Timing/General Notes:
I see a fellow /b/ tard.
Timings good all around
Rule #1:
Not too fond of the excess amount of stacks around here.
Using a general Distance Snap of 0.7x
00:08:06 (2,3,4,5,1)- don't stack
00:10:372- Add a break here.
00:13:03 (1,2,1,2)- don't stack
00:16:22 (1,2,3,4) - Minor distance snapping
00:17:29 (4) - Does this have to hide?
00:21:54 (1) - move closer to (5)
00:21:90 (2,3)- don't stack with a faster stack following it
00:25:45 (5) - move closer to (4)
00:27:93 (1) - Move up one grid point (grid level 3)
00:28:64 (2,3,4,5) - Not fond of it, but I'll let it slide for now. Just Distance snap (2) and follow suit
00:31:48 (2) - Again, does it need to hide? Place this slider either above or below (1)
00:32:90 (1) - one grid point to the right
00:34:32 (3,4,5,6) - ugh. Still not fond of it.
00:35:74 (1,2,3,1) - This whole section just looks sloppy and random (in b4 /b/ remark)
Don't hide 00:37:16 (2), and move 00:38:58 (3) uniformly
00:41:77 (1,2,3) - These shouldnt be stacked
00:44:61 (1,2,3), 00:45:32 (4,5,6) - these stacks are fine.
00:47:09 (1) - do not stack PERIOD.
Now comes the stack overkill. The best I can tell you is to change these up, and don't constantly rely on stacks.
00:54:72 (7) - definetly do not stack
Despite my pickiness, i liked what you did with 01:01:64 (1-11)
Not sure about the sprite at the end though. Have fun with that.
Rule #2:
OH LAWL This looks fun.
Alright lets see here....
Oh i am going to nitpick this to the MAX
General Distance Snap of 1.0x
00:06:46 (2) - Distance Snap - and make sure you double check the entire stream after that. They probably will fall out of snap, like 00:10:19 (4) most likely will.
00:10:549- again, have a break here.
00:13:03 (1,2,3,4) - the entire star has to move in closer for the distance snap
00:15:16 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move the stack more towards the left (p.s.- good stack)
00:16:93 (5,6,7) - Move to the left
00:21:72 (2,4) - seem too close together with the rest of the stream, so only move these two
00:23:32 (9,10,11) - random unnecessary stack
00:30:06 (4,5,6,7) - space these out better
00:32:90 (1) - little to the left
00:35:74 (3,4,5,6) - double check your snapping here
00:37:16 (1,2,3,4) - and these
00:42:66 (3) - little bit to the right
yea you might just want to fix up that whole stream right there.
00:46:91 (14) - little bit to the right
00:47:09 (1) - little higher up, and fix the stream accordingly
00:52:77 (1,2,3,4,5) - double check distance snapping
00:54:72 (8) - little to the left
00:55:61 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this looks like a pain in the ass.... but oh so much fun <3
01:05:90 (14,15,16,17) - YeeeaaNO. (@ distance snapping)
OH GOD MY ADHD RAGED