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Little Non - Hanamaru Sensation

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DJMax_old
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Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DJMax_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, 10 April, 2010 at 23:05:39

Artist: Little Non
Title: Hanamaru Sensation
BPM: 190
Filesize: 4963kb
Play Time: 03:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Normal (4.26 stars, 318 notes)
  2. Sharon's (5 stars, 663 notes)
Download: Little Non - Hanamaru Sensation
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is my 1st map........I think it is perfect.......How about you?
18/2: add my sister(Saturio)'s diff...thx a lot.....
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Sousei
207 posts
Joined May 2008
Sousei
ahahahah whats up with your name!
awp
osu! Alumni
11,869 posts
Here since the beginning
awp
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
DJMax_old
12 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DJMax_old

awp wrote:

TIMING: I went with a single timing section at BPM: 190.00 and offset: 1230. The drums are a bit human in this so it kinda goes in and out by a few milliseconds. It feels a bit late though.

It might just be my screwing around, but you might need to resnap all notes. I'm not 100% sure, since I played with the timing.

[Normal]
01:37:54 (6) - Sliders like this one are totally unacceptable because it is impossible to tell where the ball is going, and it disrupts the flow of play.
02:01:23 (2) - Another unacceptable slider. Also, it's too close to the note before it.
02:19:54 (2,3,4) - This is imbalanced for a Normal difficulty. Quarter notes at 190bpm is too much, dood!
02:53:65 (4) - This is just a personal preference but I would shorten this slider by half a beat.
03:11:65 (1) - Though this is a minor offender, you should straighten this slider out so it doesn't overlap itself.

[Hard]
I'd rename this to Insane, to start.
01:12:28 (12) - Start a new combo here and space it away from the 11 a bit.
02:13:54 (12) - Same as above.
02:33:44 (12) - It might be good to put some prompt that this slider is double speed, it feels a bit unpredictable.

Overall, you got some pretty fun patterns going on and for the most part made good use of the space around the playfield, so it shouldn't take much to get this sucker going.









done!!!
yaya
osu! Alumni
1,164 posts
Joined November 2008
yaya
Timing:
Sorry I'm using my notebook and there's no mouse . so i cant test it .


Normal:
You use 1/8 beat snap?? i think 1/4 is enough . change to 1/4 . and resnap all notes.
Why your DS sometimes 0.8 sometimes 0.9 sometimes1.0. plz choose one . and replace all notes.

00:03:404 - remove this section line . i think it's useless. :(
00:05:969 - ^ :(
01:05:009 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - oh. it's awesome in normal. :?
02:23:208 - remove this section line . :(
03:04:034 (1) - jump jump jump . :o
02:19:520 (2,3) - for a normal . i dont like 1/4 beat because it's hard and it looks a little hard to read. :cry:

Hard:
00:03:404 - remove this section line . i think it's useless. ;)
00:05:969 - ^
01:12:271 (1) - too close to 11 slider :!:
02:13:521 (1) - ^
02:23:208 - remove this section line . 8-)

for hard . i really don't like a map made by Ctrl+c and Ctrl+v . try to make some strange.after all,this is your first map . Great job.
DJMax_old
12 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DJMax_old

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

Timing:
Sorry I'm using my notebook and there's no mouse . so i cant test it .


Normal:
You use 1/8 beat snap?? i think 1/4 is enough . change to 1/4 . and resnap all notes.
Why your DS sometimes 0.8 sometimes 0.9 sometimes1.0. plz choose one . and replace all notes.

00:03:404 - remove this section line . i think it's useless. :(
00:05:969 - ^ :(
01:05:009 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - oh. it's awesome in normal. :?
02:23:208 - remove this section line . :(
03:04:034 (1) - jump jump jump . :o
02:19:520 (2,3) - for a normal . i dont like 1/4 beat because it's hard and it looks a little hard to read. :cry:

Hard:
00:03:404 - remove this section line . i think it's useless. ;)
00:05:969 - ^
01:12:271 (1) - too close to 11 slider :!:
02:13:521 (1) - ^
02:23:208 - remove this section line . 8-)

for hard . i really don't like a map made by Ctrl+c and Ctrl+v . try to make some strange.after all,this is your first map . Great job.
done
DJMax_old
12 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DJMax_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
starred cus it needs priority and has already been starred~
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Mianki
Normal:

-02:42:883 I would add one more circle here

Hard:

Can't find any probs :P


Normal felt a bit repetitive, nothing else wrong with it and Hard was okay.
Good map :D
Star~

Saturio
339 posts
Joined July 2008
Saturio

Mianki wrote:

Normal:

-02:42:883 I would add one more circle here

Hard:

Can't find any probs :P


Normal felt a bit repetitive, nothing else wrong with it and Hard was okay.
Good map :D
Star~
I think you are DJPop#2... my younger brother
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens

DJMax wrote:

This is my 1st map........I think it is perfect.......How about you?
Not the perfect beatmap, but pretty good for your first. :)

[Overall]
- No source? How can I know where did this song came from, then?

[Timing]
I'll hardly believe that the BPM is 190.04.
Use this:

  1. BPM: 190
  2. Offset: 1,230
This offset may be a little sloppy though, I can hardly hear something right now.
Don't forget to Resnap & Recheck everything after you fix the Timing!

[Normal]
00:33:12 (3) - Doesn't sounds really good...
00:50:17 (2) - Move it 1/2 foward? You'll need to adjust the spacing after fixing then.
00:53:96 (1,2,3) - Doesn't sounds really good either. Also, may I add, this whole section is just copy-pasted from before... It doesn't really fits.
01:16:70 (6) - Doesn't sounds good.
01:32:80 (1) - This beat seems kinda extra.
01:37:23 (5) - ^, and move the next slider 1 whole tick earlier.
01:38:80 (x) - Add a beat here.
To be continued...

So yeah, you have a strange rhythm sense. My hint is to play more ranked beatmaps, listen to the song more, etc...

~ ~ ~

I haven't checked the rest of Normal and the whole [Hard] difficulty, just because I'm out of time. Be sure to fix this first!
I'll check it again later.
Dean
145 posts
Joined November 2008
Dean
Nice map.

Normal:
02:16:36 (10) - moce this to the white tick.
02:19:52 (2) - this is your only beats placed on a 1/4 tick? Seems to not fit the song.
02:38:77 (1) - perhaps extend this by 1/2 beat?
03:08:45 (8,9,10,11,12,1,1) - maybe place one more beat before the slider?

Hard:
02:58:35 (5) - I think you should shorten this by one repeat.
03:11:61 (1) - make this longer?
Why are there only claps in the first half of Hard? Why not the rest of Hard or Normal?

Sorry if you do not like my suggestions.
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
ohh,,

I very like this note style ♥

Now i try to play full combo >v< ...but not yet.... =w="

ps. sorry about my bad ENG.
mm201
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4,495 posts
Joined August 2008
mm201
-30ms to the offset. (Sorry awp :()

Normal:
  1. 00:10:07 (1,2,3) - Finish on each of these
  2. 01:20:49 (1) - Finish on the end
  3. 01:21:75 (2,3) - And on both of these
  4. 01:35:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Claustrophobic spacing which is smaller than the rest of the map
  5. 02:03:12 (1,3) - Finishes
  6. 02:16:30 (10) - Move forward by a 1/4.
  7. 02:16:62 (1) - Lengthen by a 1/4.
  8. 02:17:88 (2,3,4) - Move each forward by a 1/4.
  9. 02:19:54 (2,3,4) - wtf
  10. 03:02:17 (1) - Finish on end
  11. 03:03:44 (2,3) - And on these
  12. 03:04:07 (1,3) - Ugly overlap
  13. 03:12:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Weird & squished
Hard:
  1. 00:47:33 (7,8) - Ugly overlap
  2. 01:01:86 (1,2) - Ugly overlap
  3. 01:48:59 (7,8) - Ugly... you get the idea. Try moving up to a higher grid snap if you can't put notes near slider ends where you want them.
  4. 02:03:12 (1) - Remove the New Combo.
  5. 02:19:54 (3,4,5,6,7) - lol
  6. 02:19:94 - Another note here? :P
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
*star*
quintessence
88 posts
Joined September 2009
quintessence
Good song!

☆Star
mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
:) :) :)
Chacha17
501 posts
Joined April 2009
Chacha17
Very nice map. :D

fun to play.

i dunno if it's just me but i can barely hear the beats. Maybe making the volume higher by 1 or 2 ticks would be bad cool.
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Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
Yeah, I know you asked me days before, and I'm sorry I wasn't able to get to it until now. I hope you accept this apology.

Anyway~ Onward to the modding. This map is a refreshing change of pace from what I seem to have played, and I love to see a remap of this song! Kudos to you.

[Normal]:

Can you have the same audio volume for this as [Hard]? I like that volume more, and many players' already deaf ears will thank you. :P On the other hand, if you feel [Hard]'s volume is a bit too low, then up it by a wee bit and make [Normal] that.

01:37:054 (6,7) - Well, this is my personal opinion. It's okay if you don't do it. I feel this doesn't seem to fit the song...though I don't know what you're going with this, so if you have some idea on it, go for it.
02:16:030 (10,1,2,3,4) - Did a resnap go wrong here?
02:19:054 (2,3,4) - Haha, random hard part. For the win or for the loss? My recommendation is to nerf it and make it easier.

[Hard]:
03:11:096 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is the best lip ever. (No need to change, I love it)
Kujo
149 posts
Joined July 2009
Kujo
this map is awesome.

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