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Sugarfree - Makita Kang Muli

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dkun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, July 6, 2012 at 12:48:09 AM

Artist: Sugarfree
Title: Makita Kang Muli
Tags: lepidopodus Sugarfree Panday Tagalog
BPM: 143
Filesize: 6643kb
Play Time: 02:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. lepidon! - Taiko Muzukashii (4.72 stars, 561 notes)
  2. Pag-ibig (4.83 stars, 362 notes)
  3. Pagligaw (1.89 stars, 166 notes)
  4. Pagsinta (3.35 stars, 209 notes)
Download: Sugarfree - Makita Kang Muli
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This map is dedicated to those in a long distance relationship. You have my fullest regards in your journey with your loved one, and I wish you the best of luck. Never give up in your faith and trust in one another.

This is also one of the first Filipino (Tagalog) songs here on osu!.

Forever is a long ways away. But hey, we can wait it out together, right? :)
Seph
FUCK YES PLEASE JESUS OMFG ASHFAHSDF


Album title is Dramachine
put Sugarfree, Panday on tags
Eyenine
I am so following this map.
AngelusMist
woahhh <3
star XD
Saturnalize
Great thing should never die.
I actually want to 5star this, let me get some kd first.
Milkshake
that's sweet
add some dots
Hiseii
This song reminded me of my girl.. :( :(

The song is soo captivating, I love it! :)

STARRED~ <3
NoHitter
Some of the English translated lyrics are wrong or could be improved:
SPOILER
"Bawat sandali ng aking buhay..." translates to "Every moment of my life..."

"Maghintay!" can be better translated into simply, "Wait!" considering the context of the song.

"Paga't sa isang taong mahal mo..." should be "'Pagkat sa isang taong mahal mo..." and should translate to "Because when you love someone..."

(This part below is difficult to translate since it mixes first and second person.)
"Lahat ay gagawin... Makita ka muli..." translates to "You'll do anything... Just to see you again." The first half comes from a second person POV but it's vague enough to work as a first person POV, which is used in the second half. I suggest changing it to "You'll do anything... Just to see her again." to keep up with the consistency.

"Nang tayo ay makapiling..." is in past tense. It should be translated to "When we were together..."

Edit: Oh and remove the dash from "Pag-ligaw", you only add dashes if the word after "Pag" starts with a vowel.
Topic Starter
dkun

NoHitter wrote:

Some of the English translated lyrics are wrong or could be improved:
SPOILER
"Bawat sandali ng aking buhay..." translates to "Every moment of my life..."

"Maghintay!" can be better translated into simply, "Wait!" considering the context of the song.

"Paga't sa isang taong mahal mo..." should be "'Pagkat sa isang taong mahal mo..." and should translate to "Because when you love someone..."

(This part below is difficult to translate since it mixes first and second person.)
"Lahat ay gagawin... Makita ka muli..." translates to "You'll do anything... Just to see you again." The first half comes from a second person POV but it's vague enough to work as a first person POV, which is used in the second half. I suggest changing it to "You'll do anything... Just to see her again." to keep up with the consistency.

"Nang tayo ay makapiling..." is in past tense. It should be translated to "When we were together..."

Edit: Oh and remove the dash from "Pag-ligaw", you only add dashes if the word after "Pag" starts with a vowel.
Will fix lyrics once I'm on my main computer, but just fixed the diff name.
Dark_Ai
*ME CRIES* ;w;
ztrot
lol make easys combos match the rest of the map and also gonna check your timing I get like 5-9ms late when playing might want to look into that also kill that finish with fire >.<b

okay for the love of christ give me like a day to make you good hitsamples trust me you won't regret it
yeahyeahyeahhh
HEY JUST A HEADSUP THE SONG IS IN 3/4 NOT 4/4 GL I LIKED UR MAP.
Topic Starter
dkun
thanks yyy

ps @ any MAT/BAT; he also corrected my offset
Yuukari-Banteki
[Pagligaw]
02:33:988 (1) - this might be too soon after the spinner's end considering its an easy map

Goddammit who put onions in my osu.
Bubbled
Agnes
Hi.


"buong.png" isn't used in the mapset, but it's in the folder. Please remove and I'll give bubble back.
Garven
星 lol orz zzz 3 BAT small posts in a row kbye
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
/me comes to make combobreak
Kawayi Rika
Hello ~ dkun ~ :)

Random check beatmap ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Pag-ibig]


  1. 00:21:401 (10) - Add new combo,large jump here.
  2. 00:25:177 (9) - Add new combo and Remove 00:26:016 (1).
  3. 00:27:275 (4) - Remove circle sound much better.
  4. 01:03:778 (3) - Sound too bad here, so this slider should end to 01:04:198.
  5. 01:09:233 (6) - Add new combo,don't use too long combo imo.
  6. 01:54:548 (7) - ^
  7. 02:02:100 (8) - ^
  8. 02:31:051 (10) - ^
  9. 02:48:254 (3,4) - Should change rhythm like this.
  10. 02:57:275 (1) - This spinner should start to 02:57:485.

[Pagsinta]


  1. AR+1 much better with play.
  2. 00:27:275 (7) - Same as Pag-ibig diff.
  3. 01:36:715 (1) - Make same as paga-ibig diff's spinner.
  4. 02:51:191 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here.
  5. 02:57:275 (1) - Same as Pag-ibig diff.

[Pagligaw]


  1. 00:45:317 (9) - Add new combo,don't use too long combo imo.
  2. 01:03:359 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here.
  3. 01:36:925 (1) - Make same as paga-ibig diff's spinner.

That's al ~ no fast bubble! just some short mod?

Like this will be make unrankble ~ :(

EDIT : you are win ~ so you should find Anges get rebubble~ before popped ~
SuperMIC
sdfjhsdbfhjdbjad

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[Pagligaw]

CS +1 (-1) (make it bigger) (my CS language is different than everyone else's lol) because I think it'd be good for the Easy players, also no overlap, woohoo!

00:41:541 (5) - NC?
00:44:897 (8) - NC?
00:49:093 (1,2) - I noticed this would be an area of overlap if you did use my suggestion, so I think one grid up? You can slightly violate distance snap here, but if you do use my suggestion this would look much neater.
01:59:163 (2) - Finish to stay with the pattern?
02:04:617 (3) - ^
02:06:715 (3,4) - For the finish pattern, put the finish on (4) to (3)?
02:16:366 (3,4) - Again, but the finish on the end of (3) instead of the start of (4)?
02:25:177 (4) - This Finish feels quite out of place, please remove it from this slider.

[Pagsinta]

00:43:638 (3,1) - I have an idea for consistency. Add a whistle to (3) for a setup, and a Finish to (1) for consistency. Remove the whistle from (1) as well.
00:46:575 (1) - Add a Finish to make that other Finish a few notes back not seem like a loner?
01:02:939 (7) - Finish for emphasis on chorus?
01:14:268 (2) - I really need a Finish here for the pattern.
01:16:785 (1) - ^
01:24:338 (4) - ^
01:25:596 (1) - Again for pattern, but this time remove the finish.
01:26:855 (4) - Add a finish to the beginning of the slider.
01:30:631 (1) - Add a Finish to the repeat of the slider, sounds a bit more dramatic imo. :)
01:59:582 (1) - Since the previous (4) changed the hitsound pattern, this needs a Finish.
02:02:939 (2,3,1,2) - I'm finding the hitsounds on the reallly iffy. First off, give (1) a Finish, take away its whistle and give it a clap. Then, add a whistle to its end. Take away all the hitsounds on (2). It sounds a lot neater this way imo, having that repetitive Whistle-normal didn't really work for me lol.
02:07:554 (2,4) - Remove Finish from (2), add it to (4).
02:09:652 (1) - With another pattern change, the start of this needs a Finish!
02:24:757 (2,3) - Add a Finish to (2), take out the Finish from (3).

[Pag-ibig]

OMG SO GOOD AND FUN <3

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Lol, sorry for pretty much a hitsound mod, but honestly, I tried my best but I didn't fing any playing issues! (Except maybe the CS in Easy lolol) Awesome map dkun, as always, and good luck on rebubble. I look forward to seeing this ranked. :P
Topic Starter
dkun

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ dkun ~ :) hello rika, how are you?

Random check beatmap ~ (I doubt this is really "random")

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Pag-ibig]


  1. 00:21:401 (10) - Add new combo,large jump here. this is part of my mapping style, therefore no. the new combo does not match the music. is this a joke?
  2. 00:25:177 (9) - Add new combo and Remove 00:26:016 (1). is this also another joke? does not fit the music as well if I do this suggestion.
  3. 00:27:275 (4) - Remove circle sound much better. there's a beat that this is mapped to.
  4. 01:03:778 (3) - Sound too bad here, so this slider should end to 01:04:198. the song is in 3/4's metronome, as this slider is. it makes sense.
  5. 01:09:233 (6) - Add new combo,don't use too long combo imo. wouldn't fit with the music, no. this is a hard.
  6. 01:54:548 (7) - ^ if I didn't know any better, you're nazi modding me?
  7. 02:02:100 (8) - ^ yeah, i'm pretty sure this is a nazi mod.
  8. 02:31:051 (10) - ^ okay.
  9. 02:48:254 (3,4) - Should change rhythm like this. same 3/4th claim I made earlier, 3 is in the middle of "puso", and 4 finishes it off.
  10. 02:57:275 (1) - This spinner should start to 02:57:485. should it?

[Pagsinta]


  1. AR+1 much better with play. lol what, no
  2. 00:27:275 (7) - Same as Pag-ibig diff. same as above
  3. 01:36:715 (1) - Make same as paga-ibig diff's spinner. same as above
  4. 02:51:191 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here. this isn't unrankable. are you sure you're updated with the rules and guidelines?
  5. 02:57:275 (1) - Same as Pag-ibig diff. n

[Pagligaw]


  1. 00:45:317 (9) - Add new combo,don't use too long combo imo. same as above
  2. 01:03:359 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here. this isn't unrankable. are you sure you're updated with the rules and guidelines?
  3. 01:36:925 (1) - Make same as paga-ibig diff's spinner. same as above

That's al ~ no fast bubble! just some short mod? No fast bubble when you gave me a completely nazi mod that is completely suggestional? For all I know, you should re-bubble this and not Agnes.

Like this will be make unrankble ~ :( (I don't what what you're trying to say, my bubble was already popped?)
sorry, no change. :)
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