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Jin - Children Record [Osu|Taiko]

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tutuhaha
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年11月17日 at 21:50:23

Artist: Jin
Title: Children Record
Source: Vocaloid
Tags: vocaloid3 spboxer3 IA
BPM: 210
Filesize: 20450kb
Play Time: 02:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.84 stars, 126 notes)
  2. Hard (4.77 stars, 370 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 575 notes)
  4. Normal (3.15 stars, 169 notes)
  5. Record (4.89 stars, 682 notes)
  6. Sp3's Taiko (4.83 stars, 1106 notes)
Download: Jin - Children Record
Download: Jin - Children Record (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal: 100%
Hard: 100%
Sp3's Taiko:100%
Insane: 100%
Record: 100%
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IA - Summertime Record
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IA - Lost Time Memories
IA - Yobanashi deceive
IA - Souzou Forest
IA - Kisaragi Attention
IA - Outer Science
wmfchris
/me slaps 22haha
Scorpiour
/me slaps wmfchris
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

wmfchris wrote:

/me slaps 22haha
你你你你你
你还有人性么!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
看看蝎子多好人!!!!!!!!
spboxer3
...跪地板
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
噢哟这么一看这时间我发现我今天只睡了5小时还是5.5小时
太可悲了._.
No_Gu
video here : http://puu.sh/MhjE
Jin又开始了。。。
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

No_Gu wrote:

video here : http://puu.sh/MhjE
Jin又开始了。。。
多谢多谢
这首蛮带感就是easy太恶心
wmfchris
~

[Taiko]
00:22:358 - end with a k sounds better?
00:54:287 - 這幾句連接身不太好 特別是00:55:096 (3) - 這個接回去vocal
02:22:215 - 還是不要用slider把好吵 spinner能提早完事好一點

- 1/6 4連太鬼畜了還是移走把
- 加taiko BG 現在的斬了頭不好看
- 和上一首一樣 略太鬼畜
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

wmfchris wrote:

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[Taiko]
00:22:358 - end with a k sounds better?
00:54:287 - 這幾句連接身不太好 特別是00:55:096 (3) - 這個接回去vocal
02:22:215 - 還是不要用slider把好吵 spinner能提早完事好一點

- 1/6 4連太鬼畜了還是移走把
- 加taiko BG 現在的斬了頭不好看
- 和上一首一樣 略太鬼畜
哎!
你..哎我有找你mod太鼓么O口O?!.................
嘛不管怎么样,谢谢了
spboxer3

wmfchris wrote:

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[Taiko]
00:22:358 - end with a k sounds better?
00:54:287 - 這幾句連接身不太好 特別是00:55:096 (3) - 這個接回去vocal
02:22:215 - 還是不要用slider把好吵 spinner能提早完事好一點
^全改

- 1/6 4連太鬼畜了還是移走把
- 加taiko BG 現在的斬了頭不好看
- 和上一首一樣 略太鬼畜
Taiko BG 2ha說要找kana做

thx for mod~
sherrie__fay
[General]
  1. beat snap divisior为什么是1/3..resnap不会出问题吗喂?
  2. 删书签._.
  3. BG吃色真的太重了嘛..(打滚
[Insane]
  1. wocao都210BPM了还AR8玩谁呢
  2. 00:21:429 (4) - NC
  3. 00:25:715 - +break
  4. 02:22:287 (2) - 这个note的位置往屏幕中心放,效果会很拔群
  5. 02:24:430 - spinner消音
  6. 02:48:429 (3,4) - ctrl+R
  7. 02:48:858 (2,3,4) - 这里可以尝试做成十字跳即1-3-4-2的顺序
[Record]
  1. 00:25:715 - break
  2. 01:09:287 (2) - 还是stack在1和4的交叉处吧 这个234摆得超别扭的但是一时我又想不出来什么其他的更好的办法
  3. 01:10:430 (2) - ^
  4. 02:24:430 - spinner消音
[Hard]
  1. AR+1
  2. 00:25:715 - break
  3. 02:22:358 (1) - spinner消音
N和E难度都在02:22:358 (1) - spinner消音【这个spinner听着特别聋
还有就是懒得mod音效 曲子太吵了
ssssssssssssssss
easy
挺好

normal
00:36:858 (1,2,3) - 这个地方人声的音节比较密集,所以00:38:144 (3) - 这个长滑条的设置就显得怪,拆开会比较好。而且这之前你的谱面基本都是跟随贝斯的,节奏比较固定,00:36:858 (1,2,3) -这里你的节奏突然改变了一下,也许你是换了一个跟随方式,但是对于新手来说想找到到底要跟随什么是比较困难的
01:37:572 (2) - 这个长滑条也有点怪,感觉本来应该是note比较密集的地方被一个滑条带过了orz

hard
也挺好

下面两个难度对我来说有点难,我尽力而为吧

insane
00:21:429 (4) - 加new combo?
00:47:144 (1,2,3,1,2) - 这一段打起来觉得怪怪的,把00:46:001 (1) - 00:48:287 (1) - 00:50:572 (1) - 这样的滑条延长半拍会比较好,因为这样做的话与下一个note距离就变成了半拍,打起来会有一中粘连感,和这个慢段对应得很好。如果觉得音效怪的话可以试试把这些滑条末尾音量调小些
02:48:144 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 我去这是要逆天吗,在02:48:429 (3) - ,02:49:001 (3) - 加newcombo提示吧
02:57:858 (4) - 建议加new combo用作提示,02:58:144 (6) - 也是

record
00:42:287 (2) - 用默认皮肤的话会遮挡得比较厉害,


好图给星=w=
Konei
Cool and kawaii song and genius mapping like always :)

Star desu~ :)
Arnold0
From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

Sorry for the message in my queue, I don't know what appened yesterday but tooday I can mod it without problems o_O

[General]
You putted BPM at 210 but right BPM is 105 I belive.
I've modded without changing it since you just putted it 2x higher than it would be.

[Easy]
01:30:858 - Add a slider which ends at 01:31:144 -
01:34:144 (1) - End at 01:35:287 -
01:42:858 - Add a note

[Normal]
00:43:430 - Add a note here ?
02:39:001 - Add a slider which ends at 02:39:572 -

[Hard]
00:29:287 - Add note?
01:46:287 - Add note?
02:18:572 - Add note?

[Record]
00:17:430 - Add note
02:39:144 (3) - Move to 02:39:287 -
02:39:430 - Add note
02:39:572 - Add note
Realy too fast for me *_*

[Insane]
00:17:430 - Add note
02:39:287 - Add note
02:39:430 - Add note
02:39:572 - Add note

Yes, I realy don't know what appened yesterday since your beatmap is nice so sorry for that :O
Good luck with ranking :)
Licnect
HI 中文MOD可以吧~?

一些建議~

[Easy]
01:32:858 (3) - 這個Slider尾巴拉到 01:33:715 聽起來比較不怪

[Normal]
00:19:858 (3) - 這好像有點超出畫面 沒影響的話可以無視
01:15:858 (1) - 這滑條可以移動到 01:15:715 紅線這空的感覺怪怪 加個Note也行
02:51:430 這邊如上 能加就加 沒辦法就無視030

[Hard]
01:33:715 這邊加個東西好像比較不怪

[Record]
有些三連打可以不用放 聽起來怪怪

[Insane]
沒問題

完整度很高 做圖經驗很老道 沒啥魚刺可以挑-3-
希望建議幫的上忙 :)
Leorda
Yo


[Easy]
00:36:858 (1,2) - Extend the slider to red tick for (1) and remove (2) for following vocal
00:38:144 (3) - Move to 00:38:001 for following vocal
01:32:858 (3) - Shorten to 01:33:430 for following vocal


[Normal]
* AR +1?

00:36:858 (1,2) - Extend the slider to red tick for (1) and remove (2) for following vocal
00:58:144 (3) - Move to X:136 and Y:108 for alligning the pattern (nazi)
01:14:715 (3) - I don't think clap in repeating slider is necessary
01:32:858 (3) - Shorten to red tick?
02:09:287 - Add note here?


[Hard]
01:33:858 (1) - These pauses feels awkward for me....
02:57:572 (4,1) - Swap new combo?


Good luck!
JudgeTheDude
Hi, from my modding queue

[General]
Put the Offset at 17572

[Normal]
02:13:572 (2) - Put it at x:336 y:112

[Hard]
01:17:430 Put a note here

Good luck with rankings ^^
NeoRainier
M4M :3
Get ready for a wall of text!

Standard Modding Colours:

Blue = hitsounds
Green = patterns
Orange = New Combo
Purple = rhythm changes
Black = general

[Easy]

00:36:858 (1,2,3,4) - i think that the 2 is unnecessary and that you should go with the slider, like THIS (watch out the timeline)
00:41:144 (4) - add a clap here
00:41:287 (1) - move this at 00:41:430 (change the top of this slider from clap -> empty)
00:42:144 (2) - and this at 00:42:287 (2) -
00:43:287 (1,2) - delete these 2 sliders and replace them with:

  • # 00:43:715 (1) - a slider with a hitsound (clap)===(clap) that ends at 00:44:287
    # 00:44:858 (2) - a slider with a hitsound (clap)===(clap) that ends at 00:45:430
00:45:572 (1) - move it to 00:46:001 and reduce the length, repeat at 00:46:858 end at 00:47:715 (the top of this slider as a finish)
00:50:144 (2) - end this at 00:50:572 instead of 00:50:715
01:31:287 (2) - start this at 01:31:715 and make it end at 01:32:572
01:32:858 (3) - i messed up with the editor lol, but this slider should be at this time
01:34:144 (1) - and this should start at 01:34:001 and end at 01:35:144

01:35:858 (2,3,4) - rewrite this part like in the screenshot: (the (3) has a repeat)

01:36:215 -> delete this inherited point, it's better keeping all claps for every tick
01:39:001 (1) - Now i've got a serious problem, with the new pattern there's something to do with the spacing: you can invert horizontally, but you'll have to do it on EVERYTHING until the break; maybe you can try changing the pattern of the first combo >01:39:001 (1,2,3) -<

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[Normal]

00:37:858 (2,3) - instead of doing beat+slider, go for slider + beat:
  • # slider starting at 00:37:858 and ending at 00:38:858 (HS: top empty and end clap)
    # beat at 00:39:144 (HS: empty)
00:38:358 & 00:38:501: remove these two inherited parts
00:43:572 (3,4,1) - i've got a different idea for this part, check the screenshots :3

^NOTE: check out the new inherited parts -> http://puu.sh/PJUN

00:45:144 (1) - end of this as a finish
00:46:715 (2) - maybe NC here? Due to the big rhythm distance

00:57:001 (1) -make it end at 00:57:430 and put the end of this slider as a Finish
01:33:858 (4,1) - instead of this, put a unique slider that ends at 01:34:572

01:36:144 (7,1,2) - Change this part as in the screenshot
^NOTE: check out the new inherited parts -> http://puu.sh/PKa0

01:44:430 (2) - move to 01:44:572, then shorten it until his repeat is at 01:44:858
02:22:215 (1) - i don't know if it's ok making it start from a blue tick, maybe it's better moving it to 02:22:287?

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[Hard]

00:47:715 (4) - instead of a single slider, shorten it to 00:48:001 and add a beat in 00:48:144 (5) - (HS: slider should be (clap)===(clap) and the (5) empty)
01:12:287 (4,5) - how about doubling the (5), like in the figure (i also moved the (4) to fix the spacing)
01:13:001 (6) - head clap, end empty
01:13:287 (1) - remove NC
01:13:572 (3) - add NC

01:18:715 (2) - something feel strange while playing with the tick sounding as a clap, maybe is better leaving N:C1
01:40:858 (1,2,3,4) - a suggestion for a different rhythm choice:

01:45:429 (1,2,3) - move the 3 at 01:46:287 and then put this 01:46:430 (4) - and this 01:46:572 (5) - (3-4-5 = empty-clap-empty)
02:57:715 (1) - remove NC
(optional) 02:57:858 (2) - add NC

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[Insane]

00:29:430 (1,2,3,4) - even if the rhythm is low they're coming out from nowhere, change it with a more spreaded pattern or two mini sliders
00:35:144 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:22:358 (1) - same problem as [Normal]
02:54:858 (1,2,3,4) - really hard to read at the 1st attempt, raise the the distance of (3,4) or change pattern
02:56:001 (1,2,3,4) - ^


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Record

00:23:715 (3,4) - follow the spacing
00:24:858 (3,4) - ^

00:41:215 (4) - move it in X:376 Y:64
00:41:287 (5) - move it in X:352 Y:60

00:44:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - adjust this part properly:
  • # set spacing at x0,7
    # put 00:45:215 (2) - in X:388 Y:40 & 00:45:287 (3) - in X:392 Y:60
    # 00:45:430 (4) - in X:376 Y:156
    # 00:45:572 (5) - rotate by 13° and put in X:312 Y:248
    # put 00:45:787 (6) - in X:212 Y:276 & 00:45:858 (7) - in X:188 Y:264


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Taiko Modding Colours:

Red = this should be changed
Orange = suggesting a single/double colour change, also Finish Notes
Green = suggesting an alternative pattern,beat positioning
Black = general

Sp3's Taiko

from 00:18:715 (2) - to 00:21:858 (1) - , it's better keeping the d d k d d d instead of the d d d d d d
00:38:430 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1) - - change this k kd d kkddk ddk -> k k ddd k ddk ddk
01:06:072 (1) - move this at 01:06:001 and delete 01:06:144 (1) -
01:10:001 (2) - from k to d
01:16:072 (2) - move this at 01:16:001
01:16:286 (1) - move this at 01:16:358 and make it a kat
01:17:072 (3) - move this at 01:17:001
01:19:358 (3) - & 01:19:572 (1) - delete
01:19:430 (1) - from d -> k
01:43:287 (1) - move this at 01:43:430 and make it a don
02:41:786 (3) - move this at 02:41:715 and make it a kat
02:41:858 (1) - move this at 02:41:930
Lizbeth
Hi~

[Insane]
00:31:358 - There's no sound here in the song, I dont think you should end this slider here...
00:46:001 - 00:59:858 - This section was really awkward to play for me, don't know what would other think, but the slow down and the sliders starting on red ticks, like (00:47:144 (1), threw me off a lot.
01:02:358 - Same thing I mentioned before, there's no sound here in the music, I know mappers do that to add more variety to the rhythm, but sometimes is just looks overmapped, especially on high BPM maps like this. But that's just my opinion, and I noticed you have plenty of these in the entire diff, so you decide what to do. ^^'
01:38:572 (1,2) - In the beginning of the map you have a pattern like this, but is separated by beat: 00:27:715 (1,2). Having this separated by half beat but with same distance in chart might turn confusing.
That's all.

[Record]
00:17:572 (1,2) - damn it! totally couldn't see that coming, are you sure you want to keep this jump at the very beginning? @_@
01:54:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not sure not sure ><~ Wish I could play this map to notice if this is really readable. I guess I'll ask some test players later.

[Normal]
00:28:858 (3) - end on next white tick?
00:33:430 (3) - ^

[Easy]
00:28:858 (2) - end on next white tick
00:34:572 (1) - same
01:31:287 (2) - I think this slider should start at: 01:31:572
01:32:858 (3) - end this here: 01:33:430
01:37:001 (3) - I think this doesn't fit, try to do something else.

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