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Lindsey Stirling - Elements

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Topic Starter
Poggo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 1 января 2013 г. at 19:52:49

Artist: Lindsey Stirling
Title: Elements
Tags: violin dubstep Lizellota KersiTyan
BPM: 140
Filesize: 5094kb
Play Time: 03:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Earth (3,37 stars, 296 notes)
  2. Fire (4,98 stars, 606 notes)
  3. Lize's Air (1,34 stars, 160 notes)
  4. Water (4,72 stars, 434 notes)
Download: Lindsey Stirling - Elements
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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<3 <3 <3

Very big thanks to all for help <3
mikuo2012
Awesome beatmap! :) :) :)
Try this hitsounds ;) : http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?g49tjse5erm8ag1
Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thx but My hitsounds I prefer~
GamerX4life
Awesome as always! Star~
Topic Starter
Poggo

GamerX4life wrote:

Awesome as always! Star~

Thank you ^^
Lizellota
Ryafuka
as per your m4m request
let me see~

[General]
"Leze's Air" has missing "SliderBorder : 255,255,255". http://puu.sh/1i95j
(I don't know that this is unrankable.. However, it would be better if it is unified.)

[Lize's Air]
I found some unnecessary greenline. please remove these,if my suggest are correct.
SPOILER
00:58:050 -
00:58:585 -
01:00:193 -
01:00:300 -
01:55:050 -
01:55:157 -
02:04:907 -
02:47:764 -
00:48:621 (2) - Can you move to (x:244 y:264) to be vertical?
01:07:050 (1,2,3) - hmm..Can you try this? http://puu.sh/1i9gf I think,it will be better than now :)
01:11:335 - Add note and clap here?
01:24:621 (1,2) - This spacing is too high.You should fix to 0.9
01:36:193 (4) - 1 grid right?
02:16:050 (4) - Add note and clap here?
03:09:621 - ^
03:11:764 (3) - remove finish from end?
03:18:621 (3) - ^

[Earth]
some unnecessary greenline like "Lize's Air"
SPOILER
00:58:050 -
01:09:193 -
01:09:621 -
02:17:764 -
02:18:193 -
02:31:478 -
02:31:907 -
02:32:335 -
03:07:478 -
03:07:907 -
00:36:193 (3) - Can you move to (x:128 y:172) to be vertical?
00:55:050 (1,1) - Probably,this is your normal degree of difficulty I guess. So maybe,from the end of the spinner, the distance to the next circle is too large..
01:07:050 (1,1) - ^
02:19:050 (1) - This slider has been hidden by spinner-osu. http://puu.sh/1i9rF
03:05:335 (1,1) - Same as 00:55:050 (1,1) - .

[Water]
00:21:407 (3) - Move to (x348 y:108),and 00:21:621 (4) - move to (x:292 y:168). It will be nicely triangle. It is a little issue,but I was noticed :<
01:43:907 (7,8) - Need resnap slider.

[Fire]
00:23:978 (12) - Move to (y:140) for symmetry of 7?
02:23:764 (12) - Add new combo here?


sorry short mod,but I can't find anymore :<
good luck~
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thank you for mod~ fixed almost all~
Nichiyouki
Hi, Katty Pie

My mod from M4M request in PM in-game

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. You have 2 .osb files. Please remove "Lindsey - Stirling (Katty Pie).osb" in folder.
  2. Lize's Air diff haven't SliderBorder. Please fix it to look like other diff by this in notepad.
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,150,0
    Combo2 : 134,192,24
    Combo3 : 33,221,254
    Combo4 : 167,108,1
    SliderBorder : 255,255,255

Lize's Air

  1. 01:08:764 (1) - Spinner is too short for this diff. I suggest that start spinner at 01:07:050. (replace (1,2).)
  2. 02:19:907 - I hear the rhythm here. So add a circle.

Earth

  1. 00:37:478 (5) - Move to up 1 grid?
  2. 00:49:050 (3) - Add clap here, because I hear the rhythm.

Water

  1. 00:40:264 (9) - Change whistle is clap in slider end, because I hear the rhythm.
  2. 02:05:335 (1) - Add NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
  3. 02:58:265 (4) - Remove finish here.

Fire

  1. 00:19:907 (8,9,10) - It is too far, although it has in this diff. Please reduce spacing, or if you don't change it, add NC in (8) be better.
  2. 00:40:478 (9) - Add clap here, because I hear the rhythm.
  3. 00:54:192 (8) - ^
  4. 01:49:907 (5) - Move slider last point to down 1 grid be more bueatifull.
  5. 02:05:335 (1) - Add NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
  6. 03:27:621 (7,9) - Try make slider (7) is similar with slider (9), or slider (9) is similar with slider (7). So that they're symmetrical.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~
KokoroStudiox3
hi c:

Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Earth] :
Combo1 : 255,150,0
Combo2 : 134,192,24
Combo3 : 33,221,254
Combo4 : 167,108,1
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

- [Fire] :
Combo1 : 255,150,0
Combo2 : 134,192,24
Combo3 : 33,221,254
Combo4 : 167,108,1
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

- [Lize's Air] :
Combo1 : 255,150,0
Combo2 : 134,192,24
Combo3 : 33,221,254
Combo4 : 167,108,1

- [Water] :
Combo1 : 255,150,0
Combo2 : 134,192,24
Combo3 : 33,221,254
Combo4 : 167,108,1
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

[water]
01:00:192 (1) new combo ?
01:15:621 (7) if you apply the above for consistency
01:22:478 (7) ^
01:29:335 (7) -^
01:36:192 (7) -^
and so in similar patterns
but they are only suggestions the map seems perfect
i really like the song :)
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thx guys~ Fixed some~ :P :P :P
riffy
Hey! I think you need to update your Creator's Word

do it this way o3o

Fire - Easy -100%
Water - Normal - 100%

^ so we will know how to judje your mapset :)

Good luck. no kd, ofc
Lizellota
um.... http://puu.sh/1koW7

give to him kd D:
Topic Starter
Poggo
Updated~
riffy
Alright! Here's star. Not sure if mood soon or won't mod at all. \:D/
Flower
Hi~ M4M req~

[General]
Great SB!
Delete Epilepsy Warning because The map does not contain rapid strobing. Only one flicker in every four stanza does not make anyone feel uncomfortable. (If you insist you can keep the warning)

[Lizellota]
00:10:478 (1) - The lead-in crescendo noise starts at 00:11:764 , so imo, the spinner here does not represent any rhythm but only makes it not looking too empty. Therefore, I think it't better to remove this spinner and add a break here.
00:53:764 (2) - Not quite symmetric.
208,188,53764,2,0,B|256:176|256:176|306:188,2,100
01:08:764 (1) - Sampleset Normal, Addition Soft
01:28:907 (3) - This overlap does not fit in Easy. Suggestion: delete, and only add one note at 01:29:335
01:49:050 (1,2) - Not symmetric to the center. (You can choose not to change but it does not hurt if you make it like this :3)
156,280,109050,6,0,B|360:280,1,200
356,100,110764,2,0,B|152:100,1,200,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
02:05:335 (1) - Not quite symmetric.
158,102,125335,6,0,B|256:83|256:83|354:102,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
02:12:193 (4) - Unrankable reverse arrow overlap.

[Earth]
00:04:478 (1) - It doesn't hurt if you make the slider look better.
312,32,4478,2,2,B|382:9|426:97|382:185|310:161,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:06:621 (1) - Hmm I don;t like the slider. It is even better if you make it a spinner.
00:10:478 (1) - Same reason as Easy. Remove and add a break.
00:29:978 (4) - Remove whistle and add whistle at 00:29:764 (I think this sounds better but you make the choice)
01:20:335 (8,1) - Switch NC?
02:46:264 (7) - The stack is almost unable to be read. I prefer to remove this note since deleting it does not affect following the rhythm.
02:46:478 (1) - Better make it more symmetric.
256,164,166478,6,0,B|278:74|404:72|432:164,2,240,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
03:05:335 (1) - imo it is better to end it at 03:08:121 (up to you)

[Water]
00:21:621 (4) - Make it to x=276,y=152 or x=296,y=172 to make a triangle?
00:26:335 (6,7,8,9,10) - Make a pentagon?
00:34:050 (8,2) - The shape is too "restrained" I think .
SPOILER

For 00:34:050 (8) :
420,148,34050,2,0,B|396:108|352:104|308:108|284:148,2,160,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:35:121 (1,2) - Switch NC since it is better to highlight the clap.
00:48:728 (2,3,4,5) - DS is to large I think. Make it to x0/7 or x0.8 I think.
01:14:764 (3,4,5,6) - May not suit this diff. Make it to a single kick slider is better.
01:21:621 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:28:478 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:35:335 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:37:907 (1) - The shape

[Fire]
00:06:621 (1) - Make better shape
SPOILER

(2 is only added as reference to show the shape)
244,280,6621,6,0,B|312:312|392:276|408:200|392:116|308:80|204:100|204:212,1,450,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:15:407 - Maybe you can add a note here, but it is totally up to your preference.
00:22:907 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Used Ctrl+D to make a polygon shape.
01:10:478 (1) - Sampleset Normal, Addition Soft
01:33:621 (13) - Make all three node add clap
01:46:693 (2) - Better keep the syncopated rhythm. Move to 01:46:800
03:00:193 (1) - End with S:C2 whistle
03:34:478 (7) - Shape

Hope you get ranked soon!
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Lizellota
Chyo-Kun
Mod requested by Katty :3

[General]

The color that you use use are too similar to each other,it's better to use a kind of red on the third color:



(Tone:0 Saturation: 240 Brightness:144 Red:255 Green:51 Blue:51)

The BG should be resized to 1024x768

The MP3 should be 192kbps


[Lize's Air]

01:07:050 (1,2) - Make those two sliders like this



This follow a lot bettet the music in my opinion,and it's till easy enough to be in a easy diff

02:31:050 (1) - Add finish at the end of the spinner

[Earth]

00:22:907 (4) - Add NC
00:26:335 (4) - ^
01:19:050 (5) - ^
02:58:478 (4) - ^
03:41:335 (6) - ^
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thank you for mod~ added 1 finish on easy~
Suimya
Mod4Mod :3

General:
  1. Add "KersiTyan" to the tags since Lizellota changed name~

Lize's Air:
  1. 00:19:050 (1) - I think it'll be better if you remove the revers and add a circle here 00:20:764 (2) - instead~
  2. 00:43:050 (3) - the current slider looks a bit bad, maybe do something like this ?
  3. 00:44:764 (1) - ^
  4. 00:48:193 (1) - i dont think whistle needed here. So remove it ><
  5. 00:49:907 (1) - make a nice curve plz, like this ?
  6. 01:07:050 (1) - move it a bit up so i dont touch the 01:05:764 (2) -
  7. 01:13:907 (4) - nc here because the combo here went longer~
  8. 01:19:907 (3) - maybe do something like this ? straight sliders are a bit boring >.<
  9. 01:40:478 (3) - maybe do the points like this ? so it will curve better with the other slider~
  10. 01:49:050 (1) - dont use overlap on easy diff orz~ fix this~
  11. 02:12:193 (4) - this revert is unrankable ~~
  12. 03:30:621 (2) - plz use curve slider here >.<
This diff really need more work on sliders shapes


Earth:
Nice diff :3 good work~


Water:
  1. 00:26:335 (6,7,8,9,10) - i dont really like those placement >< maybe change it to a star pattern :3
  2. 00:39:621 (7) - add nc here since the combo went too long here~
  3. 01:14:764 (3,4,5,6) - i dont think those sliders fit for a hard diff..... really orz~
  4. 01:21:621 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  5. 01:28:478 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  6. 01:29:335 (7) - add a nc here same reason what i said here 00:39:621 (7)
  7. 01:35:335 (3,4,5,6) - same what i said here 01:14:764 (3,4,5,6)

Fire:
  1. 00:17:764 (1,2,3) - make a better triangle plz~
  2. 00:19:050 (5,6,7) - ^
  3. 01:12:193 (9) - orz that nc is long >< so add nc here plz~
  4. 01:19:050 (9) - ^
  5. 01:25:907 (9) - ^
  6. 01:32:764 (9) - ^
  7. 03:10:478 (9) - ^
  8. 03:17:335 (9) - ^
  9. 03:24:193 (9) - ^
  10. 03:31:050 (9) - ^
other then that it's a great diff :3

That's all i can find >< good map and good luck with ranking~
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