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in normal mode :
on 00:58:00 to 01:04:00 and on 01:05:00 to 01:19:00 spacing too long, should had a break time.
i suggest u to made the normal mode more harder, but all its up to u.
just for info, i downloaded your map at 01 March '09.
on 00:58:00 to 01:04:00 and on 01:05:00 to 01:19:00 spacing too long, should had a break time.
i suggest u to made the normal mode more harder, but all its up to u.
just for info, i downloaded your map at 01 March '09.
Topic Starter
Thanks for mod, but please remember that in the *help* forum, incomplete WIP's may be posted.
I also plan to make a Hard. (No insane, this song is too relaxed for anything harder than a hard).
Edit: now I'm finished.
I also plan to make a Hard. (No insane, this song is too relaxed for anything harder than a hard).
Edit: now I'm finished.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding mineyeob!
[Easy]
1:27:996(6)-> New Combo.
Yeah, that really is a new combo. (Changed)
[Hard]
28:945(2)-> Spacing is not good :p
So I spaced it correctly (according to what distance snap is telling me), and made it more confusing!
Oh well, this is [Hard]. (Changed)
48:939(1)~(9)-> Arrange them.
what? They're already arranged. It's a zig-zag pattern! (No change)
59:787(3)-> Too close from (2)
Fixed. (Changed)
1:26:263(3)-> New combo.
I assume you meant (8) ? Anyway, (Changed).
Edit: sorry about that.
If I've missed anyone else's kudosu elsewhere, please PM me and I'll review my threads.
[Easy]
1:27:996(6)-> New Combo.
Yeah, that really is a new combo. (Changed)
[Hard]
28:945(2)-> Spacing is not good :p
So I spaced it correctly (according to what distance snap is telling me), and made it more confusing!
Oh well, this is [Hard]. (Changed)
48:939(1)~(9)-> Arrange them.
what? They're already arranged. It's a zig-zag pattern! (No change)
59:787(3)-> Too close from (2)
Fixed. (Changed)
1:26:263(3)-> New combo.
I assume you meant (8) ? Anyway, (Changed).
Edit: sorry about that.
If I've missed anyone else's kudosu elsewhere, please PM me and I'll review my threads.This beatmap is beautiful...Reminds me of the beauty of To Zanarkand. Haha...That being said, there wasn't really much to check out. There's not so many errors that I noticed.
[Easy]:
Nothing particularly bad.
[Hard]:
00:11:34 (8) - Perhaps a new combo here?
00:48:93 (1) - I understand what Minyeob means by 'arrange them'. (1) is inconsistent with the zigzag pattern the rest of the circles are going through, making it look kind of ugly. I think it'll do by moving it 1 down on Grid Level 3. Even after this the zigzag still looks funny by the end. If you can, maybe do a whole revision of it? That's optional though. Moving (1) 1 down on Grid Level 3 is more of an issue.
00:51:79 (10) - New combo?
00:55:21 (2,3,4) - Can you make the spacing look similar to 00:32:37 (1,2,3) ?
01:01:50 (1) - Remove the new combo and make the next circle a new combo?
01:02:07 (2) - This is the circle that should get the new combo treatment.
01:04:92 (1,2) - Move 1 left on Grid Level 3.
I didn't like some of the jumps on [Hard], but that's all right. I'm sure they look fine in the end.
Star. *
[Easy]:
Nothing particularly bad.
[Hard]:
00:11:34 (8) - Perhaps a new combo here?
00:48:93 (1) - I understand what Minyeob means by 'arrange them'. (1) is inconsistent with the zigzag pattern the rest of the circles are going through, making it look kind of ugly. I think it'll do by moving it 1 down on Grid Level 3. Even after this the zigzag still looks funny by the end. If you can, maybe do a whole revision of it? That's optional though. Moving (1) 1 down on Grid Level 3 is more of an issue.
00:51:79 (10) - New combo?
00:55:21 (2,3,4) - Can you make the spacing look similar to 00:32:37 (1,2,3) ?
01:01:50 (1) - Remove the new combo and make the next circle a new combo?
01:02:07 (2) - This is the circle that should get the new combo treatment.
01:04:92 (1,2) - Move 1 left on Grid Level 3.
I didn't like some of the jumps on [Hard], but that's all right. I'm sure they look fine in the end.
Star. *
Hello,
[Easy]
00:05:34 (3,4,5) - too much finish spam and the song is barely starting
00:44:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - combo too long considering the previous patterns
01:00:92 (8) - new combo, 01:02:07 (1) - undo new combo
01:34:83 (5) - new combo
[Hard]
00:03:34 (1) - undo new combo, 00:04:77 (4) - new combo
00:07:05 (1) - undo new combo, 00:08:20 (2) - new combo
00:09:91 (5) - new combo
00:11:62 (9) - new combo, undo new combo and snap
00:15:05 (7) - new combo, undo new combo
00:18:48 (3) - new combo, 00:19:05 (1) - undo new combo
00:33:80 (4) - new combo, 00:34:08 (1) - undo new combo
00:38:08 (1) - undo new combo, 00:39:79 (4) - new combo
00:40:65 (7) - new combo, 00:40:93 (1) - undo new combo
00:42:51 (1) - undo new combo, 00:43:22 (3) - new combo, 00:44:36 (1) - undo new combo, 00:44:93 (2) - new combo
00:40:93 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - after this, if i am to listen one more cymbal in your beatmap, i would quit it, pls dont use these many finish spams k?
00:50:36 (1,2,3,4) - this combo pattern here differs from the previous one. If you wanted to make them both alike, then copy paste. These beats here 00:48:93 (1,2,3,4,5) - are more inclined to the right
00:51:79 (5) - new combo
00:56:36 (1) - place on top of fading (1)
00:58:07 (5) - new combo and snap
01:00:92 (6) - new combo, 01:02:07 (1) - undo new combo and snap
01:05:49 (2) - maybe instead of just a beat go with a returning arrow slider
01:21:12 (1) - undo new combo
Relaxing map, i liked it.
[Easy]
00:05:34 (3,4,5) - too much finish spam and the song is barely starting
00:44:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - combo too long considering the previous patterns
01:00:92 (8) - new combo, 01:02:07 (1) - undo new combo
01:34:83 (5) - new combo
[Hard]
00:03:34 (1) - undo new combo, 00:04:77 (4) - new combo
00:07:05 (1) - undo new combo, 00:08:20 (2) - new combo
00:09:91 (5) - new combo
00:11:62 (9) - new combo, undo new combo and snap
00:15:05 (7) - new combo, undo new combo
00:18:48 (3) - new combo, 00:19:05 (1) - undo new combo
00:33:80 (4) - new combo, 00:34:08 (1) - undo new combo
00:38:08 (1) - undo new combo, 00:39:79 (4) - new combo
00:40:65 (7) - new combo, 00:40:93 (1) - undo new combo
00:42:51 (1) - undo new combo, 00:43:22 (3) - new combo, 00:44:36 (1) - undo new combo, 00:44:93 (2) - new combo
00:40:93 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - after this, if i am to listen one more cymbal in your beatmap, i would quit it, pls dont use these many finish spams k?
00:50:36 (1,2,3,4) - this combo pattern here differs from the previous one. If you wanted to make them both alike, then copy paste. These beats here 00:48:93 (1,2,3,4,5) - are more inclined to the right
00:51:79 (5) - new combo
00:56:36 (1) - place on top of fading (1)
00:58:07 (5) - new combo and snap
01:00:92 (6) - new combo, 01:02:07 (1) - undo new combo and snap
01:05:49 (2) - maybe instead of just a beat go with a returning arrow slider
01:21:12 (1) - undo new combo
Relaxing map, i liked it.
Topic Starter
00:40:93 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - after this, if i am to listen one more cymbal in your beatmap, i would quit it, pls dont use these many finish spams k?ack! that's what I get for not editing with default skin
Listen to the same part in Ouendan2 skin, those are not supposed to be cymbals, but bass drums.
I am a bit preoccupied today (and tomorrow), but once I get some time I'll properly update the map with your modding (thank you!) and develop a custom sound set for the map so this doesn't happen again.
sorry,my English is poor-.-
[Easy]
00:46:080(4) - a small problem(use distance snap)
[Hard]
00:03:345(4) - distance snap
00:12:197(1) - ^
00:32:373(1) - ^
00:46:651(5,6) - ^
00:50:363(1,2,3,4) - ^
all distance problem |o|
a nice map,+star
(but I don't like the hitsound)
[Easy]
00:46:080(4) - a small problem(use distance snap)
[Hard]
00:03:345(4) - distance snap
00:12:197(1) - ^
00:32:373(1) - ^
00:46:651(5,6) - ^
00:50:363(1,2,3,4) - ^
all distance problem |o|
a nice map,+star
(but I don't like the hitsound)
Topic Starter
I want to keep the jumps at 00:12:197(1) and 00:32:373(1). Other distance issues have been dealt with. Thank you.
As for the sound, I'm still searching for better SFX, but cannot come up with much.
As for the sound, I'm still searching for better SFX, but cannot come up with much.
that's all right
some suitable jump is necessary ^_^
some suitable jump is necessary ^_^
the rhythm and the sound are pleasant.
I like this map! ☆彡
I like this map! ☆彡
Topic Starter
bump...
anyone for comment?
anyone for comment?
I`m poor english.sorry if wrong in the ward.
hitsound...well.
this tune is a still tune. I occasionally hear hitsound soft-clap a little energetically.
How about the change of the place of soft-clap to soft-whistle or soft-normal?
Example: Hard
00:03:345 soft-normal
00:04:487 soft-whistle
00:04:773 soft-normal
00:05:058 soft-whistle
00:09:913 (3) soft-normal -> soft-normal -> soft-whistle
00:11:626 soft-whistle
00:12:769 (3) soft-normal -> soft-normal -> soft-whistle
soft-hitfinish(taiko sound!?)
I occasionally hear a little energetically.
00:21:621 lower the volume,about two stages?
but... I`m beginner.
if it is strange,sry ^^:
hitsound...well.
this tune is a still tune. I occasionally hear hitsound soft-clap a little energetically.
How about the change of the place of soft-clap to soft-whistle or soft-normal?
Example: Hard
00:03:345 soft-normal
00:04:487 soft-whistle
00:04:773 soft-normal
00:05:058 soft-whistle
00:09:913 (3) soft-normal -> soft-normal -> soft-whistle
00:11:626 soft-whistle
00:12:769 (3) soft-normal -> soft-normal -> soft-whistle
soft-hitfinish(taiko sound!?)
I occasionally hear a little energetically.
00:21:621 lower the volume,about two stages?
but... I`m beginner.
if it is strange,sry ^^:
Topic Starter
英語をありがとうございます！ お上手ですね
Your English is very good!
Thank you for modding!
I will update the map tomorrow with new hitsounds.
Your English is very good!
Thank you for modding!
I will update the map tomorrow with new hitsounds.
[Easy]
00:36:37 (3) - doesnt quite flow from 2
00:34:08 (1,2) - finish here?
01:03:21 (5) - finish
01:04:92 (4) - ^
01:29:69 (5,1) - ^
[Hard]
00:34:08 (1) - finish?
00:42:51 (6) - remove whistle
01:03:21 (2) - finish
01:04:92 (1) - ^
01:12:35 (1) - end 1/2 earlier and remove whistle
call me back when youre done and ill remod
00:36:37 (3) - doesnt quite flow from 2
00:34:08 (1,2) - finish here?
01:03:21 (5) - finish
01:04:92 (4) - ^
01:29:69 (5,1) - ^
[Hard]
00:34:08 (1) - finish?
00:42:51 (6) - remove whistle
01:03:21 (2) - finish
01:04:92 (1) - ^
01:12:35 (1) - end 1/2 earlier and remove whistle
call me back when youre done and ill remod
Topic Starter
All fixed up. Thanks SFG.
Nice and soothing song 
Didn't found anything wrong with it
Star~
Didn't found anything wrong with it
Star~
Niiice map
i love Kajiura Yuki's songs n///n
star
i love Kajiura Yuki's songs n///n
star
Topic Starter
edited the sounds some more and put some clap back in (I really feel it improves the sound).