1. Easy (2,74 stars, 54 notes)
2. Hard (4,83 stars, 86 notes)
3. Insane (4,99 stars, 106 notes)
4. Normal (3,44 stars, 62 notes)

JappyBabes wrote:

what

[Luanny PhNyx] wrote:

JappyBabes wrote:

what

Shut up woman, get on my horse.

[Luanny PhNyx] wrote:

NO U.

Rikers wrote:

[Luanny PhNyx] wrote:

NO U.

Get out of my house.

1. 00:03:685 (1) - Probably just use a repeat instead of a circle? Looks much more symmetric.
2. 00:13:885 (4) - Move this ~2 grids down. This will provide better flow with (1,2,3) and some place for (5).
3. 00:14:485 (5) - Since we have that place now, I suggest to move it at least to 48;8. You can lower everything even more (for example, pick all notes until this note and move them ~3 grids down) to make this flow perfect.
4. 00:19:685 (1,2,3,4) - These 4 could been replaced by two mirrored sliders, I think that fits the vocal a bit more :v
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391830 like this could be good, dunno
5. 00:22:085 (4,5,1) - Hm, the triangle could be better. 00:22:885 (1) - place this on 84;96, will work.
6. 00:23:485 (2) - If you apply prev. one, just move this circle 1 grid right.
7. 00:37:285 (6,7,8) - I think you can place here two 1/2 sliders and that will fit better. I mean, emphasizing "takeyou" and "roundthe" with the sliders will look good. Think how can you do that.
8. 00:40:285 (5) - Place this on 40;384. It will make a straight line with (4)'s end and (1)'s start. And still in the borders of the test window.
9. 00:45:885 (6,1) - IMO, the better position for these two is 160;268 for circle (to flow the prev. slider) and 104;328 for the slider (to match distance spacing)

1. 00:03:685 (1) - Probably too curvy for me. Something like this looks better.
2. 00:08:485 (5) - Hm, I don't think that so close spacing is good here, but you can do nothing (due to straight lines and shit :c). Anyway, suggesting the same as above.
3. 00:10:085 (1) - Suggestion as before, AND also move the next slider one grid up and try to encircle it with this one.
4. 00:11:285 (3) - I guess, if you move the prev. slider 1 grid up, this must be moved too?
5. 00:11:285 (3,4,5) - Okay, that shit I'm suggestion ruins everything, so two choices: or you don't fix anything, or you work hard on moving everything 1 grid up. But well, you could try to pick these all 00:10:685 (2,3,4,5) and move them together.
6. 00:18:085 (1) - Move the slider endpoint to 484;228 and replace the next one with it's mirrored copy
7. 00:26:485 (1) - First jump in the map? Hm.
8. 00:28:285 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391843 Make this? Don't want to explain what is here, you'll understand
9. 00:40:285 - Ok I think you need a note here, so my suggestion how to make it:
   00:40:085 (3) at 284;104, at the 00:38:685 (8)'s body;
   new note at 00:40:285 on 180;168 (not on grid I suppose)
10. 00:42:285 (1) - This plays weird, please choose: or delete this note, or add another one on 00:42:685. This all is for consistancy.

1. 00:04:485 (2) - You'd better curve this down a bit so it will not barely touch the next note. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391847
2. 00:08:085 (2) - This must be placed on 00:07:885. Also my way to fix that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391848
3. 00:13:685 (4,5,6) - Can be pretty confusing for new players. Try to make a slider with (5) and (6) or something else, I dunno, just increase readability of this pattern.
4. 00:23:685 (2,3,4) - Replace with the slider with repeat, will be better for a Normal diff.
5. 00:27:685 (4) - I think the rhythm here doesn't fit, you'd better make something like that, usual 1/2: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391852
6. 00:42:885 (2,3,4) - Oh nono, stacking under the slider is so confusing in easier diffs imo.. Do something else please.
7. 00:48:485 (4) - Move it to 00:48:285 and stack under (3)

1. The only thing I can find is that I want to press a button when he says "lick" on 00:07:485. Not sure how to do that.