучать что нибудь вроде этого : (http://puu.sh/vHI6)
01:09:528 (3,4,5) - может лучше так ? (http://puu.sh/vHJL)
01:17:461 (3,4) - я бы на два слайдера заменил (http://puu.sh/vHL1)
01:24:694 (1) - перед этим явно нужна нотка (http://puu.sh/vHLt)
01:31:927 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/vHME может так?
P.S. КАК Я ЛЮБЛЮ ПИСАТЬ ДЕРЬМОВЫЕ МОДПОСТЫ!
riffy
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EvilElvis wrote:

Привет.
Hard:
00:20:065 (6) - делитни , а клэп поставь на 00:19:831 (5) - поправил
00:27:531 (5) - ^ ^
00:54:129 (1) - имхо лучше будет звучать что нибудь вроде этого : (http://puu.sh/vHI6) чекнул дважды. мне слайдер больше по душе
01:09:528 (3,4,5) - может лучше так ? (http://puu.sh/vHJL)не лучше >3<
01:17:461 (3,4) - я бы на два слайдера заменил (http://puu.sh/vHL1) пока не меняю ~_~
01:24:694 (1) - перед этим явно нужна нотка (http://puu.sh/vHLt) да ;_;
01:31:927 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/vHME может так? ага :)
P.S. КАК Я ЛЮБЛЮ ПИСАТЬ ДЕРЬМОВЫЕ ПОЛЕЗНЫЕ МОДПОСТЫ!
thanks, man!
Fumika
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SPOILER
11:37 <-Bakari-> : hey!
11:37 <Netsukawa> : wut
11:37 <-Bakari-> : can you test something? :)
11:41 <Netsukawa> : ok
11:41 <Netsukawa> : link it
11:43 *-Bakari- is listening to (Arash Feat. Helena - Broken Angel (Dj Aligator))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50913]
11:43 <-Bakari-> : here's it ~_~
11:44 <Netsukawa> : Whops
11:44 <Netsukawa> : forget =w=
11:46 <Netsukawa> : That finish Hit Sounds !
11:46 *Netsukawa runs
11:47 <-Bakari-> : :O
11:48 <Netsukawa> : Hit sounds is a bit light
11:48 <Netsukawa> : I suggest you to increase it
11:48 <Netsukawa> : lol
11:48 <-Bakari-> : i'll try :3
11:49 <-Bakari-> : thanks :)
11:49 <Netsukawa> : irc mod !
11:49 *Netsukawa runs again
11:50 <Netsukawa> : Hit Sound , Try to increase to 70%
11:50 <-Bakari-> : :O
11:50 <-Bakari-> : soft hitsounds to 70%?
11:50 <Netsukawa> : 00:04:199 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Change it to Slider ~
11:50 <Netsukawa> : Hmm
11:50 <Netsukawa> : soft 80 ?
11:51 <-Bakari-> : mhm.. kinda loud for me ><
11:51 <Netsukawa> : Then , 70
11:51 <Netsukawa> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/321116
11:51 <-Bakari-> : yea :)
11:52 <Netsukawa> : play much better
11:52 <Netsukawa> : 00:04:199 (3,4,5) -
11:52 <Netsukawa> : 00:06:066 (2) - remove Clap
11:52 <Netsukawa> : add whis tle instead
11:53 <Netsukawa> : 00:06:532 (3) - This too
11:53 <Netsukawa> : I think you should change clap to whistle >_>
11:53 <Netsukawa> : Just soft hit sound
11:54 <-Bakari-> : i'll change them in some notes :>
11:54 <Netsukawa> : Ok :D
11:55 <Netsukawa> : 00:08:865 (5) - Remove Finish ?
11:55 <Netsukawa> : 00:11:199 (1) - ^
11:55 <Netsukawa> : 00:13:065 (2) - ^
11:55 <Netsukawa> : useless finish
11:55 <Netsukawa> : 00:14:932 (1) -
11:55 <-Bakari-> : ok. it was bad idea to use them at soft part :D
11:55 <Netsukawa> : Hmm ~
11:56 <Netsukawa> : yea
11:56 <Netsukawa> : not in Normal HS
11:56 <Netsukawa> : 00:16:798 (1) - Remove finish
11:57 <-Bakari-> : ~done
11:58 <Netsukawa> : 00:16:798 (1) - This note sound weird
11:58 <Netsukawa> : 00:16:798 (5) - Remove and add normal note
11:58 <Netsukawa> : 00:17:032 (6) - Add Slider reverse here
11:58 <Netsukawa> : 1/2 slider*
11:59 <Netsukawa> : Ahh
11:59 <Netsukawa> : Don't add reverse
11:59 <Netsukawa> : add like this
11:59 <Netsukawa> : http://puu.sh/vI5B
11:59 <Netsukawa> : Sounds better :>
12:00 <Netsukawa> : ok ?
12:00 <-Bakari-> : yea~
12:01 <Netsukawa> : 00:20:065 (6) - Remove this note ~
12:01 <-Bakari-> : sure :)
12:01 <Netsukawa> : It's no rhythm here
12:02 <Netsukawa> : 00:33:597 (1) - Remove spinner and add break instead ?
12:03 <-Bakari-> : deleted spinner
12:03 <-Bakari-> : no need to add break :)
12:04 <Netsukawa> : lol
12:04 <Netsukawa> : 01:17:694 (4) - Add note ?
12:05 <Netsukawa> : 01:47:792 (5) - No needed to NC here , remove it ~
12:06 <Netsukawa> : 01:53:159 (4) - Sound weird
12:06 <Netsukawa> : Change it to 1/2 ?
12:06 <-Bakari-> : NC here for avoiding +10 on circle
12:06 <-Bakari-> : yea! changed into 1/2
12:07 <Netsukawa> : Ok , That's all for Hard diff.
12:08 <Netsukawa> : Easy ~
12:08 <Netsukawa> : 00:22:631 (5) -
12:08 <Netsukawa> : Remove NC and NC next note
12:09 <-Bakari-> : fxd
12:10 <Netsukawa> : Ahh
12:10 <Netsukawa> : That's all for Easy
12:10 <-Bakari-> : thanks :)
12:10 <Netsukawa> : and
12:11 <-Bakari-> : feel free to post savelog and get your kudosu :3
12:11 <Netsukawa> : I think audio lead in is too long
12:11 <Netsukawa> : just 1-1.5
12:11 <Netsukawa> : If that fine
12:11 <Netsukawa> : ww

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Cygnus
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  • General
  1. Shouldn't there be a remix in Tags? :O Not sure.

  2. I don't think there's a need for an Audio Lead-In for this song. Remove it.

  3. The diff spread should be consecutive. You can't just have an Easy and a Hard diff, you should map a Normal Diff. This is part of the rules. *suggests to rename Easy to Normal* - Nah, Easy fits this Easy diff. :O Map a Normal Diff please, or try to make Easy Diff a bit harder.

  • Easy
  1. You got some Unsnapped Inherited Green Lines.

  2. 00:18:898 (1) - I suggest that this slider should start on 00:19:131. If you agree, move it to make spacing consistent.

  3. 00:26:364 (3,4,5) - These notes are off rhythm, move them to white ticks.

  4. 00:27:764 - Why is there a break in here? Map this one please.

  5. Bump Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty +1.

  • Hard
  1. You got some Unsnapped Inherited Green Lines.

  2. 00:17:732 (5) - Move 4 grids left for a perfect diamond pattern. (:

  3. 00:38:963 (5) - This note is not stacked with (2) properly.

  4. 00:39:197 (6) - This note is not stacked properly too with (3).
riffy
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Philippines wrote:

  • General
  1. Shouldn't there be a remix in Tags? :O Not sure. don't think so

  2. I don't think there's a need for an Audio Lead-In for this song. Remove it.yea

  3. The diff spread should be consecutive. You can't just have an Easy and a Hard diff, you should map a Normal Diff. This is part of the rules. *suggests to rename Easy to Normal* - Nah, Easy fits this Easy diff. :O Map a Normal Diff please, or try to make Easy Diff a bit harder.
it's already hard enouh to be Normal

  • Easy
  1. You got some Unsnapped Inherited Green Lines. mhm.. 'kay~

  2. 00:18:898 (1) - I suggest that this slider should start on 00:19:131. If you agree, move it to make spacing consistent. disagree

  3. 00:26:364 (3,4,5) - These notes are off rhythm, move them to white ticks. ^

  4. 00:27:764 - Why is there a break in here? Map this one please. players need some time for rest

  5. Bump Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty +1.
yea

  • Hard
  1. You got some Unsnapped Inherited Green Lines.k

  2. 00:17:732 (5) - Move 4 grids left for a perfect diamond pattern. (: and to ruin distance? no way!

  3. 00:38:963 (5) - This note is not stacked with (2) properly. k

  4. 00:39:197 (6) - This note is not stacked properly too with (3).
^


thank you

SO SORRY. FORGOT KD
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716 Girl
716 Girl
Normal
00:13:530 (4) - 
256,200,13530,2,0,B|336:200|368:252|384:324|352:356,1,220,2|8
00:19:829 (2) - нотку забыл
00:20:763 - http://puu.sh/wOVr лучше звучит
00:22:629 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/wOVZ
00:24:496 - http://puu.sh/wOYv
00:26:362 (6,7) - 2 нотки подряд сделай 1/2
01:24:458 (2) - мне кажется конец вправо надо

Hard
00:24:612 (2) - нотку сюда?
00:28:812 (3) - и сюда
00:41:061 (4) - спейсинг?
00:46:078 (4) - и сюда мне кажется
00:53:894 (4) - может сюда
00:52:027 (6,7) - и сюда
00:58:094 (2) - сюда точно надо
01:11:159 (2) - и сюда
02:05:522 (5,7) - перфект стак делай
riffy
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3er123 wrote:

Normal
00:13:530 (4) - 
256,200,13530,2,0,B|336:200|368:252|384:324|352:356,1,220,2|8
mhm~
00:19:829 (2) - нотку забыл да
00:20:763 - http://puu.sh/wOVr лучше звучит да
00:22:629 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/wOVZ попридержу свой
00:24:496 - http://puu.sh/wOYv надо быть попроще ;_;
00:26:362 (6,7) - 2 нотки подряд сделай 1/2 не-не. они тут ок стучат
01:24:458 (2) - мне кажется конец вправо надо чуть вниз и в право

Hard
00:24:612 (2) - нотку сюда? тут либо слайдер, либо так. не вижу смысла в 1/4
00:28:812 (3) - и сюда овермап будет
00:41:061 (4) - спейсинг? для стака же
00:46:078 (4) - и сюда мне кажется да
00:53:894 (4) - может сюда нет. тишина идет
00:52:027 (6,7) - и сюда да
00:58:094 (2) - сюда точно надо +1
01:11:159 (2) - и сюда наверно
02:05:522 (5,7) - перфект стак делай лол, я дно
thanks
Darksonic
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Darksonic
Hello, mod from my queue

Normal:

00:22:629 (5,1): 1,51x spacing seems too much for a Normal diff, reduce it?
00:24:496 (2): Try this, it follow the music much better.
01:52:923 (5): Try this, and if you do it, add NC at 01:53:856.
02:01:789 (6): NC.
02:03:189 (1): Remove NC.

Hard:

00:14:930 (1): This Finish sounds a little loud, maybe replace it with a Whistle?
00:19:596 (4,5): Move them to the center of screen?
00:38:728 (4): Missing a Clap here? or it's intentional?
00:46:194 (5): ^
00:48:061: Move to 00:47:944.
01:22:359 (4): Add NC, vocal starts here so I think it a NC fits here.
01:53:157 (4): This ?

That's all for me, nice mapset. Good luck~ :D
riffy
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riffy

Darksonic wrote:

Hello, mod from my queue

Normal:

00:22:629 (5,1): 1,51x spacing seems too much for a Normal diff, reduce it? meow :3
00:24:496 (2): Try this, it follow the music much better. sorry, i prefer my way ;_;
01:52:923 (5): Try this, and if you do it, add NC at 01:53:856. it's for symmetrical ~_~
02:01:789 (6): NC.
02:03:189 (1): Remove NC. fixed~

Hard:

00:14:930 (1): This Finish sounds a little loud, maybe replace it with a Whistle? fxd~
00:19:596 (4,5): Move them to the center of screen? no, thanks
00:38:728 (4): Missing a Clap here? or it's intentional? fixed
00:46:194 (5): ^ ^
00:48:061: Move to 00:47:944. D:
01:22:359 (4): Add NC, vocal starts here so I think it a NC fits here. sure
01:53:157 (4): This ? i prefer my pattern, sorry ;_;

That's all for me, nice mapset. Good luck~ :D
thank you!
Darksonic
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Why you didn't kd my mod D:
riffy
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Because of terrible memory, sorry.
Tsukasa
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Tsukasa
Btw terrible memory also made you forget PH's mod
riffy
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riffy
>< bakabakabaka
RusselG
RusselG
map is fine from my point of view, good job!
riffy
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RusselG wrote:

map is fine from my point of view, good job!
thanks! then.. why don't you shot a star if you can't find anything wrong?
Kryptogram
600 posts
Joined December 2010
Kryptogram
Hi -Bakari-

General

  1. Nothing
Normal

  1. 00:20:996 (3) - Maybe its confusing this Anti-jump so put it on x:352 y:44 http://puu.sh/yBwX
  2. 00:21:929 (5) - Add whistle, it adds some rhythm to the song
  3. 00:22:629 (1) - Add whistle at the end to add some rhythm
  4. 00:24:496 (2) - Make it a 1/4 slider whit the reverse arrow, follow's better the rhythm and add a whistle at the end
  5. 00:26:362 (3,4,5) - Change this partners like this http://puu.sh/yBDc because it really doesn't follow the rhythm and it plays awkward
  6. 00:27:996 (x) - 00:34:528 (x) - Map this part ? i think its a short song and you should map all that you can
  7. 00:47:128 (1) - Add finish, it really fits in the end of this spinner
  8. 01:05:560 (1) - Add clap in the reverse arrow to follow the claps in the song
  9. 01:08:126 (3) - Add clap to follow hitsounds in the song
  10. 01:09:526 (1) - Add clap in the reverse arrow and remove it at the end, it follows the rhythm
  11. 01:10:926 (2) - Add clap
  12. 01:11:859 (4) - ^
  13. 01:12:326 (1) - Remove clap at the begin, add it in the end to follow the hitsounds
  14. 01:13:726 (3) - Remove clap in the reverse arrow, add it in the begin and the end to follow the hitsounds
  15. 01:37:524 (4) - Add finish at the end, give some rhythm
  16. 01:52:923 (5) - Add finish in the reverse arrow, and add clap at the end to follow the hitsounds
  17. 01:54:323 (1) - Add clap in the end, remove clap in the next note 01:55:256 (2)
  18. 01:55:723 (3) - Add clap
  19. 01:56:190 (4) - Add clap in the reverse arrow, and remove it at the end
  20. 01:57:590 (1) - Add clap
  21. 01:58:056 (2) - Add clap in the reverse arrow, and remove it at the end
  22. 01:59:456 (3) - Add clap
  23. 01:59:923 (4) - Add clap in the reverse arrow, and remove it at the end
  24. 02:01:323 (5) - Add clap
  25. 02:01:789 (1) - Remove clap at the end, add it in the next note 02:03:189 (2)
  26. 02:03:656 (3) - Add clap in the reverse arrow, and remove it at the end
  27. 02:05:056 (4) - Add clap
  28. 02:05:522 (5) - Add clap in the reverse arrow, and remove it at the end
  29. 02:06:922 (1) - En this spinner here 02:08:322 (x) and add finish sounds better
Hard

  1. 00:17:730 (5) - Change this slider for 3 notes http://puu.sh/yBU0 to follow the instrumental in this part
  2. 00:25:662 (4) - Change this slider for just a note whit clap http://puu.sh/yBUV sounds better
  3. 00:27:529 (5) - Remove this note, it doesn't follow any rhythm in the song, if you don't then remove finish because its unnecessary
  4. 01:02:760 (x) - Add a note to follow the vocals
  5. 01:36:591 (1) - Add finish, sounds good
  6. 01:54:556 (4) - What about removing this note, it add some fun while you're playing
  7. 02:08:322 (8) - Add finish
Nice sliders, but hitsounds in my opinion doesn't sounds good, next time try to follow the rhythm of the song :D

Good Luck ! And Star !
Aurele
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DJ Aligator !

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