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Natasha Bedingfield - Unwritten

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Hitoshirenu Shourai
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, February 22, 2009 at 12:06:04 AM

Artist: Natasha Bedingfield
Title: Unwritten
BPM: 100
Filesize: 6184kb
Play Time: 02:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.88 stars, 420 notes)
  2. Normal (4.3 stars, 266 notes)
Download: Natasha Bedingfield - Unwritten
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Normal mode: COMPLETE!

Hard mode: COMPLETE!

If this map seems different from my normal mapping, that's because it IS. The beat placement on the timeline, for me, is how I sing along to the song when I don't feel like using words. Sorry if it doesn't make sense. >_>

Also, I'm wondering if I should just map it to the end? Or maybe include a Long-Mode version or something. I dunno. The song itself is best in the last part anyways, so I encourage people to at least listen to the end. ^^;;

Keep checking time, btw~

EDIT: Hitsounds added. Or rather, more hit sounds added.
EDIT: Small changes. Noticable? Dunno.
EDIT: m980 fixes. Perfect-o IMO. Rankz plawcks.
EDIT: Lowered hitsound volume by LuigiHann's request.
Edit: Larto fixes.
Edit: Larto un-fixes. >_>;;
Edit: Pasonia pointed out some possibly "too short" spinners. I extended those by 1/4 beat, and auto says 3k bonus in test mode. Should be perfectly 300able for most players.
Edit: Various changes, offset was a bit late and stuff. Rawr.

Edit: Slight timing change.
Last edited by Hitoshirenu Shourai , edited 8 times in total.
m980
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Okaaaay

Normal
01:04:32 (3) - Is a slider that goes for 0ms? Change it to a hitcircle.
01:07:62 (4,5) - Move over to the right abit.


Hard
00:38:37 (7) - This will throw people off..

Some stuff about ugliness that you probably don't care about
00:48:87 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Wow.. I'd make all the beats overlap sliiiightly.
00:58:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Ditto
01:56:06 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Pick overlap sliightly or no touchy. Stick with it.
02:15:56 (2,3) - Messiness = Bad

Timing = Right? (BPM & Offset and stuff) I'm not sure. I can't tell.. <.<"

Starrrrrrr
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Fixed.
Larto
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Larto
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Fixed.
Larto
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Yeah I think I can bubble this don't punch me.

*removes bubble again* I just suck at timing, foulcoon just proved that -_-

Get your old timing back. (120,02/2.680)
foulcoon
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yay!

My accuracy is a bit weird, the old timing worked better for me i think. Overall the map is pretty sweet ;P
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Un-Fixed. >_>;;
Pasonia
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Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Pasonia wrote:

Normal

Spacing nazi at work tells me that...
00:15:87 (1,2,3,4) - is slightly unevenly spaced. Accelerating spacing?
00:38:67 (6,7,8,9) - Spacing too? Or is it my eyes playing tricks on me?
00:55:92 (1,1) - These two spinners are hard to 300 for the human player, because it's not something auto can 300+2000 bonus with. I personally think that the spinners are too short.

I st'ed because it occured to me that the spacing is somewhat consistent. I have to assume that you haven't used DS, hence the "perceived" errors.
I do use distance spacing except on certain sections where, while not being equidistant from previous spacing areas, have a special meaning. FOr example, for the section in hard's "feel the rain on your skin" i use custom spacing that's visual appealing, yet still SSable.

And for the record, I checked the spinners, and I swear they were 2k with auto. I'll look again later, but yeah, that's my input.

PS: On the map of Hard, I used 1.0 spacing and 1.5 except in custom instances. For the formation to the words "reaching" and "distance", I believe, I used 1.5 to make it seem like you're reaching along with the song. >_>

P.P.S.: Just noticed you only looked at Normal mode. XD Disregard statements about hard mode if you don't feel like reading.

Edit: Lengthened the spinners in question.
Jarby
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Jarby
(Unorganized) OPINIONS INCOMING: You don't need to follow them.

The hitsound volume is just a bit too high, especially for the amount of the hitsounds you're using.
Normal 00:37:77 (4) - The pause from the other stacked circles is too confused for a Normal difficulty. This happens at other times as well.
Raise the HP Drain on both difficulties.
Hard 00:39:42 (1,2) - I don't like these tiny combos.
00:55:62 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1) - I don't like these either.
01:03:27 - This section, too.
02:16:61 (1,1,1,1) - Especially this section.
And the rest. You know where they are. If you're going to keep them, raise the HP Drain even more.
Normal 01:09:72 (1) - This sounds better if you move the start 1/4 ahead.
Normal 02:35:06 (1) - As above, move it 1/4 ahead.
The_Priest_In_Yellow
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The_Priest_In_Yellow
This is pretty damn awesome.

Just a few questions concerning Normal:
01:07:622 (4) | This and the ones like it feel just a tad late, but that's probably due to the song not being rigid bpm-wise (at least it feels that way).
02:27:112 (2,1) | This spacing (change?) feels a tad sudden, but if that's the way you want it I can't argue with it. Just might have a learning curve that's all.

Didn't really have any other quarrel with it, Good Job ^^
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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awp
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idk you asked, and I'm hearing a BPM of straight up 100.00 and an offset around 2669 - the thing is, the bass beat on every first and third beat is slightly off-beat when the snare beat is lined with the second and fourth beat. Since the snare has a more specific snap to it I went with that.
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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I'll use the 100 BPM, but the offset works better as is (2675) since vocals are slightly after the beat you timed to. When I listen to it with your offset, it sounds like it's just "off" a bit, but at 2675, the beats seam more in-sync. In terms of playing, I believe most people play to the vocals if they can, and use the background bass as a reference. But what do I know, I don't really play much anymore. XD

ANYWAYS, I'ma leave offset at 2675 and put BPM at 100 flat. We'll see how it is. *waves for the waiter* Check, please!
m980
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I find.. No faults
kingcobra52
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Awesome job, Hito.

Ranked. :)
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