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Silver spirit(TV) - The silver sky

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al2e10
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年3月7日 at 上午 09:02:12

Artist: Silver spirit(TV)
Title: The silver sky
BPM: 94.12
Filesize: 5488kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Silver@Ease (3.29 stars, 135 notes)
  2. Silver@Hard (4.37 stars, 359 notes)
  3. Silver@Insane!! (4.77 stars, 318 notes)
Download: Silver spirit(TV) - The silver sky
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Topic Starter
al2e10
Can some one give me some opinion??
Topic Starter
al2e10
Can someone give me some opinion??
foLn
Cant find anything really bad. Anyway, I suck at modding lol(gotta look closer later). just played one difficulty yet. But I gotta say the SB moving picture at 00:30:921 looks awfull. :x sorry. you should make the edges transparent or so. if i had my photoshop installed i would do for you. sry. ill maybe do later but dont havetime yet.
Topic Starter
al2e10
Thank your opinion^^

I have cjange it^^

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Topic Starter
al2e10
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
FolkFolk
Hi.

The spacing in your beatmap is impeccable. The intuition of timing, however, has some minor flaws. I'll assume that you know how to use the distance lock function of the editor.

[Silver@Ease]
01:04:867 (1) - move this slider 1/4 beat to the right; adjust the spacing between notes accordingly

[Silver@Hard]
00:15:462 (2) - move this slider 1/4 beat to the right; adjust the spacing between notes accordingly
00:24:539 (3, 4) - move both circles by 1/4 beat to the left; adjust the spacing between notes accordingly
01:05:026 (4) - shorten the length of this slider by 1/4 beat, then moe the slide 1/4 beat to the right; adjust the spacing between notes accordingly
01:58:485 (5) - move this circle 1/4 beat to the right; adjust the spacing between notes accordingly

[Silver@Insane!!]
00:15:462 (2) - move this slider 1/4 beat to the right; optionally, shorten the slider by 1/4 beat; adjust the spacing between notes accordingly
01:20:963 (7) - move this circle 1/4 beat to the right OR add another circle to the blue ticker to its right; adjust the spacing between notes accordingly
01:21:760 (9) - move this slider 1/4 beat to the right; adjust the spacing between notes accordingly
02:28:377 - insert a break here
02:43:305 - I assume you're not yet done with this difficulty?

[All?]
Use 2 or 4 slider tick rate (I prefer 2.)

These observations are based solely on MY intuition. Don't be surprised if other modders suggest something else altogether.
Topic Starter
al2e10
Thank you for you opinion!!

You are so impeccable too!! :lol:

Plase talk a look agian~

If I have some mistaken please tall me^^
FolkFolk
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
al2e10
Thank you !!
I have change your aspects.
^^
TheRagnarok
General:
* I know NOTHING about editing the spinner image...but could you make it so it doesn't 'wobble' when it spins?
* At 00:30:921, you have an image that pops out of nowhere and moves offscreen. 1st: Consider using the fade-in tool so that it doesn't pop in so suddenly. 2nd: This storyboard is short and trivial. If you want to storyboard, make it involve most of your map. Either delete it, or expand it (recommended).

[Silver@Ease]
* 00:06:378 (2) - This beat is odd with the music...either shift it right 1/4 in time (blue tick), or replace with slider that lasts for 1/4.
* 00:08:928 (2) - Same thing here
* 00:19:287 (4, 5) - ...I don't agree with these sliders...my recommendation: shorten (4) by 1/4, shift (5) left 1/4, shorten (5) by 1/4...and add a beat at 00:20:721. Your call here.
* 00:41:121 (1) - Shorten by 1/4
* 01:04:867 (1) - Shift right 1/4 and shorten by 1/4
* 01:11:720 (1) - Consider lengthening slider by 1/4
* 01:22:876 (2) - See first two comments

[Silver@Hard]
* 00:24:387 (3) - Shift entire slider left by 1/4
* 00:39:367 (1, 2) - Shift both of these right by 1/4
* 00:41:439 (2) - Shift right by 1/4 and shorten by 1/4
* 00:49:408 - Hm...you may want to place a beat here...for music's sake ^_^
* 00:52:755 (5) - Slide should by shifted right...by 1/8 (yellow tick) and shortened by 1/8
* 01:49:331 - Maybe put beat here too? Under the stack?
* 02:12:759 (3) - Shorten by 1/4

[Silver@Insane!!]
Huh...why is your hardest map shorter than [Silver@Hard]? Traditionally, this map should be at least as long as the last one. It's your call, but you may want to add to this.
* 00:15:462 (2) - Shift slider right 1/4 and shorten 1/4...and maybe place a beat where the slider used to be
* 00:22:952 (spinner) - shorten by 1/4
* 00:49:567 (1) - Shift right 1/4
* 01:21:760 (2) - Shft entire slider right 1/4

Managed to get this done faster than I thought! :)

Your spacing is pretty much spot on, so there's nothing to say about that. In terms of beat placement, I think you were trying to keep them in sync with the lyrics (and guitar when there were none). You did good, but you missed in a few spots, as described above.

One thing to keep in mind: this is a relatively fast song, yet your timing (while correct I think) is half as fast as I would put it. You don't need to change it, but you may find it easier to map in the future to match the timing with the general song tempo.

I'll try to keep an eye on this. If you address my suggestions, I'll fork over a star! Who doesn't want one of those, eh? :D
Topic Starter
al2e10
Thank you!!

I have change it !!

Can you find the thing I have not change??
TheRagnarok
That spinner image still wobbles...let me just warn you that BAT's may not like this. Try to fix it if you can.
That and I really want to stress either deleting the storyboard image or adding to it. It doesn't do anything for your map as of now.

Otherwise, looks like you made most of the changes...good! But you fell into the TRAP! :o You forgot to distance snap all your changes! I listed what needs to be resnapped (plus some other comments) below:

[Silver@Ease]
* 00:07:971 (1) - Needs further distance spacing from last note
* 00:19:127 (3) - ^
* 00:41:121 (1) - I might still recommend you shorten this by 1/4...makes more sense to me...did you intend to not change this?
* 01:05:026 (1) - Space farther
* 01:13:075 (2) - ^
* 01:21:920 (1) - ^

[Silver@Hard]
* 00:39:367 (1) - Should shift right 1/4. Don't forget to space!
* 00:41:599 (2) - More spacing
* 00:52:914 (5) - ^

[Silver@Insane!!]
* 00:22:952 (spinner) - I still recommend shortening by 1/4
* 00:49:886 (2) - Space closer
* 01:21:601 (1, 2, 3) - Distance snap these, and try to get (1) from overlapping the slider

I know I said I'll star this after changes were made, but you really need to space your changes. Do this, and THEN I'll throw a star! :P
Topic Starter
al2e10
I have change!!

Thank you~TheRagnarok
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