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Crazy Jay

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Crazy Jay 2009-02-08T15:16:44+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年2月25日星期三 at 22:37:41

Artist: Line
Title: Forever The Ottoman
Source: Tiga Ottoman
BPM: 130
Filesize: 3265kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.06 stars, 90 notes)
Hard (4.45 stars, 324 notes)
Normal (3.1 stars, 218 notes)

Download: Line - Forever The Ottoman
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ottoman -.-
Edit:fixed after a discussion in #Chinese
Edit:changed HP setting
Edit:fixed some problems in [Normal]&[Hard]
Edit:improved overrall difficulty in [Hard]
Edit:fixed snap in [Normal]
uploaded the lost [hard]

Last edited by Crazy Jay 2009-02-25T14:38:25+00:00, edited 7 times in total.

mtmcl

mtmcl 2009-02-22T03:07:06+00:00

Oh wow! This is pretty good. The timing seems fine to me. The spacing is very safe, but the patterns and playability stay refreshing, keeping the map fun regardless of the pretty strict spacing.

Let's see... You've got a background image. Score cap isn't too high. You have hitsounds. Nothing is pushed to any ridiculous extremes. The preview point is in a pretty potent place.

My only question would be whether you want to increase the difficulty settings for [Hard] in any way? In their current place, they're all centered. Since your [Hard] is closer to normal than insane, I figured you might want to turn up the difficulty settings. That's really your own choice though, and I'm willing to approve either way.

In short, have a bubble and choose to do what you wish about the difficulty settings. This is a great map!

peppy

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peppy 2009-02-22T03:48:55+00:00

Please upload again. One of your difficulties is missing from the server-side map.

Crazy Jay

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Crazy Jay 2009-02-22T03:52:52+00:00

uploaded.
Thanks for your warning

peppy

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peppy 2009-02-22T04:02:40+00:00

Normal:
00:24:07 (2,3) - don't overlap these please - a bit hard to follow.
00:40:92 (8,9,10) - please snap these to the white tick to the right. i'm not sure if you did this to match the vocals, but its better you don't do it.

Hard:
01:13:69 (9,1) - this overlap looks a bit ugly. could you move the circle off the slider somehow?

I really like these maps - very well planned and nicely flowing

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Crazy Jay

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Crazy Jay 2009-02-22T04:14:53+00:00

Thanks for your advice.
fixed

Mogsy

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Mogsy 2009-02-22T04:21:48+00:00

I'm with mtmcl on this one, how would you like to maybe edit the difficulty settings on Hard? To give it a bit more of a challenge? In this case, we'll leave this up to you.

Crazy Jay

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Crazy Jay 2009-02-22T04:27:18+00:00

I see.
improved overrall difficulty in [Hard]
maybe it will seemed to be better now

peppy

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peppy 2009-02-22T04:34:48+00:00

normal:
00:41:50 (10) - still needs to be snapped to red tick (right).

Crazy Jay

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Crazy Jay 2009-02-22T04:38:44+00:00

fixed
I think the singer sang a bit quick in this part -.-

Dakeyrus

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Dakeyrus 2009-02-22T18:31:32+00:00

I think you're going to have to do another full submission with this one, Hard didn't show up when I downloaded it.

Easy and Normal check out now, get hard up and I'll mod it and go from there

Crazy Jay

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Crazy Jay 2009-02-25T14:50:21+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Echo

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Echo 2009-02-28T03:19:00+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.