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Nanahira - Nakimushi Girl

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Star Stream
2,034 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Star Stream
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 10월 3일 수요일 at 오후 2:26:11

Artist: Nanahira
Title: Nakimushi Girl
Source: Nico Nico Douga
Tags: hatsune miku vocaloid piichica kakuteip tutuhaha winber1 Guy
BPM: 190
Filesize: 3038kb
Play Time: 02:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.23 stars, 118 notes)
  2. Guy's Normal (4.2 stars, 180 notes)
  3. S.S (5 stars, 545 notes)
  4. TuHard (4.99 stars, 317 notes)
  5. Winber1's Insane (5 stars, 527 notes)
Download: Nanahira - Nakimushi Girl
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Nanahira - Nakimushi Girl

Easy - Me
Normal - Guy
Hard - tutuhaha
Insane - winber1
S.S - Me

9.22 - Pending
Last edited by Star Stream , edited 2 times in total.
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
;)
winber1
4,520 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1
oh yea could you add me to tags ? :D

good luck~~ :3
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
http://puu.sh/13HGc
Hard
Finish
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
:3
you can ignore when my mod you not favorite

　[Easy]

　●　00:51:032 (1,2,3) - i think fit better here it. like this?
SPOILER
　●　01:54:190 (1,2,3) - ^

　[TuHard]

　●　00:30:032 (2) - i think not fit this slider, like this? ( copy 00:28:769 (2) - )
SPOILER
　●　00:36:821 - add note?

　[S.S]

　●　00:04:611 (3) - y:172?
　●　00:05:085 (2) - y:196?
　●　00:05:243 (3) - y:371?

　[Winber1's Insane]

　Seems fine.

noob mod sorry ><
gl ;)
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
In-Game Request. Sorry for the long wait! :|

General
-> All Clear! You're so pro.

Easy
-> Why the low stack leniency? I don't recommend low stack leniency for easier difficulties. I remember doing this on my first map, but a few BATs that modded the map recommend to not use lower stack leniency in easier difficulties, so yeah. Just a suggestion though, you don't have to change it if you prefer it as it is.

00:28:295 (1,2) - These sliders would probably match the music more if you adjust the red anchor on the slider tick. Also, adding a finsh at 00:29:558 (2) doesn't sound too bad either since you can hear the piano chord here.
01:32:716 (2) - Add finsh on slider head? Just because of the slider at 01:31:453 (1). Also, you can still hear a piano chord here.
01:54:190 (1) - Hmmm...How about moving this slider at x:308 y:180 since it looks cool when blankted with the head of the slider at 01:52:927 (3). If fixed above, make sure to adjust the spacing on your next notes.
02:05:558 (2) - Simailar to what I suggested at 01:32:716 (2). Try adding a finish on the head of this slider to match the piano chord.

Guy's Normal
-> No finish except the ending? Unless if normal whistles are your thing. 8-) You might this well add a finish at 01:03:663 (1) to be consistent with 02:06:821 (1).

[b]TuHard
-> Reduce Overall Difficulty -1?

01:23:874 (1,2) - I feel that these slider pattern is a bit sloppy-looking and doesn't flow well compare to your other pattens in the map. Try re-adjusting the pattern in a way so it feels more like a natural flow. Here's an example:
SPOILER

Winber1's Insane
-> Reduce Approach rate -1? Otherwise, I found any suggestions with this difficulty.

S.S
-> I can't really mod this map since I can't pass it. Modding this difficulty may lead to personal bias. I recommend to ask another modder with a higher skill to mod this difficulty. Sorry for the inconvenice.

Good Map as always! It's hard, but worth a challenge! Good Luck with rank! :D
winber1
4,520 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1

BeatofIke wrote:

S.S
-> I can't really mod this map since I can't pass it. Modding this difficulty may lead to personal bias. I recommend to ask another modder with a higher skill to mod this difficulty. Sorry for the inconvenice.
WHOA. LOOK. MY MAP ISN'T AS HARD AS YOURS STAR STREAM. :D
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
Keep the countdown the same in each diff.
Keep the tag the same in each diff.

Offset: 498±2

[Easy]
00:00:499 (1,2,3) - a bit noisy :< Try lower the volume.
01:01:131 (1) - remove finish?


[Guy's Normal]
00:01:769 (3,4) - a bit noisy :< Try lower the volume.
00:26:400 - whistle


[TuHard]
00:01:769 (3,4) - a bit noisy :< Try lower the volume.
00:45:348 (3) - move to x:252 y:40
01:26:400 (1) - finish?
01:48:813 (1) - > > why jump?

[S.S]
00:49:609 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
00:52:366 (2) - umm..try remove this note ? (sounds better to me )
01:25:137 (1,2,3,4,5) - confused ppl @.@

[Winber1's Insane]
Great!
--------------------------------------------------
Wonderful Mapset :3
Nanahira ☆
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
fixed :)

http://puu.sh/19AQc
plz add tag for guest><
Star Stream
2,034 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Star Stream

winber1 wrote:

BeatofIke wrote:

S.S
-> I can't really mod this map since I can't pass it. Modding this difficulty may lead to personal bias. I recommend to ask another modder with a higher skill to mod this difficulty. Sorry for the inconvenice.
WHOA. LOOK. MY MAP ISN'T AS HARD AS YOURS STAR STREAM. :D
LOL, MY WIN! ;)

and thanks for moddings
Deni
Deni

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Easy

00:26:400 (2,1) - Overlapping
00:51:032 (1,3) - Overlapping
01:54:190 (1,3) - Overlapping

AiMod Problems for Easy:

00:13:453 Normal criteria: Note exists 632ms after spinner (less than 1200ms).
00:33:032 Normal criteria: Note exists 632ms after spinner (less than 1200ms).
01:36:190 Normal criteria: Note exists 632ms after spinner (less than 1200ms).

Guy's Normal

02:00:506 (4,1) - Overlapping, not so pretty here.

TuHard

00:09:663 (1,2,1,2) - Very Confusing o_o
01:30:190 (1) - Remove New Combo?
01:45:348 (1) - No need for a new combo here in Hard... Same for all other New Combos you did like that..

S.S

You should explain what kind of difficulty S.S is. For example S.S :arrow: Insane... ( I think?)

Nothing else to say here, Crazy Diff! :)

Winber1's Insane

I don't think clap hitsound fits to this song. :? :? :?
You overused whistle for example here: 00:45:979 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

00:54:821 (1,2) - Overlap doesn't look so pretty.

That's it. If you have any questions contact me ingame or via PM. :)
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy

Deni wrote:

Guy's Normal

02:00:506 (4,1) - Overlapping, not so pretty here. - I think that this point does not have the problem. sorry, no change ><
thank you for mod~ ;)
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
Hi o/


[General]

* You don't use a Storyboard, so you can delete the osb.file and full submit to save some memory. (MAT's may complain about this too)


[Easy]

00:45:979 (1) - I would expect a finish here~
01:01:137 (1,2) - This pattern is a bit confusing for beginners as they can't see the beginning of 2, I would recommend to change it. http://puu.sh/1cjwS for example I think nice of this because it stacks with 2 :3
01:28:927 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Eh, I think this copy-paste is really noticeable and makes feel bored during gameplay. You may want to map soemthing new.
01:45:348 (3) - Move a bit down, it's slightly touching HP bar
01:54:190 (1,3) - This overlap feels a bit uncomfortable, I think you can change it up a bit.
02:04:295 (1,2) - Same as 01:01:137


[Guy's Normal]

00:03:032 (1) - Finish on start to emphasize the power starting part~
00:13:137 (1) - Finish here, it fits very good and all other diff's have it as well~
00:33:348 (1) - ^
00:40:927 (1) - Finish because Kiai time starts ~
00:51:032 (1) - ^
01:01:137 (1) - Finish on start
01:21:348 (1) - NC is pointless imo
01:26:400 (1) - Finish
01:35:874 (4) - I think having a long Slider here is not very good, because on the downbeat should be an NC, the music is really changing there. So you should do something like this imo~ http://puu.sh/1cjLq
01:44:084 (1) - Finish on start because of Kiai
02:00:506 (4,1) - Really ugly overlap with 1, you should move 1 something elsewhere


Good luck~ o/
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
all fixed~
Thank you for modding ;)
http://puu.sh/1deZr
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
HI from my Mod queque (๑╹ω╹๑)/ sorry for delay :3

[General]

In all diff the lead-in is 506 ( 00:00:506 ) ,which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
only 1 diff [Winber1 Insane] have 2400 ms ( 00:02:400 )
all diff should star in the same time you should fix it

[S.S]

00:38:400 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) it's a little bit confusional @@
01:03:032 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you can make it better it's not nice
02:08:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) to much stalk ( ^ )

[Winber1 Insane]

01:06:190 (1) - should be more closer to the end of stream
01:59:558 (2) - stalk it with 01:58:927 (3)
02:09:348 (1) - more closer to the end of stream
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Hi Star Stream :3 As requested

[General]
●fine

[Easy]
●00:06:821 (3) - add clap on the slider's head ? same as here.00:05:558 (1) -
●00:26:400 (2,3,4) - use lower volume?
●00:29:558 (2) - Ctrl + J ? I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
●00:38:400 (1,2,3,4) - gradually add volume?
●00:52:295 (3) - bend slider to the opposite direction ? it looks better
●01:02:400 (2) - maybe confusing many beginners.try making another slider
●01:29:558 (2,3,4) - same as here.00:26:400 (2,3,4) -
●01:32:716 (2) - same as here.00:29:558 (2) -
●01:41:558 (1,2,3,4) - same as here.00:38:400 (1,2,3,4) -
●01:55:453 (3) - same as here.00:52:295 (3) -
●02:05:558 (2) - same as here.01:02:400 (2) -

[Guy's Normal]
00:07:453 -
00:08:716 -
00:09:979 -
00:45:348 (4) -
00:50:400 -
00:52:927 (4) -
01:00:506 (4) -
01:03:032 (4) -
01:57:348 (2) -
02:02:716 (2) -
kiai time を中心にclapを増やしてみてはいかがですか？

nice diff :3

[TuHard]
●use lower volume? since the melody is calmer than previous part.00:00:506 - ~ 00:03:032 -
●00:07:927 (1) - make curve slider? same as here.00:09:190 (2) - , 00:09:821 (2) - , 00:10:453 (2) -
●00:11:716 (4) - bend slider to the opposite direction? I think the flow is good :3
●01:24:821 (3) - Hmm, it doesn't follow the music well.
I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.try this ?
●01:32:716 (1) - add reverse ? and 01:33:190 (2) - move to slider at here. 01:33:190 (2) -

[S.S]
●00:38:084 (9) - add whistle on the slider's head ?
●00:40:927 (1) - add whistle or finish? i think need some hitsound here
●00:51:032 (1) - ^same here
●01:44:084 (1) - ^

[Winber1's Insane]
●00:00:506 - you should start at here. ><
●01:25:137 (7) - add new combo

Hope you fine this helpful :3
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy

alacat wrote:

Hi Star Stream :3 As requested

[Guy's Normal]
00:07:453 -
00:08:716 -
00:09:979 -
00:45:348 (4) -
00:50:400 -
00:52:927 (4) -
01:00:506 (4) -
01:03:032 (4) -
01:57:348 (2) -
02:02:716 (2) -
kiai time を中心にclapを増やしてみてはいかがですか？

nice diff :3
all fixed!
Thank you for modding ;)
http://puu.sh/1g0pK
-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
Hi~! Star Stream!
1:1 Chat! :lol:

SPOILER
[Easy]
pass~
-No problem.

[Guy's Normal]
00:02:400 (4) - Slide head clap add?
00:16:611 (2) - 00:16:453 - 1/2 Silde change
00:23:558 (1) - 1/2 Silde change
00:33:979 (2) - 00:33:821 - Move
00:34:611 (3) - 00:34:453 - Move
00:35:242 (4) - 00:35:084 - Move
00:36:506 (2) - 00:36:348 - Move
00:37:137 (3) - 00:36:979 - Move : http://puu.sh/1iene
00:37:137 (3) - 00:36:979 - Move
00:37:769 (4) - 00:37:611 - Move
00:45:663 - Combo add?
01:02:400 (3) - Slide Arrow 1/1?
01:16:927 (2) - 01:17:084 - Move
01:19:453 (2) - 01:19:611 - Move
01:31:453 (1) - 1/2 Silde Arrow change?
01:33:348 (4) - 01:33:190 - Move
01:34:611 (2) - 01:34:769 - Move
01:35:084 (3) - 01:35:084 - Move
01:39:663 (2) - 01:39:506 - Move
01:37:137 (1) - 01:36:979 - Move
01:37:769 (2) - 01:37:611 - Move
01:38:400 (3) - 01:38:242 - Move
01:39:663 (2) - 01:39:506 - Move
01:40:295 (3) - 01:40:137 - Move : http://puu.sh/1iepQ
02:02:716 (2) - clap add

[TuHard]
00:02:400 (4) - Slide head clap add?
01:26:400 (1) - Finish add?

-No problem.
Good Difficulty.... :o

[Winber1's Insane]
Good Difficulty.... :o

-No problem.

[S.S]
00:02:400 (3) - clap add?
00:12:506 (5) - NC?

Good~~ Ranked hope!! :)
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
FIX some
Thank you for mod <3！
osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: nanahira_cut.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 40769
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nakimushi Girl
TitleUnicode:Nakimushi Girl
Artist:Nanahira
ArtistUnicode:Nanahira
Creator:Star Stream
Version:TuHard
Source:Nico Nico Douga
Tags:hatsune miku vocaloid piichica kakuteip tutuhaha winber1 Guy
BeatmapID:177066
BeatmapSetID:57243

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"loli.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,66390,75395
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
506,315.789473684211,4,2,1,100,1,0
40927,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
50716,-100,4,2,1,100,0,0
51032,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
65558,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
66190,-100,4,2,1,100,0,0
104084,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
113874,-100,4,2,1,100,0,0
114190,-100,4,2,1,100,0,1
129348,-100,4,2,1,100,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 70,255,255
Combo2 : 255,255,128
Combo3 : 255,151,203

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240,308,33506,1,0,0:0:0
312,336,33663,1,8,0:0:0
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452,140,34295,5,8,0:0:0
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372,172,35874,6,0,B|352:240|264:252|224:196,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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456,192,36979,2,0,B|448:292|340:324,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
288,312,37453,1,8,0:0:0
220,272,37611,1,0,0:0:0
168,212,37769,2,0,B|124:144|20:152,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
60,80,38242,1,0,0:0:0
100,12,38400,5,4,0:0:0
100,12,38716,1,8,0:0:0
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228,140,40453,1,0,0:0:0
80,196,40769,1,0,0:0:0
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324,180,42032,1,0,0:0:0
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460,200,43927,1,0,0:0:0
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172,40,45190,1,0,0:0:0
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264,256,45663,5,8,0:0:0
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252,256,47558,1,8,0:0:0
188,304,47716,1,0,0:0:0
108,316,47874,2,0,B|56:308|40:260,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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216,64,49453,1,8,0:0:0
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396,328,50242,1,0,0:0:0
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328,84,60348,1,0,0:0:0
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440,168,63506,1,0,0:0:0
440,168,63663,1,8,0:0:0
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256,192,76295,5,0,0:0:0
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100,84,78821,1,8,0:0:0
100,84,79137,2,0,B|116:180,1,80
120,244,79453,2,0,B|160:236|188:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,56,79927,5,0,0:0:0
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416,176,80558,1,0,0:0:0
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216,128,81190,1,0,0:0:0
216,128,81348,1,8,0:0:0
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252,296,81979,1,8,0:0:0
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192,36,82769,1,0,0:0:0
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132,56,85453,5,8,0:0:0
212,56,85611,1,0,0:0:0
288,84,85769,1,0,0:0:0
344,144,85927,1,0,0:0:0
372,220,86084,2,0,B|424:212|444:168,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
456,100,86400,5,4,0:0:0
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456,100,87032,2,0,B|440:52|392:40,1,80
380,120,87348,1,8,0:0:0
380,120,87506,2,0,B|240:228,1,160
100,260,88137,1,8,0:0:0
36,112,88453,2,0,B|104:60|200:104,1,160
204,176,88927,6,0,B|220:224|272:236,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,304,89242,2,0,B|344:312|384:280,1,80
444,192,89558,2,0,B|388:128|296:144,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,76,90032,1,0,0:0:0
256,76,90190,6,0,B|172:80|120:176,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
84,228,90663,1,0,0:0:0
52,300,90821,2,0,B|92:312|136:292,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
128,160,91453,6,0,B|112:72|192:12,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
212,136,91927,2,0,B|256:68|356:68,1,160
404,128,92400,1,8,0:0:0
404,128,92716,6,0,B|392:172|344:200,1,80
372,272,93032,2,0,B|336:296|280:288,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,232,93506,1,8,0:0:0
144,232,93821,1,0,0:0:0
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256,192,96190,5,0,0:0:0
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240,292,97453,1,0,0:0:0
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280,220,98716,1,0,0:0:0
240,292,98874,1,0,0:0:0
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428,164,99506,2,0,B|344:144|312:44,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,120,100137,6,0,B|16:220,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
36,288,100611,1,8,0:0:0
108,324,100769,1,0,0:0:0
188,312,100927,2,0,B|321:224,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,76,101558,5,8,0:0:0
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100,60,101874,1,0,0:0:0
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156,192,102979,1,0,0:0:0
284,288,103295,2,0,B|252:200|300:128,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,180,103769,2,0,B|416:176|440:124,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
404,64,104084,5,6,0:0:0
404,64,104400,1,8,0:0:0
248,36,104716,2,0,B|156:56|132:164,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
188,204,105190,1,0,0:0:0
268,208,105348,6,0,B|360:212|404:308,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
340,352,105821,1,0,0:0:0
260,368,105979,1,0,0:0:0
268,208,106295,2,0,B|292:168|284:120,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,64,106611,6,0,B|180:132|80:112,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
52,184,107084,1,0,0:0:0
100,248,107242,2,0,B|132:328|240:340,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,196,107874,6,0,B|388:216|416:328,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
340,344,108348,1,0,0:0:0
284,288,108506,2,0,B|236:280|216:236,1,80
248,128,108821,5,8,0:0:0
248,128,108979,2,0,B|180:76|80:116,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
48,176,109453,2,0,B|88:208|84:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
164,264,109769,2,0,B|188:348|304:360,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,284,110242,6,0,B|332:208|240:208,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,128,110716,1,8,0:0:0
324,80,110874,1,0,0:0:0
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332,164,111979,1,8,0:0:0
296,320,112295,1,0,0:0:0
296,320,112611,1,8,0:0:0
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116,56,113400,1,0,0:0:0
192,32,113558,1,0,0:0:0
192,32,113874,2,0,B|204:72|244:96,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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452,280,114663,1,0,0:0:0
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452,184,119558,1,8,0:0:0
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BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Hello! Star Steamz! Mod Recheck time! :D

[General]
-> Is this song actually vocaloid? ._.

[Easy]
00:49:769 (3,1) - (Nazi) Slider 3 is not exactly blanklet with Slider 1. Readjusting this pattern a bit so it'll look something like this:
SPOILER

256,288,49769,2,0,B|196:368|88:344,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
212,208,51032,6,0,B|256:184|300:208,1,89.9999999999999,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:51:032 (1,2,3) - (suggestion)I was thinking something like this XD:
SPOILER

212,208,51032,6,0,B|256:184|300:208,1,89.9999999999999,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,132,51663,2,0,B|304:108|304:55,1,89.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
207,58,52295,2,0,B|208:108|164:132,2,89.9999999999999
01:52:927 (3,1) - Copy/paste 00:49:769 (3,1) and Ctrl+J.
01:54:190 (1,2,3) - Copy/paste 00:51:032 (1,2,3) and Ctrl+J.

[Guy's Normal]
-> Good!

[TuHard]
00:05:558 (1) - (Nazi) Blanklet this slider a bit better. Like this:
SPOILER

228,196,5558,6,0,B|200:260|112:264|80:204,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

[Winber1's Insane]
-> Good, but I don't know where some of your hitsounds are following in the music, especially the kial section. It looks like red tick whistle spam more or less XD.

[S.S]
00:33:821 (2) - (Nazi) Blanklet this slider a bit better. Like this:
SPOILER

156,208,33821,2,0,B|136:300|7:280|16:188,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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