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Liviu Hodor feat. Mona - Sweet Love

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Topic Starter
kazumikos
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, December 04, 2012 at 6:37:52 PM

Artist: Liviu Hodor feat. Mona
Title: Sweet Love
Tags: Katty Pie Zejky
BPM: 128
Filesize: 5068kb
Play Time: 03:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.98 stars, 441 notes)
  2. Normal (3.55 stars, 200 notes)
  3. Pie's Hard (4.68 stars, 334 notes)
  4. Zej's Easy (0.88 stars, 114 notes)
Download: Liviu Hodor feat. Mona - Sweet Love
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Yo!
Wreath


hello everyone :oops:

[General]
  1. looks fine
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:077 (3) - covered with 00:18:374 (1). so difficult to look
[Pie's Hard]
  1. fine
[Normal]
  1. fine
[Zej's Easy]
  1. slider form is all uneven (just opinion)
sry for short modding :? but i have nothing to say~ :oops:
good luck ;)
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Wreath wrote:



hello everyone :oops:

[General]
  1. looks fine
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:077 (3) - covered with 00:18:374 (1). so difficult to look
ok fixed

sry for short modding :? but i have nothing to say~ :oops:
good luck ;)
thx for modding ^^
Arnold0
From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[General]
There is an .osb file which is not used, maybe you can delete it then full submit?

[Zej's Easy]
00:48:374 (4) - (nazy) May need to be a little changed so it looks same axe as the (3)

[Normal]
00:53:531 (3) - NewCombo ?
02:10:406 (5) - NewCombo ? (PS :Lol I like how this slider looks good even with points like this ^^)

[Pie's Hard]
00:14:624 (2) - Del note and make the (1) slider ending here?

[Insane]
I'm sorry, I found nothing :(

I liked the music and the map, so star :)
Good luck with your map :)
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Arnold0 wrote:

From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[General]
There is an .osb file which is not used, maybe you can delete it then full submit? it's gonna reappear anyway ._.

[Normal]
00:53:531 (3) - NewCombo ? k
02:10:406 (5) - NewCombo ? (PS :Lol I like how this slider looks good even with points like this ^^) fixed

[Insane]
I'm sorry, I found nothing :( ok

I liked the music and the map, so star :)
Good luck with your map :)
thx for help and star :3
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
Offset: 1043


[Zej's Easy]
00:35:249 (4) - try 1 gird up, it will look better
00:46:031 (1) - finish
00:54:937 (4) - try to move to x:344 y:88
01:01:031 - add whistle or finish?
01:43:218 (3) - should use 01:40:406 (1) rotate it by 180° to get this slider


[Normal]
00:20:952 (5) - move to x:172 y:282 (without grid snap)
00:46:031 (1) - finish at start
01:01:031 (3) - add whistle or finish?
03:13:101 (2) - change it to the slider like 03:16:851 (2)


[Pie's Hard]
Fine.

[Insane]
00:55:406 (4) - not stack completely
01:30:796 (4,5) - try this
03:07:945 (5) - suggest stacking with the start of the slider
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Great Mapset
Good Luck ;)
Zejky
[quote="Snowy Dream"]Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[Zej's Easy]
00:35:249 (4) - try 1 gird up, it will look better
00:46:031 (1) - finish
00:54:937 (4) - try to move to x:344 y:88
01:01:031 - add whistle or finish?
01:43:218 (3) - should use 01:40:406 (1) rotate it by 180° to get this slider
-------------------------------------------------------------------------
thx~ for moding
update
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
Offset: 1043 offset 1043 is late by 10-15ms for me :< (tested with od 10) i'll consider to change if there r more mods

[Normal]
00:20:952 (5) - move to x:172 y:282 (without grid snap) in other words stack with 00:19:312 (2) - :>
00:46:031 (1) - finish at start nope, there's no finish here in insane
01:01:031 (3) - add whistle or finish? whistle
03:13:101 (2) - change it to the slider like 03:16:851 (2) k

[Insane]
00:55:406 (4) - not stack completely fixed
01:30:796 (4,5) - try this aww but 01:28:921 (4,3) - unstacked @@
03:07:945 (5) - suggest stacking with the start of the slider nah
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Great Mapset
Good Luck ;)
thx for modding ^^
Poggo

Arnold0 wrote:

[Pie's Hard]
00:14:624 (2) - Del note and make the (1) slider ending here? <--- hmmmmmmmmmmm ok :3
Thx all for mod ^.^

http://puu.sh/Kmtd
[Luxord]
[Mod Request]
Hai hai ;3 ;3

[Zej's Easy]
01:20:718 (3) - Fix the shape of the slider so it fixed the Distance as well(Prev: 1.01 Next: 1.01) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377495
02:52:593 (3) - ^ - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377498

[Normal]
00:57:281 (4) - Move it at X:20 Y:236
02:34:781 (1) - NC is not needed o:

[Pie's Hard]
Omg Y SO PRO? Epic diff no mods <3

[Insane]
01:47:085 (3) - Make it like this, fits better imo - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377503
02:55:171 (4) - Why don't you stack them like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377505

[Comments]
Awesome map. Deserves Rank just coz Kitty's Diff. <3(joke) All maps are nice and I wish you'll get it ranked :3
I want my sign on this map so I give a Star as well :3
Topic Starter
kazumikos

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[Mod Request]
Hai hai ;3 ;3

[Normal]
00:57:281 (4) - Move it at X:20 Y:236 what for? ._.
02:34:781 (1) - NC is not needed o: it's fine here

[Insane]
01:47:085 (3) - Make it like this, fits better imo - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377503 ok
02:55:171 (4) - Why don't you stack them like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377505 hmm ok
thx for modding ^^
[Luxord]

kazumikos wrote:

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[Mod Request]
Hai hai ;3 ;3

[Normal]
00:57:281 (4) - Move it at X:20 Y:236 what for? ._.
Cause of the Distance, next and previous goes same in that position :3
(no kds)
Poggo

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[Pie's Hard]
Omg Y SO PRO? Epic diff no mods <3
ahahaha thank you ^.^
Saturnalize
Okay, I won't write "Go rape Katty Pie" and something similiar.

>Use approach circle to make a neat slider. Not neat, but more blanket. Take an example from first slider on easy diff. You can move 2 dots to make a neater one. http://puu.sh/KygK

=Zej's Easy=
1. 00:16:031 (1) - I think I've explained this :D ^
list of something similiar like this
00:18:843 (1) -
00:23:531 (1) -
00:26:343 (1,1) -
00:38:999 (1) -
00:42:749 (1) -
00:46:968 (3) - A neater one this time, you can use 00:48:374 (4) - , copypasta, scale 2x and remove repeat. Last, but not least, move to the proper place.
00:53:531 (3) -
00:59:624 (4) -
01:28:218 (3) -
01:32:906 (1) -
01:40:406 (1,3) -
02:03:843 (3) -
02:10:406 (3) -
02:16:499 (4) -
02:45:093 (3) -
02:57:281 (1,3) -
03:01:968 (5) -
03:14:156 (1) - This one, should be a symmetric.

2. 00:23:062 (4) - clap?
3. 00:37:124 (5) - Make this opposite with 00:35:249 (4) - , ctrl+ j, and move to the proper place. http://puu.sh/Kz3Z

=Normal=
1. 00:57:749 (5) - How about moving this up to make a diamond pattern?
2. 01:22:593 (4,5) - Either it's ugly or what, I don't like the flow. Remake, perhaps?
3. 03:04:781 - From this part I think it's not good to follow the vocal, try simpler note pattern.

=Pie's Hard=
1. 00:14:156 - 00:16:031 Ohey hey hey it's not audible enough.
2. 00:17:671 (4) - Wouldn't it's better if this deleted? You only use beat on every 2/4. I think this is better, but it's up to you. http://puu.sh/KzxW
3. 00:36:656 (1) - No whistle?
4. 00:45:796 - How about use S:C1 and add clap at 00:45:327 (2,3) - (The (2) is at the end) It's sounds a bit catchy though. Volume 25-30.
5. 01:17:906 - From this part you should add more clap. Kiai times, you know. I mean, more catchy beats.
6. 01:26:343 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Ohey why all of this sudden spacing?
7. 01:28:687 (4,5,6) - Another spacing problem.
8. 01:45:093 (1) - This is too big :x
9. 02:38:531 (5,1,2) - Nope. Make a constant spacing.
There's more inconsistent spacing, you should check it by yourself. It seems that most of your sudden spacing contains bad flow, and somehow not fits.

=Insane=
1. 00:47:671 (7,8) - You may delete (8) and put (7) stacked with the notes before this.
2. 00:48:140 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - How about triangle pattern? http://puu.sh/KA7T
3. 01:19:312 (5) - Make the end near each other so it'll looks more like triangle pattern.

Will continue later. That's all for now, good luck.
Lizellota
Hi~ from my queue~

[Insane]

00:23:531 - add whistle?
00:29:156 (5) - ^
00:46:031 (1) - maybe add finish?
00:53:531 (1) - ^
02:17:437 (4) - x:146 y:225
02:18:257 (2) - ^
02:18:374 - add note here
02:46:031 - x:277 y:222
02:46:968 (2,5) - ^

[Pie's Hard]

00:36:656 - add whistle
01:38:999 - add clap
03:11:812 - ^

[Normal]

Fine

[Zej's Easy]

00:23:062 (4) - clap

Awww. that's all. Awesome map and song ><
Good luck~~ Katty nyaaasha ~
Poggo

Loli Cjj wrote:

=Pie's Hard=
1. 00:14:156 - 00:16:031 Ohey hey hey it's not audible enough. <--- not think
2. 00:17:671 (4) - Wouldn't it's better if this deleted? You only use beat on every 2/4. I think this is better, but it's up to you. http://puu.sh/KzxW <--- hm, this slider sound here good
3. 00:36:656 (1) - No whistle? <--- No
4. 00:45:796 - How about use S:C1 and add clap at 00:45:327 (2,3) - (The (2) is at the end) It's sounds a bit catchy though. Volume 25-30. <--- not think. now it sound better
5. 01:17:906 - From this part you should add more clap. Kiai times, you know. I mean, more catchy beats. <--- claps here ok. if add more, it will be not sound
6. 01:26:343 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Ohey why all of this sudden spacing? <--- bcz it mini jumps.
7. 01:28:687 (4,5,6) - Another spacing problem. <--- it's not problem it jump >.<
8. 01:45:093 (1) - This is too big :x <--- hm, no it's k
9. 02:38:531 (5,1,2) - Nope. Make a constant spacing. <--- no. bcz this combo it is separated. Between notes (4,1) - the same distance.
There's more inconsistent spacing, you should check it by yourself. It seems that most of your sudden spacing contains bad flow, and somehow not fits. <--- You kidding me?? it's a little jumps, if make all diff with the same spacing it will be boring and not intresting. Thx for mod ^.^
Poggo

KersiTyan wrote:

[Pie's Hard]

00:36:656 - add whistle <--- зачем? не стоят тут вистлы по большим белым же
01:38:999 - add clap <--- добавила :3
03:11:812 - ^ <--- добавила :3

Katty nyaaasha ~<--- NOoooo you :3
thx for mod ^^

http://puu.sh/KDRr
Topic Starter
kazumikos

Loli Cjj wrote:

=Normal=
1. 00:57:749 (5) - How about moving this up to make a diamond pattern? then the flow between 00:57:749 (5,1) - doesnt look good to me
2. 01:22:593 (4,5) - Either it's ugly or what, I don't like the flow. Remake, perhaps? well i was just lazy, done
3. 03:04:781 - From this part I think it's not good to follow the vocal, try simpler note pattern.ok

=Insane=
1. 00:47:671 (7,8) - You may delete (8) and put (7) stacked with the notes before this. it's empty w/o 00:47:906 (8) -
2. 00:48:140 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - How about triangle pattern? http://puu.sh/KA7T this will cause bad flow between 00:49:312 (3) - and 00:49:546 (4) - =/
3. 01:19:312 (5) - Make the end near each other so it'll looks more like triangle pattern. hmm fixed

Will continue later. That's all for now, good luck. and i'll have to upload again? :<

KersiTyan wrote:

Hi~ from my queue~

Insane

00:23:531 - add whistle? ok
00:29:156 (5) - ^ whistle here is inappropriate imo
00:46:031 (1) - maybe add finish? nah
00:53:531 (1) - ^ hmm the rhythm doesnt sound like that
02:17:437 (4) - x:146 y:225 oh come on... it's just 2 lvl 4 grids +_+
02:18:257 (2) - ^
02:18:374 - add note here hmm no
02:46:031 - x:277 y:222 fine
02:46:968 (2,5) - ^
thx for mod ^^
zej's easy will be updated later :<
Saturnalize
Short reply to continue mods. Sorry for pics, internet sucks. http://puu.sh/KFIw

No kd
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue


Insane

  1. 00:50:132 - There is another beat in the music here, I suggest adding a note like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/378974
  2. 01:01:148 - add spinner? break is pretty long, a spinner fits the vocal fade-out here.
  3. 01:22:593 (3) - put here plays better imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/378969 then move (4) out a little
  4. 01:44:156 (5) - move 3rd sliderpoint to about (388,184)? looks better if curve a litle
  5. 02:57:749 (1,2) - symmetry._.
  6. great map! like the jumps
Pie's Hard

  1. 00:15:796 (6) - I think it's better if this slider is smoother o.o
  2. 00:17:671 (4) - ^
  3. 00:50:718 (1) - move last point 1grid up?
  4. 02:02:906 (1) - ^ down
  5. 01:29:624 (6) - 3grids up
Normal

  1. 00:19:781 (3) - this goes out of the grids?
Zej's Easy

  1. 00:18:843 (1,2) - blanket
  2. 00:35:249 (4) - move right 1grid
  3. 03:04:781 (1,1,1,1,1) - o.o
nice map :3

Good luck~
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