Hi~ M4M req~
[General]
Great SB!
Delete Epilepsy Warning because The map does not contain rapid strobing. Only one flicker in every four stanza does not make anyone feel uncomfortable. (If you insist you can keep the warning)
[Lizellota]
00:10:478 (1) - The lead-in crescendo noise starts at 00:11:764 , so imo, the spinner here does not represent any rhythm but only makes it not looking too empty. Therefore, I think it't better to remove this spinner and add a break here.
00:53:764 (2) - Not quite symmetric.
208,188,53764,2,0,B|256:176|256:176|306:188,2,100
01:08:764 (1) - Sampleset Normal, Addition Soft
01:28:907 (3) - This overlap does not fit in Easy. Suggestion: delete, and only add one note at 01:29:335
01:49:050 (1,2) - Not symmetric to the center. (You can choose not to change but it does not hurt if you make it like this :3)
156,280,109050,6,0,B|360:280,1,200
356,100,110764,2,0,B|152:100,1,200,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
02:05:335 (1) - Not quite symmetric.
158,102,125335,6,0,B|256:83|256:83|354:102,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
02:12:193 (4) - Unrankable reverse arrow overlap.
[Earth]
00:04:478 (1) - It doesn't hurt if you make the slider look better.
312,32,4478,2,2,B|382:9|426:97|382:185|310:161,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:06:621 (1) - Hmm I don;t like the slider. It is even better if you make it a spinner.
00:10:478 (1) - Same reason as Easy. Remove and add a break.
00:29:978 (4) - Remove whistle and add whistle at 00:29:764 (I think this sounds better but you make the choice)
01:20:335 (8,1) - Switch NC?
02:46:264 (7) - The stack is almost unable to be read. I prefer to remove this note since deleting it does not affect following the rhythm.
02:46:478 (1) - Better make it more symmetric.
256,164,166478,6,0,B|278:74|404:72|432:164,2,240,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
03:05:335 (1) - imo it is better to end it at 03:08:121 (up to you)
[Water]
00:21:621 (4) - Make it to x=276,y=152 or x=296,y=172 to make a triangle?
00:26:335 (6,7,8,9,10) - Make a pentagon?
00:34:050 (8,2) - The shape is too "restrained" I think .
SPOILERFor 00:34:050 (8) :
420,148,34050,2,0,B|396:108|352:104|308:108|284:148,2,160,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:35:121 (1,2) - Switch NC since it is better to highlight the clap.
00:48:728 (2,3,4,5) - DS is to large I think. Make it to x0/7 or x0.8 I think.
01:14:764 (3,4,5,6) - May not suit this diff. Make it to a single kick slider is better.
01:21:621 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:28:478 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:35:335 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:37:907 (1) - The shape
[Fire]
00:06:621 (1) - Make better shape
SPOILER(2 is only added as reference to show the shape)
244,280,6621,6,0,B|312:312|392:276|408:200|392:116|308:80|204:100|204:212,1,450,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:15:407 - Maybe you can add a note here, but it is totally up to your preference.
00:22:907 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Used Ctrl+D to make a polygon shape.
01:10:478 (1) - Sampleset Normal, Addition Soft
01:33:621 (13) - Make all three node add clap
01:46:693 (2) - Better keep the syncopated rhythm. Move to 01:46:800
03:00:193 (1) - End with S:C2 whistle
03:34:478 (7) - Shape
Hope you get ranked soon!
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