hi~
as requested
[General]
i think Pendulum - Crush is enough (
radio mix should be in tags)
tags:
Immersion (album name) and
Rob Swire Gareth McGrillen Paul Harding Ben Mount Peredur ap Gwynedd Kevin Sawka (band members)
Try tick rate: 2? fits with music better, imo
[Normal]
AR3 is too low for this BPM. i suggest you to use AR4 and OD/HP Drain +1 also, to be more balanced. (it will make your Star diff higher than 3 stars and you will need Easy diff but it's better to map 2 diffs properly instead of making one diff with weird settings, i think)
00:33:143 (1) - it's better to avoid (1,1) atterns for Easiest diff in mapset. also this NC looks kinda overused. try to remove this new combo to make diff more understandable/readable
00:37:282 (1,2) - this pattern is confusing for easiest diff. 1/1 notes suddenly stop and 2/1 beat stacked with previous notes isn't really easy to read. :/ try to make something else without ruining your flow?
my example00:41:075 (3,1) - sounds awkward to me. it just wrong to end slider in the middle of loooooong note! i want you to try something like
this00:45:902 - i don't like how you missed this beat it plays awkward. and also i can clearly hear claps at those two beats. so.. i think it's bette to put circles here.
example of flow00:48:661 - same as above. i think you should put circle here >.</
01:01:075 (2) - i think it's better to start this slider at 01:00:730 - it's stonger beat and it's also the beat where this note actually starts
01:03:143 (5) - slider ends. vocals starts. does it fits? i don't think so. try something else. orz at least try
this 01:28:316 (1) - same as 00:33:143 (1)
01:32:455 (1,2) - 00:37:282 (1,2) -yeah. i sense copypasta here but whatever.
01:36:248 (3,1) - totally off vocals. is it really ok to simply make 1/1 beats everywhere? try something different here, please!
01:39:351 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - since i modded the first half of diff all i see is the same patterns. it's rankable but it's too boring for beginners. try to make something different! something that will make us remember your map! be more creative
02:26:247 (4) - this slider shape could confuse some beginners because they probably don't know how to play this kind of sliders.
02:42:799 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - kinda awkward pattern. i don't really think that it's okay to use 8 1/1 notes in row in Easiest diff. beginners can't click so fast.
03:06:247 (2) - not sure if it's acceptable pattern because part of reverse-arrow is kinda covered by previous slider. if it's possible, fi it somehow, please
also: there's two unsnapped objects
[Hard]
00:32:799 (2) - new combo here to point out velocity changes. it's kinda hard to read/play as is because velocity change is so sudden
01:09:006 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - what's wrong with this new combo spam? it's totally doesn't fits here. fi it somehow, please
01:09:006 (1,1,1,1,1) - becaus of missing beat at 01:10:385 - it probably will confuse players with hidden
02:04:179 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - i think you know what to do.
02:23:661 (2) - same as 00:32:799 (2). you know i won't point out every SV change. so.. check your map and fix them if you want to
02:32:108 (2) - sounds like overmap to me. i don't really think that those 1/4 beats are here
sorry.. i really don't like this kind of music. anyway, hope i helps you. (Insane diff is quite clear, btw)
