1. Raving Mad (5 stars, 1001 notes)
2. Taiko Collab (4,83 stars, 1542 notes)

Barofioso wrote:

Der letzte Spinner ist nicht gesnappt, auch wenns im AIMod nicht angezeigt wird, sollte dieser schon auf nem Strich sein
Ein Vorschaupunkt wurde auch noch nicht erstellt, das sollteste noch nachholen - Naja der spinner ist genau 1/8 nach dem circle also doch gesnappt ._.

Meiner Meinung nach sollteste die Hitsounds nochmals überarbeiten, ist zwar schon super, aber man könnte mehr hinzufügen ;D - Bei den hitsounds war ich mir auch noch nicht so sicher ich wer mal schauen

Ansonsten Gute Map, gefällt mir, ist mir aber zu schnell - Danke

• 00:18:733 (1,1,1,2,3) - the echo of used finish hitsounds doesn't fit as much as the impact, might use custom ones?
  00:26:162 (2,4,2) - as for me, the claps come in conflict with the whistles here since they don't really fit each other, might remove them?
  00:31:305 (7) - set on 4's end since that looks better?
  00:32:734 (5) - a bit to the left to fit the movement of 4 better (X 36, Y 132 for example)
  00:37:019 (4) - why 2 red points all of a sudden? feels too edgy compared to 1 and previous combos, just use 1 red point here
  00:40:448 - this parts sounds somewhat like a typical 'lapfox soundpattern' (banned forever, tu4ar & such got similar... well, beat passages if I'm arsed to find a name for it), maybe map it in compressed 1/4s with a little bow or smth?
  00:42:305 (5) - I'd suggest replacing this with 2 circles and a 1/2 slider below since a kickslider on a red tick mostly feels somewhat awkward (generally, sliders on red ticks can feel awkward)
  00:47:591 (2) - endpoint 2 grids up *run
  00:48:162 (4,5,6,7,8) - I'd prefer if the 1/4s started more on the top and went down into the slider
  
  somewhat like that

  
  00:49:876 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - this feels more like it was each pairs of 2 sounds and thus the square shape doesn't fit too good imo; use something like a zig-zag or back-forth jumps (that overlap a little but not too much) [also, 00:49:591 (6) - this belongs to the same part so replace it by the same thing aswell]
  00:53:305 (7) - adjust this a little more to the shape of 1-5 so it has a consistent distance to these
  00:54:448 (2,3) - feels like those two should have more distance between them
  00:58:734 (6,7,8) - this feels awkward to play; 6 and 7 feel like they belong together, 8 plays awkward and doesn't belong to them in any ways since both the sound and the whistle pattern ended (at the end of 8), so please don't include it in the same pattern - I'd suggest replacing 6 and 8 by circles, then build a pattern out of new 6-9, starting a new slider on 00:59:305 which leads into the next tripplet of hits (00:59:448 (1,2,3))
  
  01:09:448 (2) - this is so close to 1 and 3, one can easily play it as a 1/4 which doesn't make any sense on the music but you know how easy it is to mistake stuff sometimes; in other words, I suggest moving it up so it doesn't overlap with the sliders any more (1.0x snap)
  01:10:162 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - these are focussed on the vocals so it doesn't make sense to use 5 and 6 in the previous pattern; suggesting new combo on 5 and a rebuild of the new combo to make it a whole pattern around the vocals (since this is what the objects sound like they were planned to do)
  01:11:876 (1,3) - align these a bit more to 2's approach circle (might use a 3rd sliderpoint for that)
  01:14:733 (5,6) - not really a fan of sliders that start in the same point but that's up to you
  01:17:019 (6) - shorten this down by 1/4 and add a reverse arrow to make it fit the vocals better (since the other objects are placed on the vocals, this feels like a mistake)
  01:24:162 (6,7) - these feel more like they're asking to be circles than sliders, also the similarity in the sounds (at least that's my feel) would suggest a stack-stack jump
  01:25:019 (10,1) - add new combo on 10, remove on 1 because of the new soundpattern
  01:38:162 (1,2) - these feel somewhat empty but might be me
  01:38:733 (5) - add NC because of new pattern (you got something at least not too-symmetric before, now you got exactly mirrored sliders so that feels better)
  01:39:305 (8) - add a reverse arrow, there are 3 beats in the music that sound alike and belong together so that resembles them better
  01:39:734 - use a 1/1 slider here to fit the beats better than this 1/2-passage does
  01:42:305 (8,9,1) - these feel awkward to play since they start on red ticks; I suggest rearranging this part - 01:42:019 (6) - replace this with a 1/1 slider, add circles on 01:42:448 and 01:42:591 and 01:42:734; 01:42:876 (1) - should be fine then since there are 3 alike beats and give it a reason
  01:44:162 (5) - replace with a circle on it's start and a 1/1-slider on the end, then do further rearrangement as you like to, I trust you enough to find a neat solution /o/
  01:46:305 (6) - I suggest replacing with a tripplet since kicksliders on red ticks are meeh
  01:46:591 (7) - replacing it with a 1/1 slider fits better imo
  01:46:733 (8,9,10,11,12) - I don't see the reason for a stream here, there's nothing similar in the song
  01:48:448 (11) - the end of this feels like it should already be part of a new combo because of the soundpattern, replace with circles and do something jumpy?
  01:49:591 (6,7,8,9,10) - it sounds fine with the stream but again there's nothing behind it in the song
  01:50:733 (3,4,5,6) - feels like the tripplet should start on 3 and 6 should be a standing-alone note
  01:56:448 (1) - adjust it more to 2's approach circle please~
  01:57:591 (5) - move the sliderpoint a bit up-left, right now the curve looks odd
  02:02:733 (6,8) - adjust these more to the circles' approach circles please (use another sliderpoint)
  02:04:305 (3) - I suggest replacing with a circle on the start and a 1/1 slider on where the end was
  02:05:591 (8) - approach cir- *shot*
  02:16:162 (4) - move the second whistle on the reverse-arrow, remove the one on the end
  02:16:591 (1,3,5) - add whistles to continue hitsound-pattern
  02:18:591 (2,4) - add whistles
  02:19:019 (5) - add whistle on the end
  02:19:448 (7) - whistle on whole slider
  02:20:733 (4) - remove whistle on end, add on reverse arrow
  02:21:162 (5,2,4) - add whistles
  02:23:019 (5) - add whistle on reverse arrow, remove on end
  02:23:448 (1,3) - add whistle
  02:23:876 (4) - add whistle on end
  02:26:448 (1,3) - I don't find these sliders very fitting to the rest of the diff, to be honest o3o (so edgy & straight in parts)
  02:42:733 - why is the hitsounding stopping? do not see a reason in the song for that (especcially the big beats sound like they could fit a whistle or finish)
  02:46:162 (1) - approach cir-
  
  02:54:162 - I find soft-sampleset (especcially on this volume) very hard to hear in the following part, also, there's this lack of hitsounds
  02:55:305 (7,8,9,10,11) - add whistle
  02:57:448 (9,10,11,12) - add whistles
  02:59:876 (3,4,5,6,7) - add whistles aswell (for 7, just at the beginning)
  03:02:019 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - add whistles in this passage aswell (not sure about all of them at the current time, we might do that IRC)
  03:04:448 (8,9,10,11,1) - I'd like to have a similar soundpattern of whistles here like I mentioned above but that'd require custom hitsounds, maybe add the soft-whistle to NC:1-sampleset and use it here?
  03:06:734 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
  03:08:734 (8,9,10,11,1) - ^
  03:11:162 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - ^
  03:12:448 (8,1) - didn't realize this was actually a 1/4, might make it more clear by spacing 1 closer to 8?
  03:25:019 (1,2,3,4) - why no whistles here? you used them in similar parts before, why not here?
  03:30:734 (10) - NC
  03:31:019 (1) - RNC

181,223,31876,6,0,B|246:217|284:162|256:88,1,170,0|0

152,95,126019,5,0
236,85,126162,2,0,B|281:99|289:150,1,85
261,229,126448,1,0
288,145,126591,1,0
345,209,126733,2,0,B|431:173|507:224,2,170,8|0|0
318,295,127448,1,0
241,327,127591,1,0
159,306,127733,1,0
98,364,127876,2,0,B|55:347|27:268|88:221,1,170,8|0

LKs wrote:

hi

[Raving Mad]

00:27:876 (1) - x30y256 might be a better way to place the slider, also the other slider in the left of the screen
00:31:019 (7) - at any rate I think the pattern is a bit hard to read, NC here?
00:31:876 (1) -

181,223,31876,6,0,B|246:217|284:162|256:88,1,170,0|0

try this code, which I think make the slider looks better
00:32:734 (5) - rotate this slider clockwise by 20~30°?
00:34:448 (5) - nazi, stack it precisely
00:35:376 (4) - add a note here? either follow the music or balance the density of notes
00:38:162 (8,9,10) - these 3 notes could be improved. The slider could be reshaped to make the blanket better and note10's place is kind of awkward
00:42:448 (7) - clap？
01:19:733 (8) - I noticed some of your sliders are not flawless like this. spend some time on fixing them can naturally improve the whole maphttp://puu.sh/M9Jf
01:28:733 (11) - x225y317
01:30:448 (1) - I'd a 1/2 slider is actually better here, I can understand your intention though. you can use 1/2 slider and add a note at 01:30:662 (2) -
01:38:448 (1) - personally, NC here
02:06:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - the green. you know unnecessary overlaps are not really satisfying so you can try to do like

152,95,126019,5,0
236,85,126162,2,0,B|281:99|289:150,1,85
261,229,126448,1,0
288,145,126591,1,0
345,209,126733,2,0,B|431:173|507:224,2,170,8|0|0
318,295,127448,1,0
241,327,127591,1,0
159,306,127733,1,0
98,364,127876,2,0,B|55:347|27:268|88:221,1,170,8|0

02:48:448 (3) - another slider that could be done better
03:16:734 (1) - NC
03:42:305 (3) - spacing



the taiko is still too fast for me. but it sounds ok

GL