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Yu Lin Xian - Song of Cao Ni Ma

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popner
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年10月25日 at 12:10:13

Artist: Yu Lin Xian
Title: Song of Cao Ni Ma
Source: Vocaloid
Tags: luo tian yi luotianyi tianyi chi huo chihuo caonima Vocaloid China Lan Jing Ling Zhi Ge The Smurfs
BPM: 127.33
Filesize: 2923kb
Play Time: 01:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.64 stars, 75 notes)
  2. Hard (4.68 stars, 154 notes)
  3. Insane (4.95 stars, 263 notes)
  4. Normal (4.11 stars, 125 notes)
Download: Yu Lin Xian - Song of Cao Ni Ma
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#11
洛天依 - 草泥马之歌(Song of Grass Mud Horse)
by 雨霖仙
http://www.bilibili.tv/video/av310593/
SB: Done!

Heatherfield wrote:

智商堪忧

Lyric wrote:

我是一只草泥马

请听 草泥马之歌

在那苍茫美丽马勒戈壁有一群草泥马

它们活泼又聪明

它们调皮又灵敏

它们自由自在生活在那草泥马戈壁

它们顽强克服艰苦环境

哦 卧槽的 草泥马 哦 狂槽的 草泥马

它们为了卧草不被吃掉打败了河蟹

河蟹从此消失草泥马戈壁
马勒戈壁上草泥马的故事

在荒茫而美丽的马勒戈壁上。生活着一群顽强的草泥马。（因为草泥马实是主要物种，所以马勒戈壁又叫草泥马戈壁）草泥马们克服了戈壁的艰苦环境，并顽强的生活下来。戈壁上缺少水缺少食物，草泥马能进食的只有一种草——卧草。然而卧草一般生长在人类的聚集点附近。所以草泥马一生都是于人类相依为伴的。
　　
在一个草泥马群居点。笔者认识了朝泥族青年，朝泥两次。他告诉笔者部族里只有成年男性才可以配有一匹草泥马。草泥马分为三个品质。最下等才叫做草泥马。中等的叫做卧槽泥马。而最上等的是狂槽泥马。狂槽泥马是马王，要部族里骑术最好的人才能获得。朝泥两次说自己因为骑术好。还没成年的时候就获得了狂槽泥马。说完他立刻露出的腼腆的笑容。随即笔者来到了朝泥两次的家。他的母亲热情接待了我们。喝了些许马奶，就到了睡着了。醒来后发现朝泥两次的父亲朝泥大爷也回到了家。我便跟朝泥大爷聊了起来。朝泥大爷显现出了忧伤的表情：“日子不好过了，我们家以前是买马匹的。现在改行割皮包了。因为草泥马吃的食物卧草几乎全被一种叫河蟹的动物吃掉了。他说他也不知道河蟹是怎么来的。但是随着食物的减少。草泥马数量也在急剧减少。”说罢流下了痛心的眼泪。
　　
鲜红的晚霞和岩石如同一对轻骑。护送笔者离开马勒戈壁，在缓缓的落日下看着一群一群的草泥马湮没在沙尘之中。或许如果不保护环境。最后倒下的必将是人类。
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Heatherfield
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Heatherfield
智商堪忧

深夜床头柜上键鼠成绩
SPOILER

edit:some hitsound mod on irc
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popner
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Topic Starter
popner

Heatherfield wrote:

智商堪忧

深夜床头柜上键鼠成绩
SPOILER

edit:some hitsound mod on irc

好
话说我还没加NC
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
好
Snowy Dream
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Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
卧槽这....
Scorpiour
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Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Timing check~~

BPM:127.25
Offset:105

not very sure about that but i suppose it's better than current~
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
马勒戈壁这是啥
pw384
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Joined January 2012
pw384
Sell a moe XD

图做得比我强多了._.
话说做这首歌的都是什么心态._.

[Insane]
00:02:017 (1) - 这个Slider头貌似没有BGM？从00:02:253开头怎么样._.
01:15:999 (3) - 略鬼畜._.
----------我是分割线----------
00:26:521 - 00:40:657 加一个Kiai怎么样._.
01:06:103 - 01:21:182 同上

gl~笑抽ing..
P o M u T a
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Joined December 2010
P o M u T a
star~ :D
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
sherrie__fay
mod from #modreq

再多的风景也从不停靠
只一心寻找我遗失的节操

[General]

  1. 所有的diff都需要一定的finish音
  2. 这尼玛whistle听得我整个人都whistle了……
  3. 00:25:578 -
  4. 00:40:657 -
  5. 00:49:139 -
  6. 01:05:161 -
  7. 01:21:182 -
[Hard]

  1. 00:53:145 - +note
[Insane]

  1. 00:07:790 (1) - 去掉NC
  2. 00:47:373 (1) - ^
[SB]

  1. t-1.png和t-2.png有点偏 再往右一点就河蟹了
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t-1.png",320,240
 M,0,2253,,252,70
 F,0,2253,2960,0,1
 F,0,2960,8614,1
 F,0,8614,9321,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t-2.png",320,240
 M,0,5552,,202,120
 F,0,5552,6258,0,1
 F,0,6258,8614,1
 F,0,8614,9321,1,0
Aurele
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Aurele
Hi hi.
In general, I really love the hitsounds you have added. But this is weird http://puu.sh/UX1g .

Easy

Circle emplacement
  1. 00:22:280 (1,2) - This is a bad idea or an easy difficulty. It may confuse alot of begginer players. So I'm suggesting you to do something like this.

Normal
HP +1 or maybe 2.
OD -1

Circle emplacement
  1. 01:03:276 (3,1) - I don't really like this, seriously. The spinner start so quickly. I am suggesting you to delete the reverse arrow of the slider and start the spinner at 01:04:218. So normal players could have a little break between the slider and the spinner.

Hard

Circle emplacement
  1. 00:18:274 (4) - This slider would have sounded better if it started at 00:18:039. Delete the reverse arrow of 00:17:568 (3) - and start the slider at 00:18:039. After that, move the slider, if not, it will be a spacing error.

Insane

Circle emplacement
  1. 00:06:494 (3,4) - Try to keep the distance between these. (~1,43x)

Sorry for the poor mod, this map is kindof ready for ranking. Just get some more mod and than MAT/BAT mods (:
popner
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popner

sherrie__fay wrote:

SPOILER
mod from #modreq

再多的风景也从不停靠
只一心寻找我遗失的节操

[General]

  1. 所有的diff都需要一定的finish音 I'm not sure of the position to add finish so I'll keep it temporarily and wait for someone else's suggestion.
  2. 这尼玛whistle听得我整个人都whistle了…… orz
  3. 00:25:578 -
  4. 00:40:657 -
  5. 00:49:139 -
  6. 01:05:161 -
  7. 01:21:182 -
[Hard]

  1. 00:53:145 - +note nope..it is intentional
[Insane]

  1. 00:07:790 (1) - 去掉NC fixed
  2. 00:47:373 (1) - ^
[SB]

  1. t-1.png和t-2.png有点偏 再往右一点就河蟹了 done, thx for code~
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t-1.png",320,240
 M,0,2253,,252,70
 F,0,2253,2960,0,1
 F,0,2960,8614,1
 F,0,8614,9321,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t-2.png",320,240
 M,0,5552,,202,120
 F,0,5552,6258,0,1
 F,0,6258,8614,1
 F,0,8614,9321,1,0


Gabe wrote:

SPOILER
Hi hi.
In general, I really love the hitsounds you have added. But this is weird http://puu.sh/UX1g .

Easy

Circle emplacement
  1. 00:22:280 (1,2) - This is a bad idea or an easy difficulty. It may confuse alot of begginer players. So I'm suggesting you to do something like this. Changed the pattern

Normal
HP +1 or maybe 2. HP+1
OD -1 nope, it's fine imo

Circle emplacement
  1. 01:03:276 (3,1) - I don't really like this, seriously. The spinner start so quickly. I am suggesting you to delete the reverse arrow of the slider and start the spinner at 01:04:218. So normal players could have a little break between the slider and the spinner. fixed

Hard

Circle emplacement
  1. 00:18:274 (4) - This slider would have sounded better if it started at 00:18:039. Delete the reverse arrow of 00:17:568 (3) - and start the slider at 00:18:039. After that, move the slider, if not, it will be a spacing error. sorry no change... I prefer to current state.

Insane

Circle emplacement
  1. 00:06:494 (3,4) - Try to keep the distance between these. (~1,43x) ok

Sorry for the poor mod, this map is kindof ready for ranking. Just get some more mod and than MAT/BAT mods (:
Thanks for your modding!
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
popu-na!


[Easy]
00:29:819 (2) - Add whistle like 00:33:589 (2)? You probably forgot or something?
01:09:402 (2) - ^


[Normal]
* AR +1? Your current appraoch rate is bit slow

00:28:406 (1) - Add whistle at repeating slider?
00:32:175 (1) - ^
01:04:218 (1) - This spinner are too short for beginners and beginners will don't have time to complete this spinner. I suggest you to replace this spinner into slider
01:07:988 (1) - Add whistle at end slider?
01:11:758 (1) - ^


[Hard]
00:26:050 (3) - Shorten to 00:26:285 for better rhythm? Maybe snap at blue tick has a bad rhythm, IMO
00:39:951 (1) - Short spinner is fine, but it's bad while gameplay. Well, it's up to you if you want to change it or not
01:04:336 (1) - ^
01:07:988 (1) - Add whistle at end slider?


[Insane]
00:39:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make a pattern like this? Just suggestion, though http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/403620
00:42:778 (7) - Move 1 grid right for making a curve pattern (Nazi)
00:58:447 (2,3) - This spacing are not equal with 00:58:329 (1,2)


Luo Tianyi? Never heard that before....
popner
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Topic Starter
popner
Thank you leo~
Snowy Dream
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Snowy Dream
@泡泡 你确定累殴打听不懂歌词？
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
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Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
碉堡了
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Mod request from PM Req
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[Easy]
00:09:557 (4) - 大重音 不来一发note么
00:22:280 (1) - 建议这里空出一拍 太密了不适合easy


[Normal]
这normal怎么这么难


[Hard]
00:05:787 (2) - 直接删掉 前面的slider加个return
00:39:833 (1) - 前面的蓝线起吧...有点短
00:53:145 (2) - IMO 这里加个note啊=-=
01:06:104 (1) - 左移一
01:11:758 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:02:960 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这样好看多了..

00:07:436 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 求缩小间距..
00:23:576 (5) - 稍微弯了一点不好看..
00:41:364 (1) - 为毛选在这种奇怪的地方开始
01:04:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 哦草救命
01:19:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不好看=-= 后面重新摆..
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Kin
2,618 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin
From my modding queue

Easy :

00:14:269 (6) - this slider is not really symetric use this slider : http://puu.sh/VVI6
then change this sliders too 00:16:154 (2) - 00:18:039 (2) -


Normal :

Nothing for me ~

Hard :

Nothing too ~

Just some suggestion, you don't need to follow them, but i think it's sound better

Insane :

00:03:078 (4) - remove whistle
00:03:313 (6) - remove whistle
00:04:963 (5) - remove whistle
00:05:198 (7) - remove whistle
00:28:759 (2) - remove whistle
00:29:230 (5) - remove whistle
00:32:529 (2) - remove whistle
00:33:000 (5) - remove whistle
00:33:471 (8) - remove whistle
00:40:068 (2) - remove whistle
00:40:304 (4) - remove whistle
00:40:540 (6) - remove whistle
00:42:661 (6) - remove whistle
00:42:896 (8) - remove whistle
00:44:546 (6) - remove whistle
00:44:781 (8) - remove whistle
01:08:342 (2) - remove whistle
01:08:813 (5) - remove whistle
01:09:285 (8) - remove whistle
01:12:112 (2) - remove whistle
01:12:583 (5) - remove whistle
01:13:054 (8) - remove whistle
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
做的很好 没什么要mod的 送star了 =3=
Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki


Hi, popner

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Fine

Easy

  1. 00:41:600 (1) - I noticed that it doesn't a little parallel. Move 1st point to up 1 grid, and move last point to right 1 grid. Will look better.

Normal

  1. 01:04:218 (1) - Spinner is rather short for a Normal diff. New players may not be able to rotate the spinner in a timely manner. Please fix it.

Hard

  1. 00:05:552 (1,2) - Switch NC, because it's associated with the sound of rhythm in a song.
  2. 00:39:951 (1) - Spinner start at 00:39:833 - (For example in 01:04:336 -.)

Insane

  1. 00:18:864 (2,3) - Move to right 1 grid. Spacing between (1) to (2) is closer than (2) to (3) a little bit.

That's all that I can find them. (If my mod is useless, don't give a kd.)
Nice map, give a star ;)

Good luck~
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