It's not bad at all, there are some parts I don't quite understand the rhythm to though, I don't know how to explain them.
I guess if you want I could take screenshots, here's my best explanation. All the different things with numbers (I don't what they're called, and they a set, perhaps?) on the second one, the rhythm feels totally off. I don't like the way it's mapped right in that part either. The rest is cool though.
Good luck, hope you finish.