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I'm not very good at getting offset right. 208 works better, a BAT can give you a better result.
All of the notes on blue ticks are off. Use 1/2 Beat Snap Divisor to solve this.
The notes are not properly spaced. Use the distance snap tool.
You've gotten the general idea of how to map, just go over it again with all of this in mind.

Have a comboburst. Place it in the folder of the song. Resize it if you want the whole picture to flash across the screen instead of just the face and middle body.

Thanks a lot for the feedback, will get on it right away. And cheers for the picture, will be awesome as comboburst.

EDIT: Done

Easy:

00:08:54 (2) - Remove one repeat and place 1/2 later.
00:09:37 (3) - 1/2 longer.
00:17:20 (1,2,3) - 1/2 later.
00:31:54 (6,7) - 1/2 later.
00:33:04 (1) - 1/2 later.
00:33:54 (2) - One more repeat.
00:40:87 (2,3) - 1/2 later.
00:41:54 (4) - One more repeat.
00:46:54 (1) - 1/2 later.
00:48:20 (1) - 1/2 later.
00:59:20 (4) - 1/2 earlier, 2 more repeats.
01:10:20 (1) - 1/2 later, 1/2 longer (or 1/2 shorter. Either work.)
01:11:54 (1) - 1/4 longer.
01:18:54 (2,3,4) - 1/2 later.

Normal:

00:09:87 (2,3) - Move these 1/2 later.
00:17:54 (2,3,4) - 1/2 later.
00:20:87 (4) - 1/4 longer.
01:10:20 (1,2,3) - Too confusing for a Normal difficulty.
00:28:04 (6,9) - Remove these.
00:47:87 (1) - 1/2 later.
00:52:70 (7) - 1/2 later.
01:15:87 (3) - 1/2 longer.


Make sure to redo spacing after changing them.

Fixed all the new problems you pointed out. Thanks a lot for the continued feedback!

01:01:541 - Go to Timing, and click Set Current Position as Preview. That will make a good preview for this song.

Please make a harder difficulty. There's so much more that could be done with this song. If you feel like you can't, well, that's okay.

Normal:
-00:08:87 (4) - I absolutely think that this slider does not fit.
-00:09:20 (1) - Nudge to the right 1/2 a beat.
-00:15:54 (1,2) - Respace, then line up 1 and 2 exactly. I think maybe reversing the positions of 1 and 2 would work (you know, placing 1 where 2 is and vice-versa).
-00:19:54 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:20:87 (4) - Add a New Combo mark here.
-00:21:37 (1) - Nudge to the right 1/2 a beat, then shorten by 1/2 a beat.
-00:23:20 (1) - Add a Clap and a Whistle onto this beat.
-00:33:04 (1) - Nudge to the right 1/4 a beat.
-00:35:87 (2,3) - Line up with 1's endpoint.
-00:44:20 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:46:54 (1,2,3,4) - Move this elsewhere, it looks messy as heck. Also, remove 2, stack 4 on 3, remove the repeat from 4, and extend 4 by 1/2 a beat.
-00:53:20 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Respace this part, it looks really messy the way it is now.
-00:55:54 (1) - Extend by 1/2 a beat and put a Finish on it.
-01:01:70 (2) - Nudge to the right 1/2 a beat, then stack 3 on it. Remember to respace after making these sort of changes.
-01:02:70 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark, extend by 1/4 a beat, respace.
-01:03:20 (2) - Stack on the endpoint of 1.
-01:04:20 (5) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:08:04 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-01:10:20 (1,2) - I don't like this at all. Fix this. I just feel like a repeating slider shouldn't go there.
-01:11:54 (1) - Extend by 1/4 a beat.
-01:22:04 (4) - I feel like a single clicked beat would do well here, the slider is just awkward.
-01:23:04 (2) - Same thing as 01:01:70 (2).
-01:28:37 (3) - Extend by 1/4 a beat, nudge to the right 1/2 a beat, respace.
-01:29:04 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-01:29:87 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:37:20 (3,4) - Change this, it looks awkward.
-01:38:20 (1,1) - Shorten both of these by 1/2 a beat.

Easy:
-00:21:20 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark (it's still part of the previous phrase), extend by 1/2 a beat. Do this by increasing the length of the lower arcing part of the slider.
-00:23:20 (1) - Respace after taking that last measure.
-00:33:54 (2) - This looks awkward, fix it.
-00:49:54 (3) - Repeat once more.
-01:03:87 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-01:04:20 (2) - Add a New Combo mark.
-01:31:54 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Seems kinda awkward for an Easy, doesn't it? Just wanting your input on this, I'm not going to tell you to fix anything on this.
-01:38:20 (1,1) - Oh god these spinners again. Shorten both of them by 1/2 a beat.
-01:52:20 (1) - Finish goes here.

Okay, you have quiite a bit of work to do.

Thanks a lot for the comments, Mogsworth! I simply followed your advice for the most part, though noted some unclear measures here.

Normal:
-00:08:87 (4) - Slider replaced with a single circle on the slider's starting position. Slider's end left blank.
-00:15:54 (1,2) - Simply had them swap positions.
-00:46:54 (1,2,3,4) - Moved and made into a different pattern.
-00:53:20 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Moved and made into a different pattern.
-01:10:20 (1,2) - Made into a non-repeating slider.
-01:37:20 (3,4) - 3 and 4 put along a straight line with the rest of the combo.
Also changed the location of the last five combos a little, still spaced the same though.

Easy:
-01:31:54 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Moved to the right so the previous beat isn't on top of them, also respaced.

And yeah, regarding a third difficulty, I tried somewhat but couldn't come up with many ways to make it harder. I suppose I'd have to follow the drums or some less obvious part of the song, and it just feels too difficult to pull off. Guess I need more experience. I would however invite anyone up for it to make a third difficulty.

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You are more than welcome to, although it doesn't seem like this beatmap will get much more attention unless someone promotes it. I'm too inexperienced to help others, so I can't promote it myself.

But if you feel like making a hard difficulty, please go ahead. The harder diffs of your earlier maps were great so I have faith in you. ^^

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